Oh Mother, Where Art Thou? [Updated: 7/1/24](45k Words)

This is wonderful and I get excited for every update!

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Thank you, I hope to not disappoint! :blush: :blue_heart:

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The story hits me right i the feels… cant help but cry a bit.

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Aww it’s going to be okay, the next Act is 100% more uplifting! :blue_heart:

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Then we can’t wait to play it .
Your writing so good :heart:.

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its rare somethimg makes me emotionally shaken even more from reading , its a great wip and i am already in love with it , waiting for more keep up your good work :slight_smile:

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I feel so bad for the Mc. We don’t even have a childhood friend and the biggest mystery is how we survived winters in rags. I hope the mood picks up a bit now some things are changing

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Damn…i actually teared up and feel a bit bad for choosing the traumatized option now for the MC. MC needs the hugs. Good work!

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I deliberately chose distrusting options for Mother and you just made it more heart-wrenching. I’m… not sure whether to continue to come back here for updates or stay away so I don’t have to experience this. I’m all for angst but I felt a tear building up. You are good at making such heartache and I’m scared for when the biggest one will happen.

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Aww I promise the worst (maybe) is over and what’s left for now, is majority just the trauma that came from what happened in the prologue. I am glad my writing accurately gets across how the orphan felt though. Hope to see you around if you decide to keep reading! :smile: :blue_heart:

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gentle and lovely mommy……i’m crying :smiling_face_with_tear:

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This is a game I wish I hadn’t played sitting at the front desk at work cause it was a struggle not to be visibly crying XD I feel so so much for the poor darling orphan and I’m so happy they’ve found someone to love them, Mother is so sweet and it’s going to rip my heart out when she disappears. Can’t wait to see where the story goes from here and how the orphan will get the chance to grow~ Thanks for sharing your story with us and keep up the fantastic work!

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Yeah, I’m also getting really heavy early Bam vibes from tower of god

Wtf is that synopsis.

The promise of a very emotional story :smiling_face_with_tear:!

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Lol it is rather long huh? I would fix it but I don’t have permission to edit old posts since I don’t use the forum too often. Sorry about that. :sweat_smile:

@Fable

I made the first post a Wiki, so you should be able to edit it now. Once you gain the “regular” user-level, you should be able to edit things normally without the need for the post to be a wiki.

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Omg, thank you! :blush: :blue_heart:

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I’m able to edit the post is that intentional?

You should not edit other’s posts without written explicit permission. The Wiki work-around is done so people who encounter the bug that prevents them from editing their own post may do so.

Anyone editing another’s post without their permission will be suspended.

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