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Thanks.
I’ll try my best.

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No problem I did notice something I’m not sure if it was intentional but one of the little play throughs I did I played as a female character and at one point they started calling my character a he :smile:

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Do you remember at what part that happened?

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It’s 2 pages after the page that says a dream less night

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Thanks a lot!
I’ll change it as soon as possible.

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No problem I’m happy to help :smiley:

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Thanks.
I’ll be sure to correct it.

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No problem buddy Btw nice story

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Thanks.
:grin::grin:

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Love the game and glade its back. I got depressed when it was closed. There are never enough games that let you be something more than human.

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Glad you enjoyed it.
I hope I improve my story even more.

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Looks good so far cant wait to get the part where the character goes into demon form keep up the good work :smiley:

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Thanks.
I’ll try my best.
:grinning:

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No problem I really do think you have a good concept so far :smiley:

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So, i know Marie was introduced as a sister first, then a protector, (and i know it’d be weird if some MC really treated her as a sister) but can she be a RO? It’d be nice if she became one.

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I’m considering for future chapters, but nothing is guaranteed yet.

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I noticed a grammer problem when reading;

Seriously, that numbskull of a sister is really annoying.
Finally, I just wanted to check my hair out in the mirror. As you walk towards the mirror, you see the reflection of a:

Now i don’t know if it is the MC say this to herself, if it is, finally is not correct for this phrase. Maybe try somthing like God, I just wanted to check my hair

If it is not meant to be inner monologue then I is not appropriate as the story is told in second person.

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Thanks.
I’ll be sure to change it. I’ll probably do something similar to what you suggested.

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“You’d need to be the stupidest person alive not to notice.” you respond After a short pause, you both start to laugh uncontrollably.

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