Haha, I do need a better way of putting that. Burning down a dozen buildings is uber violent, but I meant that he’s a calm and non-violent person when it comes to his temper and bare hands.
The MC is definitely uncharacteristically emotional for a psychopath, but this is intentional. The whole character and the trilogy will be based upon their implacable rage.
Though I will say that serial killers, even the capable and intelligent ones, daydream and daze off all the time. It’s part of their fantasy world that they want to create in reality.
I chortled at several of your annotations. Thanks for pointing out all those typos!
Yeah the only reason why I didn’t finish it was that I had class. But the again I started because I had three hours of free time and didn’t want to work on school stuff, I’ll get back to it now Plus I did say I would before, an even beyond that, with this name, it’s my obligation to be this thread.
I’ve replayed the demo over 3 times now and I still love it just as much. The story is amazing, the characters are amazing, you’re amazing; I just love it so much that words can’t express the happiness i get just from reading it. Please keep up the good work and take care of yourself, also please have this fanart of the mc to show my undying love and support (it’s not that good but please take it).
Lol nice!! And I’m a HUGE fan of your stories, i completely love them i can’t wait for MMM i read it about 3 times now and it’s amazing, ive never read anything quite like it. I also read the magicians burden and i can’t wait for the second part, I’m hyped and keep up the great work.
I played the demo,it was freaking amazing!There are occasional grammar errors,though,I forgot where they were haha…
Y’know,whenever I played a game,I’d first play as the psycho but some games didn’t have that choice or the villain route was dull compared to the hero’s.But this game…it’s amazing!Joy is a smart one.She’s fun.It’s kinda ironic that I named my MC Achilles on my first play.
Well, I’ve switched around the chapter count about 4,000 times because I keep adding stuff to the chapter outlines and rearranging shit, but I think it’s finally settled down at 14.
One of the biggest themes in Chapters 10, 11 and 12 is: Is it better to do something wrong for the right reasons or to do something right for the wrong reasons?
Not to mention that the MC would be willing to use Zaleth’s powers much more frequently. They would hate being possessed but wouldn’t have any moral qualms with whatever the demon made them do.
Yup, that’s also my impression, Zaleth is more like an asshole friend who keep trying to push you into getting drunk and throwing stones at someone’s house, he isn’t Mengele tier psycho like the MMM MC or even the other demon we saw at the end (given how he seemed scared of them)
Plus I did say I would before, an even beyond that, with this name, it’s my obligation to be this thread.
and keep up the great work.
