Mass Mother Murderer [8/14 Chapters, 106k words]

nonbinary-inclusive
gender-choice
young-adult-fiction

#868

To be fair, that cat will probably give you bad luck. Also, just out of curiosity, what kind of masks can we make?


#869

So far I have three choices planned: Edina’s face, a mysterious mask, and a monstrous mask.


#870

The moment you said that, I just thought, what about using your sister’s face? More psychological torture :smiling_imp::smiling_imp::smiling_imp::smiling_imp::smiling_imp::smiling_imp::smiling_imp:

cue evil, maniacal laughter


#871

Damn, that’s a really good idea, too.


#872

Holy crap. Even though I don’t agree with some things you said, I can’t deny that you are a really good writer. The torture scenes made me wince so good they were hahaha.
Not to mention the part in which you beat your meat, hahaha. That was surprisingly accurate. Keep it up!!


#873

That’s great to hear! Though you and a few others disagree with me on what it truly means to be a sociopath or psychopath, I think it should still be pretty easy to look past. I say this because the words sociopath, psychopath, and amygdala are never used in the story, nor will they ever be used in the series. :slight_smile:

Yes, those masturbation scenes were fun to write. I also think they were very important to the story, too, as they help show how truly fucked up the MC is. Just moments after brutally torturing an innocent man, they’re able to relax in the bath and masturbate as if nothing had happened.


#874

This is what happens when I’m busy with uni and have no time to play test. Reads the part where the MC masturbates WHAT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

Well, looks like my mind is going to messed up ville. Proceeds to dump bleach in eyes and ears.

I’m scared to ask the reasoning for this now.


#875

Hahaha. I’m going full in with this story.

But check out the comment above yours to see my reasoning for those scenes!


#876

Yeah holy shit man. They were awesome hahaha. I always chose Abella though. I personally stick to women. I’m scared to read when he jacks off to a half goblin though haha. How long do you think it’s gonna take to finish the book though? And will there be art for the characters like in TMB?


#877

Right now, I have about 100k written for this and 200k more to go, so it will likely take me at least another 6 months to finish.

I’m actually currently talking with an artist about making 5 character illustrations for MMM: a female MC and the 4 ROs.


#878

Okay I know that this is good news but I want to derail a little bit and ask, will you be continuing with The Enchanter’s Misery? Cause I freaking love that book too. :yum:


#879

Yeah, I’m really excited about TEM. Here’s my current schedule as far as HGs goes. Each bullet point indicates what I will complete before moving onto the next story.

  • Mass Mother Murderer and Winter of the Bovine
  • The Enchanter’s Misery
  • The Twisted Village
  • The Goblin’s Revolt

#880

Awesome also that little teaser for The Twisted Village is very intriguing. :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:


#881

First of all, great work so far, Samuel. I’ll definitely keep tabs on this game. If I could suggest one thing tho, it’d be to make it clearer when the scene takes you back to the past;p


#882

New chapter coming before September. :wink:


#883

unnamed%20(3)

Holy shit, man. How do you do it ?


#884

You have one day…?


#885

The story is panning out very nicely. You certainly have a knack for creating interesting characters. :smile:


#886

You’re telling this to the guy who recently wrote the 8k word demo for The Twisted Village in one day. :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

@Blmc000
Thanks!

@guardsman000071
Revenge of the Sith memes give me eternal happiness. And for how I write so much, I’ll return to my usual catchphrase. “I hate my job.” :stuck_out_tongue:

@KJM
Thanks! I’ll go back and make sure all the flashbacks are clear.


#887

@Samuel_H_Young I will be on the forums waiting for the next chapter because there is one day till September :nerd_face: