I am glad you find it interesting. And yea, Feldburg is not the most like-able person. He clearly has issues, and has developed a certain apathy for rabbits. But, I try to show in one ending that through high opinion of him you could become sort of the same image. Trying to bring more humanity to his total character.
I would love to continue this story after the lift is open, but that would break what this story has stood for… in a sense. I only labeled one ending as the true ending, because that would be the most relevant ending for a sequel. I would love to continue in this universe and develop more of the subtle points. For all purposes, this story is nothing more than a prequel for what is to come.
Also, I did see your silly ending. It would be nice and potentially even fit in, but as for the story in this one, I am more pointed to wrapping it up. Everything ends that I want to. If only so I could maybe start another. Also for spoilers it is: [ spoiler ][ /spoiler ]
eliminating the spaces.
Gotcha, thank you very much for telling me how to do that lol. I look forward to the sequel 
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Update: New link is here. I will post it here for now, until I regain topic OP editing.
http://dashingdon.com/play/BleuSquare/quantic-daydreams/mygame/
It is about 98-99% done. Just need to work out some smaller details. This version holds no real story add-ons. Just fixes typos, changes the stat screen. and gets rid of most of the testing text.
Current word count: 21683 - Including the ChoiceScript code.
The last few percent til 100% is just finalizing a title, and typos. I would continue work after it reaches 100%, like adding achievements if the demand was high enough. But I am about ready to start something new 
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