Mass Mother Murderer [12.5/13 Chapters, 185k words]



Hello, everyone, I’m Samuel, the author of The Magician’s Burden, and the WIPS, The Enchanter’s Misery, The Twisted Village, and Winter of the Bovine. I have a new WIP ready for testing, and it’s unlike anything I’ve ever written before.


For once, you were telling the truth. You really didn’t kill your little sister. You simply watched her drown.

Mass Mother Murderer is an epic thriller where you play as a psychopathic serial killer determined to get revenge on your abusive mother by any means necessary. Struggle with feelings of intense rage, ambition, fear, and sorrow as you become the greatest villain your village has ever seen.

What there will be when the story is complete:

  • An epic story that’s like a mix between “Dexter” and “Bates Motel” but in a medieval fantasy setting and twice as fucked up.
  • 250k words total
  • play as female, non-binary, or male; romance males, females, both, or no one at all
  • 4 ROs: 2 male, 2 female (Devero, Garad, Cherihl, Abella)
  • play as a magician and choose between 3 different kinds of black magic: phantom, voodoo, and elemental
  • dozens of stats detailing your relationships, skills, attributes, knowledge, and more.

If you enjoyed this demo, consider leaving a like so others will try it too. >:)

Demo Word Count:
Chapter One: 15k
Chapter Two: 13k
Chapter Three: 11k
Chapter Four: 19k
Chapter Five: 17k
Chapter Six: 20k
Chapter Seven: 9k
Chapter Eight: 26k
Chapter Nine: 12k
Chapter Ten: 6k so far (sex scenes to be added)
Chapter Eleven: 10k
Chapter Twelve: 10k
Chapter Thirteen: 16k

Total: 185k
Playthrough Length: 80k

Is MMM the darkest CSG, as advertised?

Who are your favorite characters?

What magic types did you choose to have?


  • “Is the MC a psychopath or a sociopath? Can they care about others at all?” The MC is a psychopath, someone who is incapable of feeling love, remorse, or empathy because of abnormalities in their brain. They are cruel, violent, and completely selfish. Sociopaths, on the other hand, are conniving, cruel, selfish, etc, and have warped moralities. However, they can still feel love and empathy to an extent, and their condition is caused mainly by environmental factors.

  • “What will the MC actually do after accomplishing their goal of killing their mother?” You’ll have to wait for the sequels for that question to be answered, though you’ll get a general idea of where the story will be headed at the end of MMM.

  • “Why didn’t the MC just kill Edina when they had a chance in the beginning of Chapter 1?” The MC is far more powerful than Edina because of their physical prowess and strong spells. However, after suffering over a decade of abuse from her, they have become psychologically damaged to the point where she utterly terrifies them, and there’s a mental block keeping them from just killing her. This is why they are kidnapping villagers, dressing them up as their mother, and torturing and murdering them. They believe it will help them prepare themselves to finally face up to her.

Fan art by @koshi

Inspirations for MMM:

  • I was obsessed with burning things, mostly plastic toys, until I was about thirteen years old. I wet the bed until I was about 13. I am a kleptomaniac. Throughout elementary, middle, and high school, I was viciously bullied and ostracized by my peers. I was subject to physical and verbal abuse by my parents. After learning that all of these things are common childhood symptoms of serial killers, I became very interested in this subject.
  • Ed Kemper. Although he’s much more demented and vile than the MC, they still share some traits. As well as being powerful, (he was 6’9" and 280lbs), Ed is also charismatic and has a genius IQ. Most importantly, he had a deep seated fear of his mother, and his murders of other women were used as surrogates for her eventual murder.

Demo Link:

Are there any CoGs or hosted games, with a mass murderer as mc?
Shepherds of Haven (WIP) (ON TEMPORARY HIATUS)
What do you look for in a Villain game?
Most anticipated HG WIP?

This is pretty dark. But if you want to go dark…
For research purposes into the description of the mother character, these (apparently) are the eyes of an actual killer:




Sure, but Edina isn’t a murderer, just a sociopath. :stuck_out_tongue:


Just from this little teaser I can already tell it’s gonna be amazing! But, you have so many WIP out it’s amazing that you already wrote up this teaser! I applaud you my dear. :clap:t4::clap:t4::clap:t4::clap:t4::clap:t4:


Ok, so maybe something like this?



Looking forward to this one! :smile:


Meh, not my cup of tea… Or pool of bloody water -Shudders- I tend to love playing the good, Hero sooo maybe throw in some moral choices in there?

Like, MC is trying to reason with self. Or maybe have it so that the MC has a split-personality, now that would be interesting!


Now, this is the kind of WIP/Game i’ve been waiting for years.

Really looking forward to it.

1 Question though: What kinds of magic will you be able to use?


Thanks! Yeah, 3 is an unwise amount to have at once, but I’m an impatient man, haha.

But Edina is pretty xD

The entire point of this story is to let the readers be the baddest baddie in CoG history. It’s a story about a psychopathic serial killer. If you want moral choices, I’d suggest my other stories: Winter of the Bovine, The Magician’s Burden, and The Enchanter’s Misery. :slight_smile:


I’ll be brainstorming the plot, magic sets, characters, etc, as I finish up Bovine. :slight_smile:


I love it. Please tell me that the MC is only spewing selective truth. We didn’t kill her, we only watched them drown…but then again…there’s nothing there to indicate as to why she drowned.


The MC is a liar to everyone including themselves, so you never know. :wink: But Efastia’s fate will be revealed through several flashbacks dispersed throughout the story.

How about....?


Nah, i like the first one. @Carlos.R back in the medieval era ,that, was pretty.


There we go, haha. :stuck_out_tongue:


:crazy_face: Can I be a cannibalistic serial killer?! :fork_and_knife:


I haven’t planned on that specifically but it could be a possibility!


Or you could just like breakfast and be a cereal killer…
(Ok, I’ll show myself out now…)


So @Samuel_H_Young, what’s your inspiration for this WIP and just wondering, on a scale of one to ten, how scarred will you be after the game ?


I find serial killers interesting (though obviously also repulsive and evil.) This is mainly because of the “masks” they wear 99% of the time. I also figure it’s high time CoG has more villain games.

Hmm…that’s hard to say at the moment, though I will boldly say that this will undoubtedly end up being the darkest story in CoG’s library.


So essentially, I’ll be scared s**tless, best case scenario or get a messed up mind, worse case scenario. Well, you have the green light to give us nightmares. Have fun writing.