Thanks for the explanation , yeah pretty sure we just use BMIs here. Also when your child is 4 and your sister visits, found this typo "Lana gives you a wan smile. "She may " *warm
Also found a few gender pronoun errors, but I didn’t sleep well so…sorry, I’ll get them next time! Also I thought of a few choice suggestions, and remembered some of them . So being an abusive/neglectant parent is off the table, but more choices to be a “just whatever” parent could be good. Like during the scene when your child is playing on the tablet for ages a choice like dude, I used to game loads when I was a kid, so no issue or something like that.
Or during the bullying scene maybe a choice like Meh, it wasn’t serious, just try not to do it again.
Or well at least you weren’t the one being bullied
or you barely did anything, it’s Laura’s fault for not sticking up for herself, and Tiffanny’s fault for not teaching Laura to do so.