Phasma-WIP (09/29/17)

Firefox is good for opening the download able Dropbox files

Check this Dropbox link, please tell me if it works.
https://dl.dropbox.com/s/t5kb33z5k1xsmav/mygame_complete.html?dl=0

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The Dropbox link works!

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Great, thanks for telling me. :grin:

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Also you could try using more spaces and page breaks. The text looks all cluttered up.

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Sure.
Any specific place, or just in general?

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In general. Also,there are some grammatical errors. Try to fix them.

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I will, thanks. :slight_smile:

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tnx :smiley: I’ll Try it out :slight_smile:

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I’ll look forward to the Apk you are making :blush:

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Not sure if your planing to add this in the future but if not it might be a good idea to add descriptions of each of the magic types somewhere in the stats screen just thought it might be a good idea I’ll let you know of I find any bugs or anything else :stuck_out_tongue:

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Thanks.
I didn’t consider it, but I think I’ll add it.
Thanks again. :grin::grin:

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No problem just thought it would help players with remembering what each type of magic represents :smiley:

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Just wanted to let you know I sorry if this is a bit annoying but I found a spelling error and thought you should know

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Thanks, I’ll fix it as soon as possible. :grinning::grinning:

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Sorry to bother you again but I found a few mistakes in the first one there is one quotation mark and not a second one and in the second one a word or two is missing

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Thanks again.
Sorry for all the trouble.:cold_sweat:

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It’s no trouble I just like this story and I am willing to help :smiley:

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Hey, I just updated the story, I fixed some grammar mistakes and spelling mistakes you showed me (Thanks for that).

I’ve also added your recommendation, although I plan on expanding it a bit in the future.

Thanks again.

Have a great day. :grin::grin:

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No problem I’m glad I could be of help :smiley:

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