Mind Blind (01/31 Demo Update. A Story Where You Are NOT The Chosen One!)

Nonsense. There’s nothing suspicious about a gender-variable nurse who just happens to be there for no apparent reason.

Mind Blind is filled with completely random things that mean nothing at all, nothing whatsoever. It’s all random, I tell you. Random.

OR red herrings.

OR maybe that sentence above was the red herring.

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Looks like it’s time to play the 2 souls 1 body game with Nicky, oh how I love fighting for control over my own body.

I’m a little late to the party considering its 5am, and now I can say that I both regret and enjoyed my decision to read while sleep deprived.

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All I’m thinking about is how much fun Nick will have inside the head of one of my Button’s who is uhhh quite forward about her attraction to Kent. GOOD LUCK, NICK.

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God with every update I reach another stage of “what is this feeling?”

Nick realizing we have a crush on Sally who has a crush on him will crush me

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When K is going to fall on the sword, Glitch says how Mayor Zarneki’s bla bla his school exploding, but K was a girl.

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that’s goOD SHIT MAN!!!
I LOVE THIS

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Back again! Absolutely screaming this time! Through my banshee-like screeches and wild emotions, though, I’ve found some things to fix!

  • John says that “no one realizes that we live with Nick, and he doesn’t want reporters following us home” twice—not exactly the same, but similar enough to make me blink and short circuit for a few moments.

  • After selecting to be a car-loving Button in the beginning after choosing to go back for the dogs, I got a bit of a twin situation later on.

Aaaaaaaand that’s all I caught that really threw me off! Overall, awesome chapter. The twist… I wonder how the Sally-Nick romance will work out if he’s in my mind. Also, it’d be an absolute nightmare if I had my sibling taking an intimate look at my love life—guess I gotta keep my K-horniness down for now, at least until Nick gets his own body back!

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Thanks! I’m bug squashing right now, and so I fixed (hopefully) the ones you and @Vilrek pointed out.(I think. I may also have added more bugs. I’ll replay in the morrow to make certain.)

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Nick. I love you. I adore you. But. Um. Mmmm. No. :slight_smile: This sort of sibling bonding is too intense. At the same time, I’m in love with Kent AND Gray. So. That’s fun. This story is going to be the death of me.

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How am I supposed to even make a coherent response to this update after that final reveal

Um, K I love you, the “Nick is all I have left” option broke me, you have shattered my mind and I’m gonna go stare at a wall for a bit and get my sanity back

Oh hey Nick is back on the stats screen :crazy_face:

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Okay, so now that initial shock is over. I just want to say -

There is an extremely small part of me that wishes that Noh is in our head instead of Nick. Making us believe that it’s Nick instead because why not. Makes manipulation a lot easier.
tenor

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To be fair, it wouldn’t surprise me if Noh was in our head already in the bathroom scene. The thoughts of ‘no, no, you don’t need to be there, you can do that later’ came across to me upon re-read like someone actually in Button’s head redirecting them to the bathroom.

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You can never rule out weak bladders.

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This is perfect for that last scene.

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OH. MY. GOSH!
THE CLIFFHANGER!!!

Short Spoiler Rant

HE LIVES! HE’S ALIVE! :sob:
He’s in MC’s head, but he’s alive! How?! And MC’s mind is actually useful?!? What?!
All these ments and the zero is the only one that can hear Nick!!! (or so it seems).
Could this be…the power of love? :astonished:

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I love the new update! :heart_eyes: I can’t really write any coherent details here since I’m still lamenting over the lost relationship between Kent and my MC… I feel so guilty about using his dogs to win the assignment and I already apologized but he didn’t led Anti to me this playthrough. I feel like crying :sob: I don’t even know if I should flirt with him right now or leave and never show my face ever again.

Aside from my broken heart, I’m kind of doubting it’s Nick because of the recent events like… The bombing, he’s in a coma and now he’s inside our mind?! I mean it’s too convenient but if it’s really Nick then… Welcome to the paradise called my mind, Brother!

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Presents the author with a bouquet of aconite blossoms to express my adoration and devastation after this update. I was looking forward to reading it after my test today and it was more than worth the wait ;-; I love all these freaking characters so much. (now if only glitch would stop setting off my buttons danger meter by knowing all her private info)

On another note I’m not convinced Noh had Button plant the bomb. They seem like the slow takeover type and going from planting a subtle impulse (like humming) to compelling you to go to the bathroom was already a pretty big leap. On top of that, a ceramic crock pot thats been sitting around the office for 4 years would make a great hiding place for a bomb. And it would explain why Nick was standing right next to it when it went off.

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Oh wow, I didn’t even consider that about the crock-pot possibly holding the bomb.

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I am literally crying. This was so good written !!!
the emotional turmoil and at the same time the numbness that was just perfect :ok_hand:

I look forward to the next scene with Gray. Nick is really important to him and I could imagine that he feels devastated and guilty. For RO path maybe even a hug :hugs:

Your writing was excellent as always.

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:sob::scream::scream:

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