Project Ascension (WiP)

[lliiraanna]

Thanks for reporting. I’ll see what I can do!

Edit: okay, the first one is easy to fix. The second issue though will require a bit more time. Gods, the coding of this scene is a nightmare.

Edit 2: @Lowern @ApplePi I cut out the *gosub routine in there, so it should work now. Hopefully.

[Lowern]

When u choose Lucia option

It has an error

The rest options are okay

[lliiraanna]

Thanks <3 Fixed now!

[Akira]

@lliiraanna update was SOOOO GOOOOD!!! Ahhh I can’t get enough of Rufus You are amazing

[Avi]

Wahhhh, I love this WIP so much sjshdhdj

[Vilrek]

typos

All it takes is just a simple touch, who knew it’d be so easy? When it’s over. For some reason it appears without a space after easy

he steps ahead, and the air changes. Cap He

Lucia: dont worry were at it Emily looks up from the screen, its glow highlighting the frown on her face. Might want to put the Emily below a line to separate it from the text messages.

“And also to celebrate you-know-what yesterday”. A wink. I think the stop goes inside the quote

She huffs a little. “It’s just…” “No one ever takes me seriously.” Both quotes are by Val, so they could be just one.

You could say that thanks to Peribsen, we didn’t peribsh eh eh? I know where the door is. Also that last scene with the ROs <3
“Hey Val, at least you can draw, right? And clean a wound.”

[lliiraanna]

Ah, thank you for always taking time to report the typos I’ll fix them. And yea, these scenes are the reason this took so long, so I’m glad if they came out alright~

[lliiraanna]

Not really a progress report, but I started editing ch1, and, gods, it really needs the work. So, my current plan is to go over everything that’s already written before I go ahead with the story~ I want it to be decent lol

[Eiwynn]

@lliiraanna

Not really a progress report, but I started editing ch1, and, gods, it really needs the work. So, my current plan is to go over everything that’s already written before I go ahead with the story~ I want it to be decent lol

Be gentle on yourself.

The creative writers in each of us are sensitive people

[lliiraanna]

Chapter 1 is done (again, lol). tl;dr I’ve changed a number of dialogue options to something less over-the-top, added a disclaimer that you don’t need to pick flirty responses to romance someone later on, put a bit more fluff/lore in in certain places; on top of the usual editing stuff.

One finished, two more to go

[LastLau]

Maybe you could change the format you are using to the standart one? I can’t change the background to dark in the current one.

[lliiraanna]

Alright, done I had no idea it was only a thing in certain themes。。。

[Giraffe]

I’m loving this story so far. And I’m impressed with the amount of characters we get to interact with too. I’m dabbling with ChoiceScript at the moment and I have to admit that I have a huge respect for authors like yourself who take the time to individualise paths.

It isn’t easy work. So thank you for letting us play this!

[lliiraanna]

Thank you for the kind message

I wanted to do the kind of game I’d like to play, hence the variations. It’s not as extensive as it could be as I want to keep things manageable, but still something~

[lliiraanna]

Oh wow, it’s certainly been a while, haha :’)

Life’s been hectic, so unfortunately I had to drop writing for a time. This said, I still intend to finish the game, even if the progress will be slow. I’m currently working on editing chapters 2-3, which is what I said I’ll do in the last update. Also working on another story, but I’d like to think that I learned from my mistakes, so I won’t be posting it here early.

Hope everyone has a nice day, and stay safe

[delulu]

ahhh i love this game sm but when i saw that the last reply was 2 years ago got me crying