I manage to get the NPC’s team picking options to work WOOT! 
I still have to code in the background stories and stat screen. I am heading back to the truck tomorrow and have a ton of school work to do so it will be five or six days before I can get back to steady writing. If you find any. bug, grammar, or have any suggestion. Please feel free to comment, thanks.
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Great concept there can never be too many supernatural, fantasy or zombie games. 
Time to unravel some typos, mistakes and suggestions
The hairstyle selected is spelled Chignon
Might wanna lose that ’ in Amber’
it should be You have been back - logged on your cases…(blahblahblah)
Also the final case name should be more badass like The Thornton Health Poltergeist or something else…
severe
strides up
I think it could be better said as What do you guys call it?.."activity"
especially from something that old
nest
IMO forces sounds better than hands
building
The dialogue could be better represented as :-
The thing is something beat 'em up…something real bad, my boys had bruises all over their bodies and they had to be taken to hospital immediately or something like that
The second paragraph could also use a bit twerks like:-
evacuate the area and steer clear of the building. It’ll ease up the spirits or some other stuff
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Hey!
I never have met the ghosts, but I just wonder. Do you have any good tips to the persons who meet the ghosts for the first time?
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Uh, as in real life or in game? If game I don’t really know for sure since I just play this and not the previous one. If you mean real life, just be chill about it and don’t fear it, they usually be cool if you also cool about it.
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In game, if a ghost, they are playfull. If other then ghost… run away hehe.
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Thanks for the awesome feedback will make those changes when I get back home in five days.
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Just one thing I want to say here (@Lordirish check your message for the rest):
I’d like to have more explanation about the consequences of this choice. Will two hours be too quick and I won’t have enough time to prepare, or six hours may be too late?
Oh and also: The Anti-Specter Society… The ASS… bahahahahaha 
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The time plays a role but would be a spoiler at this point. When I get a chance I will review the pm and thanks.
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Some typos:
Male teammates: Brawn is the only way to go
Your fault: Guilt over a priest’s death
Bad idea: Ignorance is not bliss
it’s so nice having so many choices even though I don’t know half of the body types and hair styles 
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Tinkering with the code for the back stories, hoping to have section two up by Friday night. So you will be able to pick your background and teammates then save. I will leave section one snd two open for all kinds of feedback as I work on section three, the office meeting. Once this is ready will close first two sections so I can begin the full edit process.
Want to thank you all for helping with bug finding and grammar problems. 
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OK I have five or six hours to write today, WOOT! Working on the back stories, and NPC’s specs and reactions to your opening option choices. I still need to work on the stat screen and save system as well if I have time. I may not get to the corrections for all the grammar until later this week. Right now sitting around 11K word count for the first two sections.
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It is a good creepy night to be writing. Down in my basement office and a raging thunder storm is rolling in. Nice creepy vibe 
Sadly it is getting late and I do have to move on to other projects such as homework for the next two days. I am hoping to have more time to write Friday. Made a decent dent into the backstories. I have Cop, Doctor, and Carpenter completed. Still have Plumber and Firefighter to go. Have the NPC adjustment scales fairly laid out but need to to code the other 12 NPC’s. There is a 14th NPC but they interact with you in a much different way lol… hint Easter egg. All the NPC’s are date-able with the exception of Father Mike. Of course not all NPC’s are attracted to you in the same way so you may not be able to date all of them in one try. Not sure if I will have section two up by Friday, if not will for sure have it up next week.
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Sounds amazing! But no School Teacher background? For shame!
And now I feel it is my obligatory duty to attempt to romance Father Mike. At least give the MC the chance to try 
and fail miserably haha.
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I could add a ton more of professions, but then I would never get the story written. Father Mike, lol good luck.
I would say I am three quarters of the way done with section two. I am pushing to have the updated done by the end of next weeek. After that it will be some time before section three will be ready. I have two tough classes this module that is going to take up 90% of my free time. I will be around to fix grammar and bug problems, but not really writing much.
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Sorry folks Real Life got in the way of writing. Heading back out to the truck tomorrow so will be 4 to 5 days before I get another chance to write.
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Interesting premise for a game. Good luck!
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Thank you. Progress is really slow right now but hoping to get back to it here in a week or so.
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Sorry college has me busy as heck so not been able to write for awhile. As soon as it slows down will be getting back to this.
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It has been a crazy two moths for me so have not had time to work this. I am going to try to get back to this in January after I have finished my efits of my novel and srnt off to the publisher. Take care all.
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