Mass Mother Murderer [Teaser, 3k words]

nonbinary-inclusive
gender-choice
young-adult-fiction

#1

Hello, everyone, I’m Samuel, the author of The Magician’s Burden, The Enchanter’s Misery, and Winter of the Bovine. I have a new WIP ready for testing, and it’s unlike anything I’ve ever written before.

Summary:

For once, you were telling the truth. You really didn’t kill your little sister. You simply watched her drown.

Mass Mother Murderer is an epic medieval fantasy/thriller/horror/romance story where you play as the most evil villain in CoG history.

What there will be when the story is complete:

  • 250k words total
  • play as a serial killer bent on getting revenge by any means necessary
  • play as female, non-binary, or male; romance males, females, both, or no one at all
  • 4 ROs: 2 male, 2 female
  • play as a magician and choose between 3 different kinds of black magic
  • dozens of stats detailing your relationships, skills, attributes, knowledge, and more.

Demo Link: https://dashingdon.com/play/mastersamuel/mass-mother-murderer/mygame/index.php?cb=39838

If you enjoyed this demo, consider leaving a like so others will try it too. >:)

Demo Word Count:
Chapter One: 3k (so far)
Chapter Two: ?
Chapter Three: ?
Chapter Four: ?
Chapter Five: ?
Chapter Six: ?
Chapter Seven: ?

My facebook page: www.facebook.com/samuelharrisonyoung

Who are your favorite characters? Mass Mother Murderer [Teaser, 3k words]

What magic types did you choose to have? Mass Mother Murderer [Teaser, 3k words]


Are there any CoGs or hosted games, with a mass murderer as mc?
#2

This is pretty dark. But if you want to go dark…
For research purposes into the description of the mother character, these (apparently) are the eyes of an actual killer:

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#3

Sure, but Edina isn’t a murderer, just a sociopath. :stuck_out_tongue:


#4

Just from this little teaser I can already tell it’s gonna be amazing! But, you have so many WIP out it’s amazing that you already wrote up this teaser! I applaud you my dear. :clap:t4::clap:t4::clap:t4::clap:t4::clap:t4:


#5

Ok, so maybe something like this?

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#6

Looking forward to this one! :smile:


#7

Meh, not my cup of tea… Or pool of bloody water -Shudders- I tend to love playing the good, Hero sooo maybe throw in some moral choices in there?

Like, MC is trying to reason with self. Or maybe have it so that the MC has a split-personality, now that would be interesting!


#8

Now, this is the kind of WIP/Game i’ve been waiting for years.

Really looking forward to it.

1 Question though: What kinds of magic will you be able to use?


#9

Thanks! Yeah, 3 is an unwise amount to have at once, but I’m an impatient man, haha.

@Carlos.R
But Edina is pretty xD

@SneakyFantasy
The entire point of this story is to let the readers be the baddest baddie in CoG history. It’s a story about a sociopathic serial killer. If you want moral choices, I’d suggest my other stories: Winter of the Bovine, The Magician’s Burden, and The Enchanter’s Misery. :slight_smile:

@Zarzunabas

I’ll be brainstorming the plot, magic sets, characters, etc, as I finish up Bovine. :slight_smile:


#10

I love it. Please tell me that the MC is only spewing selective truth. We didn’t kill her, we only watched them drown…but then again…there’s nothing there to indicate as to why she drowned.


#11

The MC is a liar to everyone including themselves, so you never know. :wink: But Efastia’s fate will be revealed through several flashbacks dispersed throughout the story.


#12
How about....?


#13

Nah, i like the first one. @Carlos.R back in the medieval era ,that, was pretty.


#14

There we go, haha. :stuck_out_tongue:


#15

:crazy_face: Can I be a cannibalistic serial killer?! :fork_and_knife:


#16

I haven’t planned on that specifically but it could be a possibility!


#17

Or you could just like breakfast and be a cereal killer…
(Ok, I’ll show myself out now…)


#18

So @Samuel_H_Young, what’s your inspiration for this WIP and just wondering, on a scale of one to ten, how scarred will you be after the game ?


#19

I find serial killers interesting (though obviously also repulsive and evil.) This is mainly because of the “masks” they wear 99% of the time. I also figure it’s high time CoG has more villain games.

Hmm…that’s hard to say at the moment, though I will boldly say that this will undoubtedly end up being the darkest story in CoG’s library.


#20

So essentially, I’ll be scared s**tless, best case scenario or get a messed up mind, worse case scenario. Well, you have the green light to give us nightmares. Have fun writing.