Model Citizens: Unmasked (WIP - Update March 11, 2022)

Short Story Part 2

Daniel Rivera Jr. started introducing himself as Daniel McDonall after his brother Luca showed up at their house, sleeping in the arms of a social security worker with a note written to the senior Daniel Rivera, his father, notifying him of the death of an Abigail Spellmeyer. He was ten years old, Luca Spellmeyer was seven.


“And?” I speak into the pause on the other end of the phone line, originally having thought that perhaps Ms. McDonall needed to gather herself to get into the grittier details of Daniel and Luca’s childhoods, but when that pause has since lapsed into a sizeable silence.

“And?” Ms. McDonall’s echo comes out as a static hiss, “You wanted to know why Daniel went by McDonall instead of Rivera, this is why!”

“Ms. McDonall, Daniel was sixteen-”

“Is sixteen- just because you haven’t found him, Morgan Sharp-” She spits out the words with a serpentine venom, “- Does not mean my son is dead!”

“- Yet you stated that Luca… arrived… when Daniel was ten. What happened for those six years between?”

“Ask my husband.” Ms. McDonall drawls sarcastically.

“Ms. McDonall, it would be easiest if you-” The connection dies abruptly. I let the phone scream loud dial-tones in my ear for a moment before eventually, slowly, setting it down on the receiver. Almost immediately a sharp knock resounds at the door. “Come in.”

Eleanor slowly, purposefully pushes the door open, “I hope you’ll forgive me, but I couldn’t help but listen in.”

“Your desk is right outside my office, Eleanor, I don’t think you would’ve been able to avoid hearing that if you tried.”

She considers my words with a pursed expression, before nodding in agreement. “Well, anyway, I did some digging as to why it was Mrs- er- Ms. McDonall was still showing up as Mrs. Rivera in our system.” Folding my hands on my desk, I watch as Eleanor steps aside, allowing Mikel, who had apparently been waiting behind her, strides confidently into the room, waving a small collection of papers in his hand.

“Would’ja believe it, Cap’n, that it wasn’t just the system screwing up again? But just some more family dirt dug up in this beautiful little case of ours.” He slaps the papers atop my desk, lips peeling back from his teeth triumphantly.

I look to Eleanor for a more direct answer, she steps around Mikel, spreading the papers out in a neat row, “Daniel Rivera Sr. and Cristina McDonall never filed for a divorce.” She taps the fifth and last paper neatly, “Until Ms. McDonall tried to- about one month ago.”

I turn the paper to face me, “November 28…”

“Just a bit curious how that’s only a week before the murder… and the kidnapping- of his own two sons, if I might add.” Mikel fills the room with that cloudy thought hanging over everyone’s head.

“But it’s not enough to prove he’s guilty.” Eleanor cautions him.

Mikel holds out his hands, “I’m not saying that the guy is!” He pulls up one of the two chairs by the desk, flipping it around so that he can sit on it and sling his arms over the back, “What I am saying, though, is that either we need to give Mr. Rivera a li’l visit, or he’s gonna have to visit us.”

“Mikel!” Eleanor snaps, her jaw hangs open, eyes glimmering with slight exasperation, “We’re not on some crime television show…! We can’t just- just barge into his house unannounced. We need a search warrant, or an arrest warrant if we really think he… might play some part in what happened.”

“We don’t have the time.” Both of them turn to face me when I speak up. “If there’s even the slightest possibility that Daniel Rivera Sr. killed those two boys and kidnapped Luca and Daniel Jr. then we can’t waste any time in making sure that they’re safe.” I pick up the phone again, standing as I do so when a sudden wave of antsy energy rushes through me. Eleanor opens her mouth to protest. “There won’t be any more kid’s corpses on these docks.”

She holds my gaze, staring me down, but her jaw slowly shuts. “You still can’t do anything in the system without a warrant.”

“Oh, Ellie, Ellie” Mikel laughs, “There’s always a way around the system.”

“Do you have a suggestion?”

Mikel rocks back in his chair ever so slightly, “Of course I do!” He turns to face me, and despite that impish smile there’s a stern, serious glint to his eyes, “Call him to make a testimony at his house. We three go and then you do what you did with the Laurens and say that the two of you,” He points to Eleanor and then myself, “Are going to take a look at Daniel and Luca’s rooms, respectively. The fact that you just so happened to end up looking elsewhere in the house becomes little more than a small feat of getting lost.”

“So lost that we end up thoroughly searching every room in the house for incriminating evidence of arson, murder, and kidnapping?” Eleanor shakes her head.

“You underestimate just how lost one can get. Come to the city with me sometime, you’ll see.”

“Mikel, how long do you think you’d be able to distract him?” Mikel faces me once more, sobering up a considerable amount as he mulls over the question.

“Depends,” Mikel shrugs, “I haven’t met the guy yet and I’d need to get a good read on him to figure out whether or not he’s the chatty type. Not to mention I’d have to do this all under the guise of an actual interview, and there’s only so many questions I can ask before any sane person gets suspicious. But if he really is guilty of all this then we might not have to worry about that last part.”

“So you want us to search the house of a man who is either completely innocent, or managed to sneak a bomb of some kind into a populated wharf and then blow up two boys? Without a solid sense of how long we’ll have to do so?” Eleanor speaks slowly.

“Well, most of those details are irrelevant to the search itself, Ellie. Just think of it as find and go seek, count to one-hundred if you don’t trust me, then shout olly-olly-oxenfree and come back if you really want. Otherwise, I’ll let you know when he’s getting antsy.”

“How?”

“However seems natural at the time.”

“We have to try it.” I stare at the papers on the desk, the manilla folder still out from the last time I poured through its sparse contents. “We have to.”

“If it doesn’t work,” Mikel starts to stand, pushing the chair back into place, “We’re at least supposed to interview him, anyway.”


Daniel Rivera Sr. lives nearby the wharf… a fact that certainly made Eleanor’s calm facade break momentarily into an expression of surprise. The house is small with vanilla paint over red brick and a tiled roof, it’s squished, townhouse-style, between two near identical buildings, with the most distinctive aspect of Mr. Rivera’s abode being the bundles of fake flowers pushed into a real flower pot that hangs outside his window, bright pink and red against the otherwise barren urban winter. I step up to the door, with Mikel right behind me and Eleanor lagging back a bit as she surveys the surrounding area. The doorbell chimes with a long, melodic tune that echoes around, muffled by the door. The man who opens the door has a square jaw and tired brown eyes, a sad smile lighting his face when he sees Mikel and Eleanor’s uniforms behind me. He’d expected us… considering we called him to set up the appointment.

“Come on in, no reason to freeze outside.” He stands astride the door, waving the three of us into his house hurriedly. “Would you like to hang your coats? There’s a fire already warming the living room- sit, rest, you three must be freezing.”

“No, thank you.” Eleanor politely refuses, “We won’t take much of your time, sir.”

“Nonsense,” Mr. Rivera has deep lines by his nose and mouth, the kind that make for a bright grin like Mikel’s, but now seem only to be used for a melancholy ghost of such. “You’re here so I can help you find my sons, correct? If that is so… then take as long as you need and I’ll… I’ll do whatever I can.”

“Officer Bosque will be handling that,” I shrug towards Mikel, who extends his hand in greeting, “Officer Pike and I were hoping it’d be alright to take a look at the boys rooms while Officer Bosque interviews you?”

Mr. Rivera nods slowly, “Of course, but first, sit and have some tea. I insist,” He adds when he catches Eleanor’s hesitant glance towards me, “It’s too cold to do anything else, and I have all day free for you to snoop into my private laugh.” The joke is coupled with a weak laugh, Mikel does his best to match it with a soft chuckle of his own, but Eleanor’s face remains cold as steel, I remain silent.

“Alright,” I acquiesce, Eleanor’s eyes slide over and catch my own, but I keep staring towards Mr. Rivera, “Tea it is, then.”

“Fantastic! You can wait in the living room,” Mr. Rivera points through a doorway, towards a crackling fire, “I’ll be right back.”

Once we go through our doorway, and Mr. Rivera disappears around the corner, Eleanor tugs me closer to herself and Mikel, “Sharp, what are you doing?”

“You wanted a time limit,” I whisper, “This is Mikel’s chance to get us one, get a read on him.”

“He seems nice.” Mikel pipes in. “I kinda… feel a little guilty, honestly. It seems like he really misses his sons.”

“You were the one to suggested this!” Eleanor reminds him.

“I know,” Mikel shrugs, his eyes located somewhere distant, “I just… I still think it’s a good idea to look around- don’t get me wrong, but I… well, I won’t be surprised if we don’t find anything, is all I’m saying.”
Eventually he seems to slide back into the present, catching Eleanor’s gaze, “Oh come on, Ellie, you can’t seriously say he doesn’t seem depressed by what’s happened, can you?”

“I’m reserving my judgement. Like I should.”

“Everyone is innocent until proven guilty,” I remind the both of them, “Now stop fighting, and focus.”

A few minutes later, Mr. Rivera comes through the open doorway once more, juggling four cups in his bare hands. Eleanor stands to help him but Mr. Rivera shakes his head, “No, no,” He turns away from her help,
“They’re hot, you’ll burn your hands.”

“But what about yo…” Eleanor trails off as her line of sight falls down to Mr. Rivera’s hands, which glow a soft ember orange color as he sets the cups down on the table.

“You have powers.” I comment, half to myself, as Mr. Rivera stands straight once more. He laughs, bashfully, a sudden wave of sheepishness overtaking his features as he rubs his hands together self-consciously.

“Nothing quite so fantastic, I’m afraid.” He squeezes them together, the glow slowly fading, “I can heat my hands up to boil water or cook, which saves quite a bit of money, and I don’t have to worry about being burned in the kitchen, which saves quite a bit of pain…” Another quiet bout of laughter, “But I’m no hero. Far too old to go running around saving the world and all that.” He shakes his head, “Though I appreciate those who are able to do more than I.”

Mr. Rivera takes a seat, clutching his mug between his hands. Mikel sits straighter, and takes a breath to begin the conversation-

“Mr. Rivera, why did you and Ms. McDonall wait until a month ago to file for a divorce?” It’s almost eerie, the way every single head snaps to look at me with a similar perplexed expression once I speak up. Mikel nudges me in the side with his elbow, and once Eleanor registers what it is I’ve said, her expression shifts from emotion to emotion before finally settling on a combination of confusion and annoyance. Mr. Rivera, on the other hand, is frozen in place, or so it seems. The only mobile thing about him comes from the steam curling out of the ceramic mug in his hands.

“What my boss means to say is-” Mikel starts in spluttering tones, but he’s cut off when Mr. Rivera lifts a hand, still staring in my direction.

“It’s… fine, I suppose.” Finally shaking himself from his stupor, Mr. Rivera glances into the tea mug before setting it back down on the table, he runs his hands over his knees, smoothing out his pants. “Though… I thought you wanted to go upstairs and search the boys’ rooms?”

“So did I…” I hear Eleanor mutter from the other side of the couch.

“I have a few questions.” I shrug, glancing Mikel and Eleanor, “I think it’d be best if we ask them now.”

“If… that’s what you want.” Mr. Rivera hesitantly agrees.

“Well, that’s fine with me,” Mikel shrugs and flops back against the couch, slinging one arm over the back, “Whatever you think is best, Cap’n.”

Eleanor searches my face for a moment longer, her gaze lingers silently as she nods and stiffly leans her arm against the armrest.

“So, why now?” I return to Mr. Rivera.

“Well…” Mr. Rivera scratches the back of his head, running a hand through curled dark brown hair, “I guess I should… clarify. Cristina and I- the plan was never to divorce. We wanted-” He stops, swallows heavily, “Well, I wanted, to give the boys a normal childhood. As normal as it could be, considering… The circumstances with which Luca came into our lives. Cristina wanted, reasonably, to leave. I promised that it would just last until they were off into the world on their own. Then we would go our separate ways and she would never, ever have to see me again.”

“Which didn’t go over very well, did it?” I fill in.

“No.” Mr. Rivera shakes his head, then stops, “Well, no… later. At first she seemed to agree- it was the one thing we’d agreed on since Luca arrived. We both wanted the boys to be happy, and we thought two parents would be better than one but…” Mr. Rivera sighs, “It was worse. Much worse. We fought constantly, and she hated me, had reason to- but- I just…” His hands wrap around his knees, “I can’t shake the feeling that this is all my fault. That if we’d split there then none of this would’ve happened, everything would’ve been cleaner and… Luca and Daniel would still-”

“Why?” I cut him off before his train of thought can continue.

“Cristina came to me with the divorce papers to sign, we fought- of course,” A dry, sarcastic, loathing laugh escapes his lips, “Luca overheard, he was eavesdropping- curious boy.” Another chuckle, this one somehow simultaneously happier and more pained, “I think he told Daniel. I think that they… wanted to escape, just for a while. Go somewhere with friends far from home, far from everyone. As far as they could get from Daniel’s mother’s house. So they went to the docks that day- nevermind how dangerous that area is and now… They both acted so distant afterwards I couldn’t help but believe that was why.”

“They got along?” Eleanor’s tone betrays surprise, she sits straighter, perked up at this small detail. Almost immediately she snaps her mouth closed, realizing her words and looking away embarrassedly. “I’m sorry, sir. I assumed, with the circumstances that they might not’ve-”

“It’s fine.” Mr. Rivera shakes his head, “I suppose it does seem strange, especially since, as you probably know, Daniel stopped using my family’s name after Luca came home. But… Daniel is a good boy, I think he resented Luca at first- would barely talk to him, but I believe that Luca grew on him. So, yes, the two got along. They were brothers, full brothers, no matter what the past is.” There’s a glimmer of pride poking through the cloud surrounding Daniel Rivera Sr.’s eyes.

“They left because they found out of the divorce? And that’s why they ended up on Dock 7, to get away, correct?” I repeat.

“Yes. I’m sure.” Mr. Rivera answers.

“And both of them- both of your sons- were upset at this time?”

“Well, yes.” Mr. Rivera’s head tilts in confusion, “Of course they were, we’d been struggling for so long to keep our family together and it just-”

“Everything in their lives fell apart.”

Mr. Rivera nods. I stand up, “I see. Thank you for your time, Mr. Rivera.”

“What?” Mikel is the first one to bolt up, shocked, “Woah, Morgan! What are you doing?”

“You’re leaving?” Mr. Rivera goes wide-eyed. “So soon?”

“Yes. We need to leave.” Mikel is by my side, one hand grasping the back of my arm, Eleanor stands as well, shaking her head at me in disbelief.

“Hang on- Morgan!” Mikel tugs me back, “We’ve barely asked any questions! Let alone, y’know, looked at their rooms?”

“We need to go,” I pull my arm free, “Now.” Mikel and Eleanor share a quick glance, but by the time they start to follow me I already have the front door open, half jogging towards the car we came in.

“Thank you again for your time, Sir!” I hear Mikel shout behind me as he runs towards the car, Eleanor several paces in front of him. “You’ve… uh, really helped us out!” He slams the door behind himself as I start up the engine, Eleanor already buckled in beside me. “I guess?”


“Mind telling us where we’re going?” Eleanor is the first to speak, her hand clenched in a white-knuckled grip on the car door as we speed along the narrow streets near the wharf, sirens blaring.

“Yes, call it in.” I instruct, “Contact the western HQ, tell them to search the Rusty Side for Luca Rivera and Daniel McDonall, then have our office fax them the images on file. Tell them not to open fire, but to use extreme caution.” Eleanor, suspiciously but surely enough, reaches for the radio lodged into the car console.

“The Rusty Side?” Mikel leans forward from the back seat, “That’s on the other side of town!”

“As far away as possible. They won’t leave the city. They can’t.”

Mikel’s eyes stretch until his irises are surrounded by white, “You mean you think you know where they are?”

“Maybe.”

“Maybe?”

“I have an idea.”

Mikel sits back in the seat with a huff, “Lotta pomp for just an ‘idea’.”

“Do you have a better one?” Eleanor turns her head sharply behind her, pausing as the message is relayed to the western N.P.D.’s western headquarters.

Mikel stretches his arms out to the side, “I honestly can say that I have no idea what’s happening. So, no, no I do not.”


Once we’re actually in the Rusty Side of Nickelport I begin to feel a lot of the tension and original adrenaline of my discovery drain away. I loosen my grip on the steering wheel as I pull the car into a side alley, the three of us step out and I pass to the keys to Eleanor. “Drive around, but keep the lights and siren off. If you see anything then contact us immediately.” She nods somberly, before slipping into the driver seat and slowly rolling down the road. Mikel and I watch until the tail lights disappear around the corner.

“We need to find them before dark.” Mikel comments, glancing up at the ever fading sky. I pull back my sleeve and check my watch. Five in the afternoon. “Your favorite time of the day.” Mikel comments with a smile as he takes a peak over my shoulder. “Must be good luck.”

“They’ll be somewhere quiet.” I shove my hands into my pockets, the winter chill crawling through the thin fabric of my coat, “Look in alleyways, abandoned buildings, anywhere uninhabited.”

Mikel’s beam fades away, “Are you sure about this?”

“I have to be.”

“No,” He shakes his head, “I don’t mean where they are, I trust you on that.” That confidence makes a brief return at the comment, “I mean… splitting up- will you be okay? And if you find them…? Maybe you should’ve taken the car…” His eyes start to waver towards the ground.

“Mikel,” I draw them back, placing a hand on his shoulder. “I’ll be fine… I have to be.” One more glance at the sky shows me that it’s grown even darker, “Now, get moving. Remember what I told you- it’s just a hunch but… exercise caution.”

He beams at me once more, “Aww, you worried about me now? Come on, Morgan, when am I ever not careful?” He throws his arms out to the side, already backpedaling slowly down the alleyway.
I don’t respond.

Mikel laughs boisterously, “See you on the other side, Cap’n!” He gives a mock salute before turning around and walking off, bouncing on his heels.


Quiet surrounds me. Lights dimly gleam from barred windows, casting broken shadows on the cracked, uneven street. A bag floats by and catches on a lamppost with a shattered bulb, glass scattered dangerously around the sidewalk. I take peak down each alley I find, only to be met with that same sullen silence. I hear jaunty whistling coming from one open door as a woman with her hair tied in two knotted pigtails pushes a ratty couch onto the street, casting me one suspicious outsiders-glare before kicking the couch the rest of the way outside and slamming the door closed. No more whistling. No more anything.

My feet begin to ache by the time that the sun has crested over the squat buildings and the sky’s been bruised purple and blue, just barely enough light that I don’t yet feel the need to flick on my flashlight and expose my presence to this unwavering ghost town. Static crackles on my radio each time I consider contacting Mikel or Eleanor to check in with their progress, but the risk of revealing myself remains too high to try. I spot one abandoned concrete building, like a half-built factory… no, not half built. I realize by the faded sign and rusted up, unused shipping trucks parked in the nearly empty driveway. It’s been destroyed.

The building is wide, taking up three houses space, with a broken down old metal gate in front, the latch missing and one side hanging open at an angle that I squeeze through. The peeling sign talks about some kinda fabric- maybe shirts or pants- the words are too far gone to tell. The left half of the building is fully intact, plain grey concrete with symmetrical rows of blackened windows and two tall steel pipes rising up out of the ground… but the right half has caved in on itself. Exposed rebar pokes out of slabs of concrete that have fallen down and now lean haphazardly against what remains of the left half of the building, deep gashes gore the parking lot, with one truck still wedged vertically between the layers of destruction, its torso crushed beyond recognition, a stain on the asphalt below indicates where oil had leaked and then dried up over time.

This was the site of a heroes battle.

Who’s, and when this was I have no idea, no matter how long I search my limited knowledge of famous battles no recollection comes up. Considering the fact that it’s been left untouched for rebuilding could mean three things. It’s a twisted memorial for whoever important it was that died here- most likely the hero in that case, nobody cared enough because it was in the depths of the Rusty Side of Nickelport, or the ground is still too unstable to touch. My hopes remain in the former two. The fact that it’s a factory does, however, give some insight into when this was, considering most factories were dismantled or moved decades ago when the Rusty Side of Nickelport became more and more populated. If it weren’t for that fact, then the thick swathings of rust and dust would be more than enough clue, only barely broken up by graffiti markings from the more adventurous Rusty Side youth.

Other than that, however, this is a place for ghosts.

And, if I’m right, two very scared teenage boys.

I traverse across the beaten, broken path to the left side of the factory, slipping carefully underneath one precariously balanced horizontal slab of concrete as dust rains down upon my head. Inside the shadows are so dark that I find it finally time to flick on my flashlight to get a good look at what’s around me. The light flicks on and almost immediately I am greeted with a rough, suspicious voice,

“Who’s there?” A young voice.

“My name is Morgan Sharp…” I speak calmly into the darkness, I can’t call for Mikel or Eleanor, not now, not when I’ll be heard if I do. “Are you Luca Rivera?”

Silence.

“Daniel, then? Daniel McDonall?”

“What do you want with me?”

“Your brother isn’t with you?” There’s no response, “Can you come outside first?” I ask, eyeing the broken up ceiling with my flashlight, “This place is dangerous.”

“Not until you tell me who you are and what you want.”

I stifle a sigh, “My name is Morgan Sharp,” I repeat, “I’m a detective and captain of the Nickelport Police Department, I work in the East Bay-”

“So you’re…” Daniel interrupts me, but promptly stops.

“I’m here to talk about Dominic Kim Laurens and Jay Pestia,” I whisper the words, unsure of the reaction, “Yes, that’s right.”

“They were my friends.” Daniel’s voice is equally quiet. “They were…” He chokes on the words.

“Can you come outside?”

I’m not answered verbally, instead, I hear footsteps crunching slowly on debris. Exhaling calmly, I turn around and slip out the way I came in.

Daniel McDonall stands with his arms wrapped around himself, shaking, head hanging, with blood dried on his shirt. The resemblance to his father is uncanny, the same curled brown hair and light brown skin, the same sharp jawline and broad shoulders, you see that he has his mother’s button nose which only adds to the confirmation that, yes, this is Daniel McDonall. And he’s still alive.

“I’m going to call someone, they’ll get you back to the station. When was the last time you ate?” Daniel just shakes his head, “They’ll have food there, just ask. Wait one moment.”

I step away from him, pulling up the radio, first, I wire in my location to the Rusty Side’s HQ so they can send someone. Then, I call Eleanor.

“Eleanor,”

“Sharp! I was getting worried. I haven’t heard from you or Mikel, are you alright?” Her voice pops against the radio static

“Yes, I’m fine. I found Daniel.”

“You did?” She sounds hopeful, “Great, I’ll swing by and pick him up-”

“No, don’t. I already called someone else.”

“What? Why not?”

“Luca isn’t with him.” Eleanor doesn’t respond, waiting, “I’m going to ask why, but call Mikel and let him know what’s happening… Actually- no, scratch that. Find where he is, meet up, then call me and I’ll give you my location. I think we’ll need to reconvene soon.”

“On it.” Static fills the radio, I pocket it once more and walk back to Daniel, who hasn’t budged since I left him.

He glances up at me as I approach, brown eyes voided into blank reflective pits. No fear. No sadness. No emotion. “Can you tell me where your brother is? Where Luca is?”

Daniel stares at the ground once more. “I don’t know.”

I step closer, unsure, “Daniel- I need to know- I need to find him. Your brother-”

“Half-brother.” Daniel spits on the ground.

I pause, grind my jaw, “Luca is in danger, Daniel.”

No response.

“If you have any information at all-”

“I don’t know!” His voice comes out in a high pitched, shrill scream, he turns wildly towards me, eyes bulging like a frightened animal, arms flung out to the sides, “I panicked and I ran! I left them there! Dead! They’re all dead!” His hands dig through his hair, into his skull, his legs start to shake, “They’re all dead! They’re all-!”

I grip his shoulders before he can topple over, Daniel sobs, “They’re all dead- so why aren’t I?” Carefully, Daniel sits down on the ground, I keep hold of his shoulders until he’s no longer in danger of falling over, then, I release him and step back. Daniel hangs his head once more, shoulder heaving in sobs, broken by the occasional hiccup.

“Luca isn’t dead.” I speak in a carefully controlled manner, “He’s still alive, but he’s in danger, Daniel. If you can remember anything, anything at all about where he would go, or even just what direction he ran in… You could help, Daniel. You could save him.”

With this, Daniel finally lifts his head to stare at me, his cheeks are wet with tears and he’s still trembling terribly, but he nods, and through quivering lips, he manages to speak. “Dock 9.”

“Dock 9?”

“We…” He swallows his spit, “We were going to walk there together, the way it’s set up we would…” A shaky smile comes across his face as Daniel sniffs and rubs the bottoms of his eyes harshly, “We used to sneak out there, all four of us, when we were young and play on the beams- like they were monkey bars ‘n shit, the plan was to meet at the construction site and walk there together… we didn’t… we didn’t make it there, did we?” He twists his shirt between his hands.

I opt out of answering, I can already hear the sirens approaching in the distance, “You may have just saved your brother, Daniel. Thank you.”

He nods, and unsteadily stands up, wordlessly walking towards the flickering red and blue lights.


“Where are we going?” Eleanor wastes no time pulling the car out into the street soon as my door is closed. Mikel twists around to face me from the front seat as I pull the belt over my chest.

“Dock 9.”

“Dock 9?” Mikel repeats, “All the way back on the East Bay? What about running as far as they can?”

“Change of plans.”

I stare out the window as the scenery whizzes by, Eleanor already has the lights and siren on, making the outside world look like little more than a red and blue screaming blur. I jump a little when I feel Mikel reach over and pat my leg to draw my attention.

“Hey,” His lips pull back in that pearl white grin, “You handled that well, Morgan. Better than well, actually.”

“Mh,” I make an unassuming noise and turn back to the window, mouth covered by my hand.

“Yeah, well, get ready to do it again.” In my peripheral I see Eleanor’s eyes flicker to me through the rearview mirror. “Because we’re about to save another kid.”

“Mh,”


Even with Eleanor’s neck-breaking speed we manage to pull up as the last to a series of N.E.B.P.D. police cars, all with the lights blaring and doors open.

“Captain Sharp, sir,” Officer Moran Dubois comes sprinting up to me, gun drawn and clutched in their hand,
“Luca Rivera’s presence inside has been confirmed, sir.”

“What is everyone doing with their guns drawn…?” Mikel observes as he takes a quick glance around the premise. Officer Dubois nervously tucks their gun back into the holster.

“Sir, we-”

“I specifically ordered no firearms,” I frown, “No matter what.”

“But, sir-”

“No firearms.” I repeat, “Unless you want everything to go to hell. Now, Mikel, Eleanor, Officer Dubois, get everyone centered once more. This is a kid we’re dealing with, not a villain.” Moran is the first to sprint off, Eleanor and Mikel hang back a moment. I glance between the two of them, “What?”

“You’re planning on going in there.” Eleanor’s voice is steady, her face remains expressionless.

“Yes.”

“Alone.”

“I can’t scare him.” Eleanor purses her lips, a disapproving silence hangs around her.

“Listen, Morgan,” Mikel steps forward, “Let me do this. Personal interaction is, quite literally, my only use on this team.” He tries a joking smile, but for once it comes across as nervous, “Let me prove that I’m not yet out of date, alright? I’ll go in there and-”

“Absolutely not.”

“Neither of you should go in there alone.” Eleanor interjects.

“I am. And you two are to stay out here and keep watch.” I unhook my gun holster, gun still inside, and pass it off to Eleanor, “And watch this.” She stares at it, registering what I’m saying, before her face contorts into bright red fury.

“Now you’re just insane…” Mikel whispers.

“Are you kidding me, Morgan?” She flings it on the ground, “No! No way! I will not entertain the kind of stupidity that’ll get you killed!” She jabs her finger to my chest, “You are not going in there alone, and you’re sure as hell not going in there unarmed!”

I push her finger away, sternly staring her down. “I’m going. And you’re staying, and keeping my gun. This is a kid, and I can’t scare him.” Neither of them seem willing to back down, “This is an order.”

Eleanor’s face has gone blood red, flushed deep with a rare streak of anger, but she is the first to leave, leaving the gun on the ground where it lay. Mikel looks sick at the thought, staring at the firearm before staring at me. Eventually, slowly, he bends down and picks it up, turning the pistol over in his hands before hooking the holster to his belt. Shakily, he raises a hand in mock salute, his voice quivers when he speaks.

“Aye, aye, Captain.”

Mikel slowly sulks away.

I take a deep breath, and turn to Dock 9.

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[details=Short Story Part 3 because apparently this thing is longer than I thought but I guess that’s what happens when you have two weeks and a notebook with you]The inside is filled with the sound of a creaking metal chorus. Moonlight leaks in through an open window, bouncing off of the bronze beams and exposed piping that criss cross around the entirety of the warehouse. It’s easy to see how a bunch of kids would find this place better than any normal park, with beams to balance on and places to climb galore. The entire thing is just one big steel jungle to explore for them. My footsteps echo around this jungle, announcing my presence long before I would ever want to.

I listen for a similar such sound, hoping that perhaps Luca is moving around, and I’d be able to hear as much. But when I stop walking, so does any sound, and any inkling that this will be easy is simultaneously sapped from from my body. With a weary breath, I move on, cautiously calling his name out into the warehouse.

“Luca?”

A steel door provides entryway into another section of Dock 9’s warehouse, I push it open, the prolonged, unoiled creak stretches and distorts down the hall.

“Luca?”

My voice bounces back at me from between the rebar, off of the walls and up from the floor.

“Luca?”

I’m not entirely sure what I’m expecting to find. Whether he’ll been standing or sitting, crouched in a corner or balancing on one of the beams high above my head. Daniel had the advantage of being tucked away by a layer of shadows, and so was spared from the light, as he was from many things, apparently. Some silly, fantastical part of me expects to first see a flicker of light or flame, some kind of indication of light reflecting off of the many shiny surfaces in this place. What I find instead is another large steel door, twin to the one before it, and as I push it open my nose is blasted with the salty smell of the bay, my ears assaulted by the crash of the water rumbling against the support pillars that dig into the sand beneath the water, and the creak of the wood as I step outside, and beyond that, past the closed door, sitting underneath an outcropping that was at one point perhaps meant to store equipment is a small boy with floppy brown curls stuck to his forehead with surprised, wet round eyes as dark as his brother’s, wearing a hoodie two sizes too big with the hem pulled over his knees and the hood thrown over his head.

“Luca?” I ask, and he nods, his cheeks are wet and his eyes and nose puffy and red. He looks much less like his father than Daniel did, with rounded shoulders and face- features which all must come from Abigail Spellmeyer. But the eyes and hair are distinctly Mr. Rivera’s. I crouch down next to him. “My name is Morgan Sharp, I’m a police officer, Luca.” The boy’s face pales considerably.

“Are you here to arrest me?”

“No.” I fold my arms, letting them rest on my knees, “I’m not here to arrest you.”

“But you know what I did. That’s why you’re here, that’s why you’re all here.” He sniffles, but he doesn’t back away, his hands pull on the sleeves, already too long for him, balling up the fabric between his fingers.

“We’re here to make sure you don’t get hurt.” I speak slowly, quietly, trying hard to imagine what it is Mikel would say if he were here instead of me. But trying to understand his mind is a lot like trying to walk through a maze blindfolded and dead drunk. Luca stares at me for a long while, his eyes wide and searching, judging the truth in my words. His hands slowly relax, he pulls the sleeves away from them, fresh burn marks run up and down his palms, blackened skin peeling away slowly, fading into irritated red boils.

“I did it.” He buries his face in those hands, I hear quiet weeping between his words, “Daniel, Dominic, Jay- I did it… I didn’t mean to! I don’t know what happened! I just- It’s all my fault, everything that happened- everything is my fault!” His composure starts to break, and I watch as flames seem to spark to life around him, even on this wet ground they lick the floors and heat the air around us. I flinch when one comes a bit too close to my side, but I keep myself rooted to the ground. “I watched! I saw it! I didn’t mean to but it just… happened! I couldn’t- I didn’t want- Jay, he tried…”

“Luca.”

“He tried to reach out- he was- I knew he was trying to help- but I panicked!” Luca sobs, the fire picks up around him, wild and uncontrolled, eating away at its own master, gnawing on the back of his hands.

“Luca.” I fight to keep my voice controlled.

“Daniel was right! Everything goes wrong because of me! It’s my fault Mom and Dad are leaving! It’s my fault that Jay and Dom are… are… Oh god.” He covers his mouth, eyes wide and wild with fear and morbid fascination, “I… I killed them. I did.”

If I don’t stop him… I bite my tongue and reach out, hissing when my hand passes through the fire growing around him, and grab onto Luca’s shoulder. “Luca! You need to stop.”

Something in my voice, or maybe the contact, snaps Luca back to reality… But soon as he notices the fire around him, he screams and slaps my hand away, scrambling to his feet he backs away, but it just follows him, biting at his heels and snapping at his hands. I cradle my injured hand, a stinging, burning pain blossoming in the palm as I stand up, slowly proceeding towards him.

“Stay away!” Luca’s voice is little more than a primal, panicked yell molded into modern words, “I don’t want to hurt anybody else! I can’t! I can’t!” He takes another step back, another step towards the dark and murky waters of the bay. The fire seems to ball up at his feet, ready to burst.

Ready to explode.

I never understood Mikel, anyway.

“You can.” I speak, straightening my shoulders. “You can hurt people, Luca, if you don’t calm down and control your powers.” His focus is drawn back to me, away from the flames, “Which is why you need to learn how to. The more you run, the worse this gets, and if it doesn’t kill you first, then it’ll kill somebody else. It’s already taken two lives, your right. But that wasn’t you, it was your power. I can help you prevent it from killing any more than it already has. I can help you prevent it from killing yourself.”

My gaze is steady, my hand pressed against my chest, the fire hisses and crackles by his feet, swallowing his shoes. “Do you want that?”

“I don’t…” Luca takes a half step back, “I don’t want to hurt anyone.”

“You haven’t. But it has.” I nod to the fire, now up to his ankles and swirling around, “But you can stop it. I can help you stop it.”

Luca nods numbly.

“Good.” I tilt my head slightly, “Now calm down.”

“I… I can’t.” Luca shakes his head, the fire hisses, “I can’t just-”

“You can. Just remember that you can be in control, you just have to focus. Breathe. Take a step forward.” He does. “Good, now another one.” Two steps forward and he’s far enough away from the edge that I begin to relax some, the fire begins to hiss as it dies out, “One more, then do it on your own.”

Luca breathes in time with his steps as he numbly places one foot in front of the other. By the time he stands in front of me, the fire is little more than hissing smoke in the air around us, what lingering heat there was is gone, along with Luca’s shoes, his feet scarred and burned, and as his senses begin to return, he cries out in pain, collapsing to his knees. Tears stream down his face and hit the wooden planks beneath him. “What… happened to me?” He sobs out quietly, “Why am I…?”

“You have powers.” I state, “Powers you need to learn to control so that this never happens again.” I reach into my pocket, pulling out one of the small white cards I always carry around, partially for this specific purpose. I grab a pen from my pocket and write a familiar name and address on the back of the card. “Talk to your parents- especially your father. There’s psychologists for these kinda things, tell them you need this help. And… here,” I hand the card to Luca, who gingerly takes it in his hands, wincing when it hits his palms he shifts to hold it delicately by his few unburned fingertips. “Someone who can help.”

Luca remains silent, pocketing the card numbly and nodding obediently.

“Can you walk?” The question feels obvious even as it leaves my mouth, still, Luca tries to stand, only to fall back to his knees. “Never mind.” I run a hand through my hair, pulling out my radio. “I’m going to call some more people-”

“People who can help?” Luca finally strangles out a couple of words, his voice is raw and he winces when he speaks.

“Yeah,” I nod, “People who can help.”


I tuck the manilla folder away in the steel cabinet, shutting it with my one good hand. The other still rather useless in its bandaged state while it hangs in its sling against my chest. I leave the case files room to come face to face with Eleanor, a brand new manilla folder clutched between her fingertips. Her eyes instinctively flicker down to my hand, a sharp frown pulling at her mouth.

“Came in this morning,” She explains passing it cordially over to me.

“Thanks, Eleanor.” I take the folder from her, expecting her to just leave after that, but Eleanor lingers, a contemplative look on her face. I tilt my head, waiting.

“I know you’re deadset in your ways,” Eleanor starts reluctantly, crossing her arms over her chest, “But promise me that next time you’ll take someone- anyone with you as backup, even if they wait a few feet away while you do your thing, just for safety. Promise me this, and I’ll forgive you.”

I can’t help but feel the edges of a smile creep up on my face. “How about I just take my gun next time instead?”

“No.” Eleanor frowns, “Because you are taking your gun in next time, promise or no promise. Even if I have to throw it at your head in the line of fire I’m not letting you pull that again.”

“Fine. Then I promise.”

Eleanor’s stiff face relaxes into a smile, some of the tiredness by her hazel eyes diminishes as well. “Good,” She sighs, her hands dropping, “Then I forgive you.”


Soon as Mikel sees me, his face lights up in a familiar excited grin. “Hey, Cap’n! You’ll never guess who I just heard from!” He stands from his desk, a knowing spark to his dark eyes.

Knowing he won’t tell me unless I play along, “Who?”

“Well, I’ll give ya a hint- you hated her, she’s chatty, and you got her her son back.”

“Ms. McDonall.” I blink in surprise. Mikel nods.

“Yeah! Believe it or not, she was actually thanking us for once. Danny boy started going to that psychologist you recommended for Luca-”

“You mean Dr. James?” Mikel nods once more.

“Apparently Mr. Rivera passed the word onto her as well, thinking it could help Daniel as well as Luca with all that happened.” In that moment, Mikel’s demeanor shifts to a much more serious tone. He shakes his head. “You know, Morgan… I just… I hope nothing happens to that kid after this. He seemed to take after his father- good kid. Didn’t mean to hurt anybody…”

“Almost none of them do, not at the beginning.” I retort, “When their powers are that unstable… It’s not safe, for them or anyone around. There’s no control- nothing to stop them from going out of control. The situation only exacerbated what was already going to happen.”

“Quite the nihilist, ain’t ya?” Mikel manages a weak smile, “Still, if he does get good control of his powers, then I’m sure that kid could help out a lot.”

“You think he could be a cop?”

“I was going to go with hero.”

I shake my head, “I’ve worked in this business for a long time, Mikel. If there’s one thing I know, it’s that-”

“I know, I know,” Mikel waves his hand dismissively, “I’ve heard it all before, Cap’n.”

Mikel’s grin grows as he readjusts his posture into a mock version of what I assume he believes is mine, adjusting his voice in accordance, “The last thing Nickelport needs is more heroes.”

Mikel shakes his head good-naturedly, “Well, Morgan Sharp, I think that one day you’ll be able to put the lot of ‘em outta business, anyway.”[/details]

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I want more Lucy, please…

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You and me both :grin:

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I third this request! Huzzah!!

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I’m sensing that people want more Lucy content… :thinking:

[details=Just me? It’s probably just me.]3:02 AM

You rub your weary eyes and turn away from the cruel red glow of the clock. Has it really only been two minutes since you last checked it? No, the better question would be: Is it really three am? Why haven’t you gone to sleep?

Well, that last bit has an easy answer. It comes in the shape of a woman with broad shoulders and a daring glint to her eyes… or the lack of one.

Lucy still hasn’t come home.

You sit up with a sigh, rubbing your hand against your chest, against the dull ache. Must’ve slept on it wrong- or, y’know, could just be your lovely friend paranoia. It felt like this happened too often, that Lucy wouldn’t come home until late at night. Usually, it was explainable hours, eleven or ten thirty, she’d call beforehand about work keeping her late like she did today… But this was new, this was worrisome, and it seemed to be getting worse. Now it’s three in the morning and three in the morning puts all those other ‘explainable hours’ into questionable territory.

You slip out of bed, feet touching the soft carpeted floor and brushed by the cold night chill. Instinctively, you reach for the ring on the bedside stand, pausing when you catch sight of your wedding photo reflecting light. It’s barely been a year. Can a marriage fall apart in a year?

No, you remind yourself, these are just your three in the morning thoughts, drunken by lack of sleep.

You glance at the photo again, pausing once more as you stare at the streak of light that cuts through Lucy’s white dress and covers the bouquet she held in her hands- light? It’s the dead of night, and you left all the home lights off so…

You snatch up your ring, habitually slipping it on as you turn towards the mostly-closed bedroom door. Through that small crack the orange light of your living room seeps, striking the photo and casting one stripe of illumination across your face. Is it Lucy? A robber? No, it couldn’t be the latter, why would they turn on the lights? You shake your head, still silly from exhaustion.

Yet when you walk towards the door, it is with careful, controlled steps, muffled by the carpet as you hide your presence from the light. Turning, slowly, widening the crack of the door, silently, peeking through the opening, suspiciously, you catch sight of long, curled black tresses pouring over the couch, feet on the coffee table. Lucy.

The almost painful relief you feel is muffled over and mixed with an anger that comes as the aftereffects of paranoia. Hands, your hands- though they seem to be agents of their own right now, throw open the door, mouth open to begin your questioning when Lucy quickly stands up- as if startled by your presence.

Your questions seem to fly away, jaw hanging slack as Lucy blinks her black eyes once, twice. “I, uhh, thought you were asleep, didn’t want to… y’know, wake you up.” She waves her hand, and winces when she does so.

Her t-shirt is plastered to her side, the white soaked into a deep, crimson red. A long gash runs up her arm cutting into her skin in jagged, sharp turns. Her knuckles have turned a dark purple, with the skin scraped away and flecks of blood surrounding them. The jeans have turned a midnight purple, seeping into that same bloody red around the knees, her left leg, you notice, she leans away from, letting it hang somewhat crookedly, dislocated. Her lips are split and her nose has dried blood all around it, but her eyes remain as sharp as ever. Scanning your face, looking for your reaction, but withholding any sign of pain that you know she must be feeling. There’s no way she can’t be… Yet she stands there, unperturbed by the mess her body’s in, shoulders still back and chin still raised. Like she didn’t look like she’d been dragged through hell and back, tied to a wild horse by the ankle.

“Wake me up?” You speak is stuttering tones, mind numb as your wife stands bleeding with broken bones before you, “Wake me up!” It’s no longer a question, but a panicked, fearful statement, “Lucy, what the- what the hell happened? No-” You cut her off, though she’d yet to begin to speak, “No, we need to get you to the hospital first.” The brief moment of clarity leads your feet towards the phone, faster than you thought you’d be able to walk.

Your arm is caught on your way, “No, don’t!” You wince and flinch back as a surprising amount of pain bursts from where she grabbed your arm. Lucy immediately releases you, an apology burning in her eyes. “Don’t call the hospital.”

“Don’t call the-?”

Lucy grins at you, a cocky expression made lopsided by the cut down her lips, “Come on, it’s not that bad!”

“Not that bad?” You really need to stop parroting her and come up with your own words sometime soon.

She laughs, boisterous and hearty, loud, unreserved, familiar. Normally, this is a relaxing sound, but normally, your wife doesn’t look like she’s about to step up and ring death’s doorbell. “You should see the other guy!” She nods her head proudly, eyes glimmering with excitement. “I mean, at least I can walk!”

Her words slowly tick through your ears, reaching what sane part is left in your brain. “You got in a fight.” At least it’s your own words this time around.

Lucy blinks as well, and for a moment, she looks as surprised as you do, if not more. An uncomfortable silence settles between the two of you. The minutes pass in long, all-consuming silence. Eventually she sighs, scratching the back of her head, running her hand through her hair, fingers catching on the curls, “Well, yeah. I mean-”

She sighs, “I was on my home but I heard this scream and I… I really couldn’t just ignore it! This guy was getting mugged at knife point and I had to help!” She shakes her head, “I couldn’t just sit back! So, I stepped up, thinkin’, y’know, maybe he’ll be intimidated enough just to leave. But that… that cowardly bastard had others hiding nearby! They jumped me!” She holds out her hands, a look of disbelief etched on her bruised face. Then, that broken smile comes back, “So, I figured he’d used up his chances, and I took them on.”

“You ‘took them on’?” Damn, and you were doing so well before, “Lucy, how many were there?”

“Uh…” She doesn’t look sheepish, instead, Lucy pretty much glows with pride, “Three, including the original guy.”

Your eyes trail down the gash on her arm, subconsciously you step forward, reaching out, but your mind takes hold and your hand hesitates just a few inches away from her most visible wound. Lucy’s eyes stay locked on your hand as it slowly fall away, she frowns, as if disappointed… or sad. “Did they all have knives?”

“Nope!” She sounds happy once more, revelling in the memory of her hero’s moment, “One guy had a bat!” Well, that explains the leg…

You nearly retch at the thought.

“Hey, hey,” For a moment Lucy’s grandeur dies away, concern twisting her expression as her good arm wraps around your shoulder, she guides you towards the couch, setting you down gently as she sits beside you, “You look like you need to sit down.”

I need to sit down?” And your back to mindlessly parroting once more, you shake your head, “Lucy, you- you-” You start to stutter, unable to stop talking but unsure what to say.

Lucy stops you with a quick kiss. You taste salty sweat, and metallic blood. When she pulls back, she grins, her hand trails down your arm until she’s able to interlace your fingers with hers. “You know I hate to scare you like this, but it’s still pretty cute to see you worried about me.”

“Worried…? Scared….? Lucy, I’m…” You squeeze your eyes shut, they feel hot and sting with tears, “I’m terrified.” The words come out as a weak sound, like a mouse squeaking, and you hate it. When you finally open your eyes again, her smile is gone. Instead, she leans forward and presses her forehead against yours.

“I’m sorry.” She whispers quietly. “I’m so, so sorry. I didn’t want to… I never want to terrify you.” The words are strong, steady, and assured. They ring like a promise in your ears.

You let go of her hand, and lean away from her, Lucy’s eyes finally crinkle in pain, but not quite the type you’re expecting. You take a shaky breath, “Did you call the police?”

Lucy takes a keen interest in the ceiling, “Well…” She drawls.

“Lucy!”

“I’m sorry!” She shook her head, “I was a little distracted.” Her ears tint red, a much softer, lighter shade of red than the dark blood, some of which has now seeped into the couch, “I wanted to get home. I wanted to see you so I just… kinda left.”

A new kind of determination wells inside of you, “You’re going to the hospital.”

Lucy’s eyes widen, “I already said-”

You shake your head, placing your finger against her lips, gently, “No. Listen to me. You’re going to the hospital- I’ll explain what happened, but you’re going.” Your voice is steel, “I’m not having you die on me.”

“I wouldn’t-”

“And I’m not letting you try to walk this off.”

Lucy, stubborn, beautiful Lucy, holds your gaze, and for a moment you think she’s going to fight back on this. But something she sees makes her break, “Fine.” She sighs, flopping back against the couch. “I’ll go. For you. Though I really don’t need to.” The last part is said in a frustrated, quiet mumble.

You can’t help but smile a little, at least that’s one crisis solved, “Good. And Lucy?”

“Yeah?”

“No more heroics. Promise me.”

She grins once more, “I promise.” There’s a lilting laugh behind her voice, as if she finds this situation funny, “No more heroics.”
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How dare you hurt me in this way

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You know I find it funny you say this because if we go back in time to post 230 according to the search bar you said:

So I think it’s most appropriate to quote my reply from there as well:[quote=“RenaB, post:238, topic:22922”]
:wink:
[/quote]

(I’m making a habit out of this, aren’t I? Is it a good habit? Yes. Most would probably say no.)

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I LOVE IT! :heart_eyes: I must win her back!

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Yay!! :smile: I’m glad!

So, I guess, it wasn’t just me, then, eh?

Well, good luck! :wink: (You, uh, might need it.)

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Holy craaaaap, I can’t wait to meet Lucy again, and there’s definitely a playthrough where I’ll be winning her back (sorry Finley). Not gonna lie, at this point it’ll probably be my first one, turns out I’m a sucker for villains, and even if I wasn’t Lucy has me wrapped around her little finger.

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Me too, though I’m going after her male counter part, I also like recovering old relationships in these types of games.

Unless the person is an asshole, then no thanks.

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My poor love hungry raf gets no love at all :sob:

So if he can see the future why is he not ruling the world already?

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Or maybe she will be the one who will need luck to deal with my character :sunglasses:.

Now I need even more Lucy! :heart_eyes:

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Many future seers in stories have a pessimistic outlook and accept their fate and don’t see why others don’t. Many don’t want to know their fate those that do often don’t like it leading to many a pony seer

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Am I the only one who really REALLY wants more of Rafael?

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Well, then I’ll tell you what I told @Lizzy as well: Good luck! :wink:

:frowning: Poor Finn, forever the wingperson.

She certainly does have a talent for doing that to people, doesn’t she? :wink:

Also, if you’re a sucker for villains… Hoo, boy, I mean, there’re certainly some villains. (Including Lucy, of course.)

I also love the sorta ‘Rekindling Lost Love’ tropes… which is partially why I included both the Exes as ROs in the game. (I mean, it’s not the only reason, obviously, there’s some pretty (read: extremely) important plot reasons for you having been married but y’know… doesn’t hurt…)

Maybe this is just me but because I know him so well the though of Raf being an ass kinda makes me laugh.

Lemme put it this way: The day Raf is an asshole is the day the world ends.

I’m sure we can fix this :wink:

A couple of reasons:

  1. Raf’s powers don’t mean that he sees definitive future, he sees the most likely future. (Nothing is set in stone, after all. If it were, then that would mean he could never do anything to change it, anyway.) So there is always a margin of error he has to account for. (A lot like how Lucy has to account for the fact that she’s still human with a limited amount of, well, damage that she can heal from.)

  2. Raf’s personality isn’t exactly conducive to world domination. Put simply- he’s too nice. If someone came to him and said they weren’t happy under his rule he’d change, then someone else comes and says they’re not happy with this new way of leading, and he’d try to change again, and you can’t make everybody happy so… The poor guy would probably collapse under the stress.

  3. He just doesn’t want to. Raf’s a villain for a very specific reason, a very specific goal. And that… doesn’t really involve world domination. So even though he could conceivably do so, the main reason he isn’t is because it’s not really something he wants to do. It’s not a part of his endgame. So why bother with the distraction?

Ha! Well, I’ll bet they certainly had an interesting marriage, then.

This is an addiction, you need an intervention. (I’m just kidding, of course. One can never have too much Lucy in their lives! I hear she’s good for the heart.)

Hmm, well, I’m afraid you’ll have to wait a li’l bit for more Lucy, though, however. I just wrote one for her and one for Raf and now I should probably work on the actual update before I end up writing one for every RO :sweat_smile: (Though, in all honestly, I would love to do that… I just should probably at least finish the next update before I do since I was already away for two weeks which set it back some.)

I can’t comment much on this because of my spoiler rule, but I will say this- Raf’s power’s limitation does actually help some with this. There have many times when he’s seen things that have… scared him. But he’s trying to train himself to remember that the future can be changed, that what he sees isn’t set-in-stone.


Just as a quick clarification, Trixie is the prewritten/default name for the cat Raf and the MC had, since I couldn’t exactly avoid mentioning her, I went ahead and just used the prewritten name. You do get to name the cat something different, however. (Also as a weird/fun side fact: The song I listened to while writing this involved a cats meow, I did not know this. It scared me when I was writing about the cat meowing and then suddenly had a cat meow sound in my ear.)

As another, shorter side-note, this one started out a lot fluffier than Lucy’s did… which I find funny because it fits their personalities very well- Raf being more gentle and kind and Lucy being more wild and dramatic.

[details=Raf’s Short]Maybe it’s because you haven’t had a day off in what feels like years. Maybe it’s because in those year-long months you’ve been working overtime most days. Maybe it’s because the window is open and the weather is nice and the birds are chirping. Maybe it’s because the entire house smells like slowly cooking pasta since Raf insisted you relax while he cooks on your day off. Maybe it’s because Trixie was bathed today and her fur is soft and she’s become a bit more than a heated, furry little ball on your stomach as you doze in and out on the bed. Or maybe it’s some combination of all those things.

Whatever it is, it’s led you to such a state of lethargy that you’re not such even an asteroid crashing into the side of your house would make you leave your bed. Beautiful, exquisite lethargy.

Lethargy that is sadly, or perhaps not so sadly, interrupted by a light rapping on the already-open door. You lift your head reluctantly from the pillow and spot Raf standing in the doorway, an amused shimmer to his eyes when he catches your eyes.

“I almost feel guilty for asking you to stand up and come eat.” He nods his head towards the kitchen, his voice carrying with it that underlying purr of laughter.

“Almost?” You ask, letting your head flop back on the pillow. “You should feel very guilty for even thinking such a thing, good sir.”

That purr grows into a more audible rumble as Raf takes a few steps towards you and the cat, “Well, I suppose I might, if I didn’t know I’d feel more guilty later not dragging you out now and letting you starve until later.” You feel your legs sink to the side a little as Raf sits on the edge of the bed, a light pat on your leg, “Now come on, sleepyhead, stand up and let’s get you some food.”

You whine a noise of protest, your stomach does feel a little empty, but the very thought of leaving your little cocoon of comfort is far, far from any current goal of yours, not to mention it involves the matter of moving Trixie off of your stomach… Which is an idea you believe she’d be about as fond of as you are of leaving the bed. “But I can’t.”

“Oh?” Raf shakes his head, you can tell that he’s trying to keep a serious face- maybe it’s even supposed to look stern, but if so then he’s failing miserably- as a smile quietly tugs at the corners of his lips, forcing them upwards even as he attempts to pull them back down into a frown… Or at least a neutral expression. “And why can’t you?”

Wordlessly you lift your hand and point to the tiny ball of fur on your stomach, still breathing softly, her own stomach rising in time with yours. Is she asleep? Perhaps, her head is tucked under her tiny paw, and curled in towards her stomach. The only indication that she might be even the tiniest bit awake is the way her ears will occasionally flick towards either your voice or Raf’s, listening peacefully to your conversation.

“You see,” You begin, “I appear to have been afflicted with a very rare disease.”
“Oh? Is that so?”

“Mm, it manifests itself in the form of a small cat on my stomach, and limits all mobility.” You continue, “It’s tragic, really, but I’m afraid there’s simply nothing I can do to help it. There’s no cure.”

“Oh how horrible.” Raf mocks a shocked tone, “But, you may be in luck.”

“Is that so?”

“Yes, for you see,” Raf holds his arms out in a grand gesture, “I believe I have the cure.”

“Impossible.”

Quietly, Raf reaches over to Trixie, at first gently petting her head. Trixie mews in protest, a sound muffled by her own fur. You hear Raf make a soft cooing noise, calling her over. With about as much willingness to get up as you feel, Trixie lifts her sleepy head and begins to stretch out on your stomach. Raf gives her a little nudge and she hops the short distance from your stomach to the bed… Before promptly flopping on her side and sighing as she falls back into worryless slumber. “And viola,” Raf grins as he leans back, “You’re cured! It’s a miracle.”

You huff, turning onto your side with your back to Raf, “I’m not so sure. Maybe you just took any visible signs of disease. I’m still feeling it.”

You hear Raf huff behind you, “I’m not going to be able to get you up, am I?”

You hide your smirk behind the pillow, “Nope.”

“I could always just tickle you to get you up…”

“Please don’t.”

“But I won’t.” Raf shakes his head, “I’ll be nice, for now.” You almost laugh at the ‘for now’ bit. Almost.

You feel the pressure in the bed shift once more, and you turn onto your other side so that you face Raf. He lays on his back, one hand resting on his stomach, the other tucked behind his head, short black hair splayed against the pillows. He catches you staring at him, and you spot that familiar crinkling by his eyes as he smiles at you, that familiar shining mirth. “Well, I can certainly see why you’re so reluctant to leave. It’s nice. I might just lay here for a while, too, if that’s alright with you.”

You lean forward and press a soft kiss to your husband’s forehead, whispering a soft ‘I love you’ against his skin.

Raf’s hand reaches up to trace the side of your jaw, gently pulling your head down to press a similar, soft kiss against your lips. “I love you too, you silly sleepyhead.” He murmurs. “Now get some rest- if I can’t make you eat, maybe I can at least make you do that.”

You flop down against the bed with a grin on your face, taking Raf’s hand in yours as you lay back down, toying absentmindedly with his fingers. Trixie, ever the attention-seeker, spots this play of affection, and chooses very quickly that she doesn’t want to left out of the pile. Huffing in protest, she stands and pads her way across the uneven bed, where, in order to gain both your attention, she steps lightly on Raf’s arm.

Raf nearly screams. He shoots up, so fast you don’t see him until he’s upright, and grabs his arm close to his chest. Trixie stumbles back in surprise, hissing at the sudden change, and you scramble to sit up as well. “Raf! What happened, did she scratch you?” You stare at his arm, but there’s no scratch marks on the clothes.

Raf, still a little wide-eyed, turns his head slowly from you to the cat, and though he ends up staring at you, his gaze seems far away.

“Raf…?” You try softly calling to him, reaching out, carefully, towards his arm.

Just as fast, Raf drops it, as if he hadn’t been guarding it close to himself just moments before, leaning away from your touch, a bashful smile on his face, ears and nose slowly tinting red. “I’m fine, I’m sorry- I… Uh…” He squints as if trying to think, or focus on something far away, “I…” You hear him mutter a soft curse under his breath.

“Rafael,” Your voice is a little more stern this time around, “What happened?”

“N-Nothing,” He winces when he stutters. “Nothing I just… I was dozing off, and she shocked me, is all.” His voice is stilted, unnatural… untruthful.

Your eyes narrow, “Why… are you lying?” You can’t hide the slight string of panic that wells up inside of you. Raf has almost never lied to you, and the few times he’s had it’s always, always been because he’s trying to surprise you with something special… But some sane piece of you is saying that such isn’t the case now.

Raf can’t hold your gaze, instead staring at the bed. He opts for silence, unable to reply. You wait, patiently, your eyes steady on his face, trying to glean what you can from his expression. Yet all you manage to find is guilt.

“I’m sorry,” He breathes, “I just… I didn’t want you to worry.”

Worry? “Raf, show me your arm.” With a reluctant sigh Raf holds it out towards you. You’re careful only to grab his hand as you slowly roll the sleeve back, and back, and back, and back.

Deep gashes run all the way along his arm, like something had raked its claws down his arm, over and over again. They’re all messily, haphazardly stitched up, like he did it himself in a hurry. They’re all red, with dried blood seeped between the sutures, and agitated around the sides- fresh. Only a day or so old. How could you not notice? For an entire day he must’ve had these! And Raf just… just went along, all day, insisting that you were the one who needed to rest.

That string of panic balls into a knot, and it keeps going and going as you roll the sleeve up more and more, trying to count how many there are, but quickly losing track. You reach his shoulder and they still go on, underneath his shirt.

You swallow, but your throat has gone dry. You hide any tremor of terror from your voice as you speak, “Raf… take your shirt off,” You have to know. You have to know how bad it is. How he could’ve hidden… all this… from you so well. So much so that you had no idea what had happened.

Raf glances away, when you let go of his hand his arm drops like a dead weight against the mattress, that guilt you’d spotted previously seems to overtake his expression. He doesn’t move.

“Raf,” You repeat, “Take off your shirt.”

“You sure…?” His voice is weak, there’s a strained, forced joking tone to it, “I mean, it’s midday and-”

“Rafael.” You end up using his full name once more, and Raf quiets down.

“I’m sorry.”

For a moment you think he’s not going to do it, that Raf is just going to continue to sit there guiltily. But in the end he obliges, hissing with pain as he lifts his arm, he turns his head away but you can still see him wince. You lean over and help it over his head, letting the shirt drop to the ground when you see his torso.

They’re everywhere.

Deep, dark red marks goring into his skin. Angry marks, some crossed over each other as if he’d been cut multiple times in the same place. Each of them is stitched up in that similar, messy fashion, with dark purple bruises littering the few spots of skin that would’ve remained otherwise untouched. You suck in a breath, and squeeze your hands into fists around the mattress covers to keep them from shaking.

“How did… What did…” Your mouth seems to fail you, your tongue is heavy and unusable, your mind a messy bog of too many thoughts that send you into a sinking, whirling panic.

Raf spots your panic, and immediately he seems to shift into a much calmer, patient tone, “Hey, hey,” He leans over, placing his good hand on your shoulder, thumb rubbing small circles into your back, “It’s okay, I’m okay, it’s okay.”

He… he has the gall to say such a thing? You slap his hand away, “No!” Your voice is a lot louder, a lot scratchier, than you anticipated, “No, you’re obviously not okay! It’s obviously not okay! You hid this from me, and I…” You slump back, a tingling numbness settling into your stomach, “I still have no idea how or why,” You really don’t want to cry right now, you really don’t. Still, you feel angry, scared tears trickle down your cheeks. Somewhere through the haze, you think you hear Trixie meowing, reacting to your distress.

Raf takes a deep breath, his eyes flickering to the side, “I got into a car accident.”

You lift your eyes, you hadn’t noticed when you started staring at the bedsheet, but apparently sometime between then your eyes fell. “An accident?” You echo.

Raf nods, his hand covering his mouth, “It… it was yesterday night, when I took the cab home, since you needed the car for your job. We were on the highway when someone tried to merge lanes and hit the side of the cab- both of us were going over the speed limit and I… we… we flipped into a ditch, over the guardrails.” He takes a shaky breath “The glass broke and when I woke up we had to crawl out of the cab, the other guy was out cold so we had to get him out… it was… bad.” He wheezes out the last word, “Really… really bad.”

“Did you go to the hospital?” You ask, eyeing the amateurish sutures.

“Yes, but…” Raf sighs, looking away with that same red-handed expression.

“But?”

“I rushed them. I wanted to get home and I didn’t want… I didn’t want you to worry.” He smiles weakly, “Guess that worked great, didn’t it?”

“Worry?” There’s that word again. Normally, when Raf does things because he ‘doesn’t want you to worry’ it’s cooking dinner when you’ve stayed at work late and are exhausted, it’s giving the cat a bath in the mornings so you don’t have to force Trixie into the water, it’s been a sweet, caring word. But now you’re wishing it didn’t exist. “Of course I’m going to worry! Raf, I want to worry!” You throw your arms out wide, “I want to take care of you! To help you! Raf, I worry all the time! I worry when you’re sad, or stressed, or restless. I worry when you feel sick, or when look tired. Hell, I even sometimes worry when you’re happy because I don’t want to screw it up somehow! I worry because I love you! Because I want you to be happy and healthy!”

Raf stares at you, but he remains silent.

“Let me worry.” Your arms drop, any fire in you having burnt itself into shaking embers, “Let me love you.”

He looks away, “I know, I should. I want to… I… I’m sorry.”

You quietly reach over, turning his chin towards you, “It’s okay, just don’t lie to me again, alright? Tell me the truth. Tell me when something like this happens.”

Raf’s throat bobs as he swallow, he nods, “I promise.” His eyes are downcast. “I promise.”

“So no more lies?”

“No more lies.”

“Good. I love you… You know that, right?”

Even though he doesn’t lift his eyes, you see his mouth quirk upwards in a soft smile. “I know. I love you, too.”
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Ho man that little tidbit of Lucy just makes me wish I had a time machine to travel to the future and see this completed Lucy romance.

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RAF!!! :cry:

Trixie is precious btw and I already love her

Oh and also


Little typo here

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My goddess is too pure for this mortal plane. He is the beacon of hope for a new era.

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