Meteoric (horror/death metal band WIP) (5/8 Chapters, 68k words)

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All I can imagine is that the mic sounds like Nathan Explosion.

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By the way who’s the bassist in the band?

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Azure

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Oh ok i assumed it was but I might if skimmed over the fact as I got a little excited about seeing the mic and skimmed over it :+1:t2:

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@Lucas_Gendron You’ll see her play a little bit in each of the songs, but especially the groovy and catchy one

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Good to know! i picked the metal route because i couldn’t resist and the concept of a lead singer who doesn’t listen to metal pull up to a gig and bust out vocals like that is amusing

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they’re all metal routes :wink:

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True, metal has so many different sub-genres and those genres have been influenced by so many different bands! What sub-genre is the “dark metal sound” going to be?

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The band is a death metal band, and the MC’s choices will effect styles within that genre

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Ohhh ok that’ll be interesting to see/hear!

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This is a cool W.I.P! I enjoy the story’s unique premise, I feel like there aren’t that many W.I.Ps that explore the “[reward here]… for a price” concept and this is pretty welcome.

I do wonder how bad the tribute requirements are gonna get as time goes on, though.

Here are some typos I found:

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@bow_kid Thank you :slight_smile: and good eye. I’ll fix these typos soon.

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Hey everyone, a new link is up for the new demo website. I also fixed a handful of typos that you all pointed out.

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Since this is music x devil i expect maybe you will add some sexual thing in future of the game since devil worship is always equal some kinda sexual ritual if it still align with your writing. Also good demo

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I like that idea in general but Kanibor is non-humanoid so the spirit won’t be sexual in this story

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No. i mean sex ritual like orgy, sex with virgin or something (it’s little bit embarrassing saying this loud, i read too much occult book lol)

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ohh, yeah, maybe :slight_smile:

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Nah as i said don’t need to force yourself if it not align with your writing plans :+1:t2::grin:

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Update:

Chapter Three is up on the beta! This chapter is 12k words, bringing the total word count to 32k words. In this chapter, you play your first show, but discover how costly Kanibor’s price can be.

Typo spotting, bug spotting, and general feedback described in the original post are super appreciated. I hope you enjoy, and rock on. :grin: :metal:

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