Oh the feel! You made me sad only in few minutes into the story. I lost my dad few years ago so I could somehow feel what the MC felt .
Your writing is good!
ps: I’m still reading it but I just want to say that.
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Yes you will be able to choose your MCs height. There will also be a choice in the coming updates to bypass meeting Cedric entirely. I just wanted to get the second chapter out for you all so I’m not completely done with it yet, but I should be soon.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I’m sorry for your loss.
If you ever need anyone to talk to I’m all ears. (I hope I’m not overstepping.)
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Great! Also I’m really interested in Loreena, any idea when she’ll show up?
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@Eleana It’s just that I imagine my MC to be about my height, and just thinking about a night out with the boys and taking a group picture in which you are a full foot shorter than the shortest guy (who is already hella tall), is funny to me 
I know I said I’d edit my post but this influx of comments would then make my brief review be lost so here:
I read the demo and I really enjoyed it! One part was a tiny bit iffy for me though. It was for two (slightly petty) reasons that honestly, aren’t that significant but it was a bit immersion breaking.
- Bold of you to assume I enjoy the consumption of p i e. I personally vehemently despise pie, cooked fruit, and the like. Not to mention to be forced to choose one of four evils was difficult
. An alt. cookie or cake option is not required but would be very nice. - I’ve never heard of chocolate pie being a thing (maybe it’s just me) yet there’s no pumpkin/pecan pie option. I think any pie connoisseur would be mildly miffed that you missed such classic types.
Again, very petty points but I believe it wouldn’t be too difficult to add one or two things to it. But yeah, I look forward to more of this demo and it’s time to sleep for me!
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Thanks 
I really do enjoy your story. Is it going to be adult content (with gore and explicit sexual content) or rather mild?
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In later updates I’m adding more choices. I’ve actually already added the choice to deny the pie. Not to the public demo yet but I’ve added it.
I hope that helps. 
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I think it depends on what my readers want. I am completely fine with making it either one. So, I guess, I’ll leave it up to all of you.
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I have a rough idea but nothing concrete yet. However when I know I will tell you.
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Well, I prefer story that are geared toward adult audiences but that’s just me.
If you want to add adult content but also want to allow younger audiences to enjoy it; maybe there will be a mature content restriction for those who prefer it. I don’t know how difficult would that be but if you could, that’ll be awesome.
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I will try my best to appeal to both sides. If I can manage it I will be more than happy to do just that.
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The pie choice has now been added to the public demo.
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10000000 points to destory Empire // and thank you get me in story//
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You’re welcome
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I read your work of path of fire think my top 10 great read in choice of game 
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Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment. I’m so glad you like Path of Fire so far and I hope I don’t disappoint on future updates to come.
Thank you so much… again 
. Whenever I have doubts about my writing I can always look back onto comments such as this. You and a smattering of others make me understand countless times why writing is worth it. I’m not just doing it for myself but I am doing it for you all as well. I want to entertain all of you and make you happy… even if it’s in a small way.
Your comment is in my Top 10 favorite replies by one of my readers.
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What do you have to doubt? In my opinion you’re a great writer, and if you continue to listen to your fans’ opinions and feedback then you’ll be an amazing author in no time 
We will always support you if you need it 
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Thank you so much, Fay. I know that when times are tough for me that I can look to you for guidance and support. You have been the best supporter that I could ever ask for. Thank you for always being there for me and I hope that I can repay you for it one day.
The only way that I am going to be an amazing writer is if I have support like yours. You make it all worth it. To see that my words have a positive effect on people makes me so happy. I know that I can always count on you to lift my spirits.
Thank you for your continued support, it means the world to me. 
Also, my Caspian drawing is almost done. (I know that is has taken me a bit but I’m glad that you’ve been so patient with me.) I hope you like the finished product. I also added a bit to his design by adding some braids into his hair, but I don’t know if I will keep it that way. I would love your opinion on the matter if you don’t mind.
Thank you, again, you made my day better.
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Caspian?? With braids??? 
So first of all, I think that he’d look g o r g e o u s with braids. I mean, he’s already gorgerous as he is now. But like, braids?? Yes!! Please!! 
Also, not to mention that it’d enhance his elf aesthetic. If I recall correctly you said on the blog that there’d be a possibility that he could be a half-elf and now I’m excited 
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You should give him a seagull tatoo
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