Northern Winds: Dragonships. WIP (Status update 2021-6 on 255)

This is great! I guess 3 heads find mistakes better than 2 :smiley:

Also “used for travelling” shows me error as it should be…traveling with one “l”. Im confused now…

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English (UK/international) tend to use two L’s in travelling (and traveller and so forth).

American English only uses one L.

Just one of many small differences between English and American, plenty of words like that. :relaxed:

(He winces in pain as his weight shifts to the other leg. He winces in pain as his weight shifts to other leg.) found this error.

Oh thats what I thought.

I feel so blind now O.o

Anyway, thx guys for helping out. Corrected mistakes and reuploaded files to dashingdon…

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A question for community.

As I have 3 fighting ways players can chose (bow, blade and shield, dual wield)…should I add 4th which would be the peaceful way? (and of course not relied on fighting ability, but how heavy is your purse and perhaps some kinda of stat)

Also…yay to getting past 3k word count ^^

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Is it like some kind of charm or intimidation?

yeah, why not.(obligatory 20 chract)

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I’d love to see that, just don’t give yourself too much work now, you hear. :relaxed:

Oh do be a dear and make it charm, please. :kissing_heart:

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Well now…i know how to expand peaceful way…

Welp…I have all my life to finish this xDDD

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Uh, er, uhm, aah… Uh huh. :astonished: :wink:

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Update: 17.07.17

  1. Enriched some text written at the start pages.
  2. Extended story with new written parts.
  3. First entry in Glossary page! (now when you read a distinct cultural or historical thing about Balts it will show notification at the end of text and reveal new item in Glossary page)
  4. Added 4th “combat option” - Words, Wisdom, Wealth (Still have to write its path in already written parts)
  5. Yay to reaching 4k word barrier!
    Most importantly, changed game name as it was too long (quicktest was screaming at me :S )

Next in plans:

  1. Write “Words, Wisdom, Wealth” path up till the latest written page events.
  2. Enrich trainer stories (so each of the 4 have unique battle story to tell you about)
  3. Event where you chose which gender you prefer to be in love with and first RO option reveal….pretty standard one … childhood friends with whom you gonna go into adventures later years (they will become your huscarls…or perhaps they gonna die? …yes I’m evil! Muahahah!)

Edit: uhuhuhu found bugs, fixed them…I hope…

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Also saw the new option when choosing your fighting style.

@Kefs Yep! You fixed it. I like what you added.

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Yep fixed that bug with variable ^^

Just calculated…if I keep going at this pace…it will take me 3 years to finish this (very rough estimation on the game length)…oh geez I should go hardcore writing in weekends xD

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Thx, but now I found many typos…yay I’m not blind anymore! Kinda slow day for writing…so gonna try fix grammar.

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Sorry guys no updates at this time. :frowning: had emergency at work whole week. (yay for every senpai to be on vacation -.- )

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Update: 28.07.17

  1. Edited a bit huscarl scenes (thou I still want to write more there…but cant get it right. -.-)
  2. Added the Wise One scene which you get by choosing not a bladed weapon as fighting style but rather Words, Wisdom, Wealth path.
  3. Added Glossary page where stats are explained.
  4. Yay to reaching 5k words!

Next in plans:

  1. A hunting event with your father and mother where some interesting things happen and you meet your first ROs’s (You chose which gender you prefer to be in love with) Thx to a special person that gave me this idea. ^^

Also as these smaller elements and introduction is mostly in place and as I have clear vision of game route I want to follow, I will make huger updates, making scenes bigger and updating it here more rarely. (Like every 2 weeks? Depending on progress…)

And found my muse that helps me concentrate and relax ^^

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Hey guys…here is small sneak peak of hunting process! Oh god these ifs will kill me xD

*if tracker = "Gundar"
	*elseif hunt_animal = "a wolf"
		1a
		*if fight_type = "Sword and Shield"
			1aa
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Bow"
			1ab
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Dual wield"
			1ac
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Words, Wisdom, Wealth"
			1ad
			*goto hunt5
		
	*elseif hunt_animal = "a bear"
		1b 
		*if fight_type = "Sword and Shield"
			1ba
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Bow"
			1bb
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Dual wield"
			1bc
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Words, Wisdom, Wealth"
			1bd
			*goto hunt5
	*elseif hunt_animal = "a boar"
		1c
		*if fight_type = "Sword and Shield"
			1ca
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Bow"
			1cb
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Dual wield"
			1cc
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Words, Wisdom, Wealth"
			1cd
			*goto hunt5
	*elseif hunt_animal = "an elk"
		1d
			*if fight_type = "Sword and Shield"
			1da
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Bow"
			1db
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Dual wield"
			1dc
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Words, Wisdom, Wealth"
			1dd
			*goto hunt5
*else
	*elseif hunt_animal = "a wolf"
		2a
		*if fight_type = "Sword and Shield"
			2aa
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Bow"
			2ab
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Dual wield"
			2ac
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Words, Wisdom, Wealth"
			2ad
			*goto hunt5
	*elseif hunt_animal = "a bear"
		2b
		*if fight_type = "Sword and Shield"
			2ba
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Bow"
			2bb
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Dual wield"
			2bc
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Words, Wisdom, Wealth"
			2bd
			*goto hunt5
	*elseif hunt_animal = "a boar"
		2c
		*if fight_type = "Sword and Shield"
			2ca
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Bow"
			2cb
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Dual wield"
			2cc
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Words, Wisdom, Wealth"
			2cd
			*goto hunt5
	*elseif hunt_animal = "an elk"
		2d 
		*if fight_type = "Sword and Shield"
			2da
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Bow"
			2db
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Dual wield"
			2dc
			*goto hunt5
		*elseif fight_type = "Words, Wisdom, Wealth"
			2dd
			*goto hunt5
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I now know the name of my character for the next update… :grinning:

Elseif! :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

Keep up the good work.

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haha :smiley: …very funny…nooot :stuck_out_tongue:

Thx, ^^

Nice WiP dude! I really enjoyed this one.

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