My first CoG: City of Zombies. Feedback welcome

Are you going to add any ammo feature for the weapons? I would really dislike it if you did, especially if I had a character with very little strength.

I don’t want to make it an RPG with lots of tracking of equipment. I am more interested in the story, so that is what I am focusing on.

thats good how long is it supposed to be added to what u already have

3 more chapters, before I send it to ChoiceofGames for review. If they like it and publish, I will keep going with updates as long as people read it and download it. I have enough written that is not in ChoiceScript yet to go for 7-8 chapters already.

good good $-)

Good luck. I really enjoy this one. Hope that it goes far.

City of Zombies was already taken for domain names and the app store, so I changed the name to Zombie Exodus. The word “Exodus” is also meaningful to the story going forward. Here is the new address:
http://zombieexodus.com/mygame/index.html

ok brings the game out more

I found another mistake. When I call Emma using the payphone, she says “I can barely hear him, but I think it’s Maria.” Having chosen the sister choice, I believe that is not the right response.

Another thing. When I help the soldier with the broken leg at the subway, it says “You return to the subway floor and take the M-16 and night vision goggles (NVGs), leaving the rest to keep your weight ‘done.’” It should be down.

Thanks for the comments and for letting me know of any issues you find.

Kamer, I agree about the payphone thing… I will change it. Thanks for pointing out the typo, too.

Dude great game… finish soon please…

I loved it.

By the way, just wanted to say, showed my friend this, and he loves zombies.
He’s addicted to it >_< Thanks~

Thanks, MrYoungzman.

I should have the next chapter up on Tuesday.

This is a great game and I can’t wait for the next installment.

A bug I’ve found is that after I go to into the antique dealer’s apartment and then go into Jason’s apartment, I can’t advance the storyline from there as it gives me a pop up that says there is an error with the variables or something and it gives me lines of code. And then I can’t proceed because there is no button at the bottom of the page to do so. I’ve tried two times and both I’ve encountered the same error if I go into that apartment. I’ve had no other problems when choosing not to go into that apartment, however, and I’ve loved the game so far.

what time will u post it on tue

Mocha – thanks for reporting that bug. It is fixed. Sorry about that.
Nack – evening, probably 9pm EST

JimD, would it be possible to have some other occupation?

The current occupations you can pick all seems to set your character a step above other civilians on the matter of survival except the minister.

While doctor might overlap with scientist a bit, it is still a good job to play with (some healing ability would be nice.)

I would also prefer a more mundane job like a clerk / office lady - they would be more challenging compared to the rest of the choices with their talents not very suitable for survival. (High will from enduring boring jobs? xD)

^ Or you can go even deeper.
Larper- able to craft weapon and armor?
Pro/Starting Rockstar/Singer- Able to go long hours of activity w/o sleep?
It can go on.