Officer of the Fleet (WIP)(~170k words)(Major Update 11/8/25)

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Sir the raptors are in the engine room

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Just popping in real quick to say that I hope development has been going smoothly and I’m excited to see what comes next!

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Well, if raptors are on the ship, I fear the answer is @Cyber0090 ~grins~

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Hey folks, it’s the first of the month so that means update time. Made good progress this month but perhaps not as much as I’d like. Some of that has to do with the cross country road trip I’m currently on with my father which, while exceptionally fun, means my normal writing schedule has been thrown out the window.

That said, I’m heading home soon and hopefully a return to normalcy will bring some words with it. Chapter 3 is still coming, and it will be a big one, so thanks for your patience and your support!

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Weaponizing @Cyber0090 is crazy bro.

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Can’t wait for the next update, buddy! Looking forward to meeting the old man of MC.

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Hypothetically speaking if a raptor and a human had a baby what would it look like?

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Probably a mistake.
Though worst case, a hybrid mix between a human and a raptor.

Maybe like in the idea of RTS games where you can upgrade your vessels by giving them ore damage and/or armor but in return making them more expensive?

Say goodbye to the alien raptors.

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Goon, I can, no longer. Depressed, I am severely/

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This is a really awesome story so far, thanks for writing it! Honestly I could probably be happy with an entire book in the academy a la Red Rising haha

Can’t wait to see where you go with this. I also really like the very few stats, I feel like it makes everything more manageable.

I did notice in the first battle that it mentioned I lost a destroyer and after the battle said I only lost some corvettes - I know had the best outcome through the battle from the code diving I did, so that seems to be a small writing error.

Good luck with Chapter 3!

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Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it! I’ll definitely take a look at that discrepancy you pointed out. I’m sure there will be plenty more of those in the future, which is why I’m always happy and grateful to see people willing to code dive and find all the little things I missed.

Now, back to writing…

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I wonder what will Chapter 3 consist?

There will be words, probably.

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Where would we be without ya Nevantyr :face_with_tongue:

Can confirm that Chapter 3 will have words. Currently over 60,000 of them.

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Come on, folks, tag spoilers please ~grins~

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