This is an actual line from the demo:
Who says this; the MC’s uncle, Adonis. I don’t know how much of a likable character or of a jerk nasty NPC he’s going to end up as. Maybe both, he has his moments where he does good things, then he opens his mouth and you just want him to shut up.
The update is going to be quite big, maybe about 30k; there’s plenty of choices and a lot of branching (since not all of them follow the same formula) and quite a bit of flavor text depending on the MC’s personality, so you should try really different characters and pay a lot of attention. It’s also very character focused (MC focused, to be precise), since it will establish a lot of personality values rather than skills, which will be worked on when they are in their teens.
Edit: welp, I’m over the 30k mark (both in code and text). Also, it’s very likely that I’ll update in August, since quicktest and randomtest don’t work (I’ll have to see why) and I have to comb through the code the old-fashioned way.
Edit II: I didn’t forget about the update; it’s just that there’s a scene that’s taking me forever to do, and I don’t know if I should just put it for the next (next) update and be done with it, or finish it for the demo. Which one do you prefer?