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Hey, everyone, I just noticed that we’re at 187 likes on this thread, which is crazy to me since I’ve never had anything like that level of interaction and interest in my WIPs before. I’m a couple days away from being done with Chapter 4, so when we get to 200+ likes, I’ll post this next major update.
MAJOR UPDATE:
Chapter 4 is now on the demo. It amounted to 18k, which brings to the total wordcount of the demo to 54k words and the playthrough length to 28k words. One character is murdered, and three more are introduced: Kel, Kat, and Mercier.
This chapter is not polished or proofread whatsoever, so typo spotting/bug spotting/feedback/comments are especially appreciated, but don’t bite my head off or act like I’m stupid if I missed something or if there’s something that seems rushed or strange to you.
I hope you enjoy!
ive been tryying to play it but whenever i try to get past chapter one it wont let me
You’ll have to upload a screenshot so the author can figure out the problem.
Is some text missing in this paragraph?
Also wanted to say, that I love stats mechanics in your games, @Samuel_H_Young, that every our action have some impact on MC’s personality and skills.
Yeah, I got that one too.
There’s supposed to be text there based off of an *if statement but I must have missed something. I’ll fix that later.
Thanks! I always try to make each choice matter, if even in just a small way.
As the two of your exit the guardhouse and begin to walk down the dusty path, he gives you a mischeivous sort of smile
mischievous
or even just a bit of information that could further case.
Further the case
Will there be ways to decrease our evil stat is it just like that for show
Could we plant evidence to incriminate others in the murderes as that would seem like something that a sociopath would do
Nah man. We are permantely pure evil.
inching the bridge of this nose and squeezing his eyes shut,
His
Abella stays silent, lookin grim,
Looking
The Avarice and Callous stats will permanently stay at 100% to emphasize a point.
Yes, most likely.
A new update! Let me put on my serial killer glasses, quick!
Loved the update, the game is only getting darker as it progresses. Margo’s death actually made me wince, I know we’re supposed to be playing a demented character but that poor lady, we made her suffer so much. Also, I have managed to charm all four of Abella, Garad, Devero and Cherihl off their feet and even though the interrogations didn’t go as I expected, all of them seem to trust me so far. That reminds me though, is there a way to actually push the suspicion on one of the suspects by making them confess something (if you don’t mind answering that)? I tried a few times with different approaches and it never worked out.
Also, found one typo:
I may not be as oble as you think, but coming from you, that means a lot.
noble
Looking forward to more, this is most certainly one of my favorite WiPs as of now!