Question: will saves ever be add or is it kinda like a one shot type of deal. Because if it is the latter I will restart as much times as I need too to get through most of the paths it would just be a slight inconvenience.
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Hello,
A save system will be added I just have to figure out how to properly implement it.
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I just found this WIP and its honestly amazing so far. My heart bleeds for the MC and I honestly wouldnt mind the village burning to the ground.
Onto other notes i noticed with my answers they seem to a bit contradictory to the stat. Like if i warn the couple with the baby that lowers my social. Trying to calm the horse lowers the gentleness. I dont know if this is a writers choice but it is a bit confusing personally.
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@Fable found this:
prolouge_act-2 line 567: Invalid expression at char 21, expected no more tokens, found: CLOSE_PARENTHESIS [)]
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Hello,
I am so happy you like the story (and hate the village lol)! I am aware something is messing up the stat bars and I am trying to fix it. Hopefully I’ll figure out the issue soon. 
Hello,
Thank you! I’ll look into it right now. 
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Okay it should be fixed now. Thank you letting know and never hesitate to notify me if you find anymore bugs!
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Hello everyone!
So I have some very good news,
WE HAVE SAVES NOW!
You all can thank a very special anon on tumblr who helped me figure out what I was doing wrong.
The stats are currently broken, I know how to fix it and I am working on it right now.
Edit: Forgot to add a link, here
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Can we at some point burn the village down and all of its people with it
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And if not at least let us have revenge against the boys that’s beat us and I like to imagine them living their lives until one day the MC who is a jacked up bounty Hunter breaking down the door to get back at them and cutting them down and they ask who are they and the mc reply by pointing at the scar on the on their face and ask them did they forget about the orphan they have beaten up for stealing bread and when they realize who is the MC it is too late for them
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You’ll see. 
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Thats oddly specific. Cool but still oddly specific
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I like revenge what can I say
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Quick Game Update (11-2-23)
As I was writing new scenes for phobia flavor text and doing some editing, I realized when June is explaining why the innkeep was being a jerk that it sounded like she was saying all Romandians are mean to Castelliones.
I also realized since I have yet to introduce a nice Romandian character, it looks like all Romandians are assholes.
They are not, I fixed the dialogue so June explains that they are not all like that and I’ll do a scene where we meet a nice Romandian just to draw a distinction that Lontapiso is an outlier in terms of how mean the people are and that there are Castelliones who are dicks too.
Any additional things I wrote will be included in this update, so enjoy additional phobia text.
Here’s a link in case you don’t feel like scrolling lol.
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@Fable hey the save system isnt working, can you take a look at it please.
Hello,
Thank you for telling me!
It should be fixed now, sorry about that!
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So I gave it a go!
Our character is adorable and also rather realistic with how we’ve lived thus far. At first I was a bit peeved I could only react negative to the realization that the reason I got caught was because of her horse, but again, it makes sense when you consider it
The moment outside the inn is another case, which felt very appropriate. Of course we’ve only been met with disdain for going into nice places, an inn is a ridiculous notion. Bless Mother’s patience with the barrage of questions she keeps getting.
I will admit I got a little teary eyed at the whole seeing ourselves in the mirror and mother being an angel behind us.
I’m not quite sure if its intentional but a paragraph seems to almost repeat itself during the first ‘‘third person’’ segment in the story.
My feet burn and bleed, my lungs feel like they are filled with rocks. Sweat making my hair cling to my forehead as I struggle to gasp for air, the more I breathe, the more tired I feel.
Then a little bit further down its almost identical.
My feet burn and bleed, my lungs feel like they are filled with rocks. Sweat making my hair cling to my forehead as I struggle to gasp for air, the more I breathe, the more tired I seemingly become.
Could be artistic intention of course! 
I am excited about the story so far and I am fascinated where it might go next.
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Hello,
Omg I love that you enjoyed the story and are understanding of why early orphan doesn’t like Sombra, you can fix that later though! And I didn’t realize I repeated a line, that happens when I want to move something over to a better place but I forget to delete where it originally was.
Thank you for letting me know, I’ll get on fixing that right now. I hope you enjoy where the story leads!
Edit: The repeated line should be gone now. 
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@ElliWoelfin & @Mary It took a while but there you go! Title updated!
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Fascinating concept for “Oh Mother Where Art Thou?” interactive fiction, focusing on family, secrets, and self-discovery in a semi-realistic fantasy world.
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