Phasma-WIP (09/29/17)

[Vergil16]

is great to see one of my favorite WIP back!,I expect anxiously the new things about this game!!

[Ed.Fox]

Thanks! I’m glad to see that you liked my game.
I Just updated the introduction, I hope I can get your opinion on it.

[VioletHikari]

Ok, so I don’t know how far along this demo goes, but this appears every time I try to confront the person that is following me after school’s over:

[GIO443]

There is a bug. When I open the link to the game, it gets a bug.

And then the game starts with a blank page. Same issue with opening stats.

[Auser]

Found a bug

Summary

[Ed.Fox]

It should be fixed now.
Thanks for letting me know.

[Ed.Fox]

It’s fixed. Thanks for telling me.

[Ed.Fox]

Can you try it again? Maybe it’ll work now since I’ve updated the game.

[FutbolDude21586]

I don’t mean to be… obtuse. But is your “9/4/17” update date September 4th or April 9th? I’m just wondering because in the US we use MM/DD/YY (Month Day Year) instead of the more used DD/MM/YY.

[Ed.Fox]

It’s September 4th.

[FutbolDude21586]

I don’t know if it was there before this last update or not, but I found out how to use the darkness (ext… something) magic and it was awesome!

[Ed.Fox]

I’m glad that you liked that part.

[Chaosteress]

Just curious but with each combination of elements and spells will your special ability change depending on your Phasma

[Ed.Fox]

I have considered that possibility, but I think it could make the game too complicated.

[Chaosteress]

Ok, but say you chose the gun and specialised in lightning magic you could turn it into small railgun.

[Ed.Fox]

I actually hadn’t thought of it like that, that’s an awesome concept. I’ll think how to do it, but It’ll take some time.

[Vattena]

@Ed.Fox

what I found

Should be ignore

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Is * supposed to be there?

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• “He was a Templar, I must admit that it was quite surprising that he managed to find you so quickly, I would have thought that the we or Demon hunters would have contacted you first.” He says

This may just me, I found that the is unnecessary

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• “Now, before continuing, we have to learn what your affinities are.” Aeshma says.
  “Do we really need to put Him in more danger now, Aeshma?”
  “He’s no longer safe no matter what, but we can at least give Him the tools to defend himself.”

Him shouldn’t be capitalized

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• “No need to get that exited… yet.”
  He raises his hand and the same green aura envelops it.

excited

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This seems interesting so far although in my opinion more scene with Jacob/Aeshma and Marie are needed since I not really feel… Connected​ to them, this may just me though.

My question is(if this not spoilery) are there reason why Marie hate Lucifer? And when mc can meet Sofia again?

[Ed.Fox]

Sorry for taking so long to respond.

Thanks for pointing out so many spelling mistakes, I’ll fix them ASAP.
And for your other questions:

There is a reason why Marie hates Lucifer and I’ll explore it in chapter 2; The reason is very spoilery, so if you want more details you’ll have to send me a private message.
You’ll also see Sofia in chapter 2.
Update:
Hey, I just updated my game and with it I’ve fixed the spelling and grammatical mistakes.
I hope you can read it once more and tell me your opinion.

I plan on adding more to my introduction.

[Sano]

After leaving the training area and choosing any of the dialogue options with Marie, this error shows up.

This happened too during the magic selection.

[Ritter]

Hey!
Your game is pretty interesting and I hope you keep writing it,it has a great story! Unfortunately,it seems to have a a little typo here

I think it was supposed to be “Why I was attacked?”