Reincarnated as a…?

Most likely. I have the option to switch to desktop version on my browser settings so it doesn’t read as mobile.

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I’d say give it a shot then.

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I just finished the wisp path and im about to try them all for their different perspective. I wanna say i love isekai genre so i hope u will continue this. Is this a side gig or u have the intention to make it a full story with alot of chapters? There isnt much isekai wip that are good or they just end up abandon so i hope this will keep going cuz theres alot of potential. Have a good day :smiley:

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I appreciate it and it’s a side thing but I want to see all my stories to completion honestly

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I’ll definitely try! Thanks!

Will I finished the game but I have some things to say

The game is very fast introducing a lot of things and people with little explaining I think it should take it’s time when introducing characters and such

For now this is my critique by the way I played as a dragon

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good luck.

Also advice from someone who has four irons in the fire:
Don’t start too many projects at once, they’ll eat your brain >:V

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I didnt know u had others stories, i just check so are they in the same universe or nah? Like: “Hand-Me-Downs”, “What Heroes Leave Behind” & “The Shadows Edge”. Il go read them all :+1:

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I like the starting choices, I also think the chapters are way too short, why not just putting everything on the same chapter? I also think the pace has to be improved, in less than 20 minutes you can read 5 chapters and get the first evolution, and I don’t think I saw a single skill check or I didn’t notice them.

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They are not in the same universe but enjoy!

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You have so many WIPs TT dunno which to choose

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Ah yes, I am now Rimuru

(I hope this doesnt end up like Super System: Monster Evolution)

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Start with the shadows edge. It’s the most complete one. Hand me downs is new

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I totally get that it hurts to be accused of putting slop out there because of an unintentional error. But bear in mind that our zealous AI watchdogs have the motivation you’re suggesting we all should: the desire to direct the forum’s uplifting feedback to actual creators rather than algorithms.

This thread has raised a few more people’s awareness of the forum rules on how to do that – don’t throw out public accusations, just flag it to staff. In the process, it also drew your attention to a mistake you didn’t even realize you’d made. That’s embarrassing, but ultimately constructive. We have to own our mistakes, even the unintentional ones; the tarnish from a genuinely unintended error should come off your name pretty fast.

Meanwhile, you’ve had one of the forum’s most vehemently anti-AI voices engaging you gently with helpful advice and encouragement. That bit feels pretty wholesome to me. :slight_smile:

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Well I appreciate you. I did take accountability for my mistake and it wasn’t the bringing awareness to it that drew my attention, it was the comment that was made, “AI Slop” is wild. I appreciate everyone else for helping me aware of my mistake because that was genuinely fair of them to do so. Knowledge is power.

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I don’t know what you mean by templates in this context and unfortunately can’t help you there, but I want to point out that ═ is one of the Unicode chars for box drawing. Making horizontal lines is literally what it’s for. If you like it, use it, and don’t let anyone tell you otherwise.

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Also if you’d like we could go through the code and list some of the coding errors/oddities?

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I hope u continue this, i dint read it yet, but just by being an isekai is on my watchlist, also, the more wips? The merrier, its one of my ways of practcing english xD

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I’m just curious, but is it wise to spread yourself thin and work on several projects at once together with Hand me downs? That one need a ton of polish and work, so going for two at once might just be detrimental to both considering how hard it is to make even one, especially when you are starting.

Just gonna say this as a reader, being an author doesn’t make you entitled to anything automatically. I’m not obligated to support or uplift anyone just because author is putting something out, this something can still be bad. I can point out things to improve, point out good or bad things, give personal impressions, but there is nothing i SHOULD do and i’m not here to uplift anyone. There is no point getting touchy over a comment or two after all, of course “AI slop” part could be articulated better but it is what it is.

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Okay you guys are right

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