Mass Mother Murderer [4/15 Chapters, 55k words]

young-adult-fiction
nonbinary-inclusive
gender-choice

#768

All I’ll say is that in MMM, just expect the MC to be a 100% monster. :innocent: :zipper_mouth_face:


#769

You know, you can have the MC break the fourth wall and say; “Tell me, who is the real monster?” Just for more psychological torture on us readers :grin:.


#770

“Despite having considered myself a monster for as long as I can remember, it still comes as a shock when I’m confronted with the depth of evil that exists in this world.” Love you, Dexter :kissing_heart::sob::sob::sob:

Whereas if the MC in MMM just saw tapes of women being tortured, they’d just feel disinterest, curiosity, or amusement.


#771

MMM MC: Nice, a kindred spirit, maybe I should do something like that to immortalize my art.


#772

@Samuel_H_Young
Since MMM is set in the same world as The Magician’s Burden, does that mean in the option in TMB to pretend to be a killer that haunted the village some time ago, the killer was the MC in MMM?


#773

That would be a cool allusion, but The Magician’s Burden is set in Orilon, and Mass Mother Murderer is set in Rhys Falls a very long way away. :slight_smile:


#774

@Samuel_H_Young
Spelling errors in chapter 1.

You are a monster, and monsters need to hone their instincts and become familiar with their environment. As well as exploring the woods, you enjoy carving and creating camoflouge.

camouflage

but you can also craft weapons and camoflouges

camouflages

you’re vastly more knowleadgable about arcana than most poeple.

knowledgeable, people

With your position as the vice-captain of the guard and your illegal extra curicullar activities,

Curricular

Whenever you get the chance, you go to the sparring

Sparring ring

but it’s also fun as hell to beat up on the amateurs.

Remove the bolded word.


#775

I make the most vile typos. :mask::mask::mask: Thanks; those are fixed now!


#776

So I was told that there are gonna be tons of MMM fans demanding rape and cruelty porn in the story. Abort, abort! You guys have been found out. :roll_eyes:


#777

wait, what ? as far as i’v seen, people are asking to dial down the cruelty a bit if anything, no one is asking for torture porn XD

also you’ll never catch me alive


#778

He’s gotta get past Apple guys for it to reach everyone. They’ll allow the murder biw because there are horror genre games in the App Store. You put anything that involves directly interacting with rape the it’s an immediate shutdown.


#779

I have absolutely zero intentions of putting rape in the story.


#780

Then perhaps we should focus on what is in the story … any Dexter Easter Eggs planned?


#781

Sheeit, probably! I have a crush on Dexter, lol.


#782

@Samuel_H_Young
Spelling error in chapter 1.

Your focus is on Devero, who your consider to be one of your biggest threats

You


#783

but seriously, who said that ?


#784

Rumor is that you said it.


#785
Summary

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#786

I don’t wanna put them on blast, but I just thought the idea behind the statement was pretty ridiculous. Neither the story nor the readers are immoral. My fans just like dark stories and the story features some horrible stuff that is glorified by the MC, but rebuked by every other character.


#787

Eh, fuck it. Its 2018. If anything, that should have been expected. Its whatever. Not everything is for everyone. If only some people understood that.