Mass Mother Murderer [10/13 Chapters, 142k words]

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#1212

is reallyinteresting sadly I can’t skipped the trigger scenes lol if some day you including a mode that skip the not consensual theme and all the sexual part in the torture i will read it but ast time i tried I almost puke in shock. what’s a testimonial of your writing skils


#1213

Thanks! Though I actually made a point not to include sexual abuse, and the MC even states that they’re disgusted by the idea.


#1214

I know is nor sexual abuse i mean the acts of the mc itself while doing the torture… and their way of seeing it. :face_vomiting: Is as shocking as it should be . I am weird I know I have no problem with gore itself is when feelings of the assassin and show or show sexual arousal that makes me emphatically connect with the victim. I am too empathetic to playing a game like this. Also it hits home for several reasons.


#1215

I haven’t found how to use the crossbow on Joy, I can’t get long ranged weapons above 16%


#1216

I’ll do some thorough stat balancing as soon as I get the chance. Previously I just used “find and replace” to boost those stats, but I still haven’t had time to test them myself.


#1217

Why exactly is the MC disgusted by sexual abuse? This is apparently a person without empathy, compassion, and humanity so I’m curious as to why they would draw any lines.


#1218

As a psychopath, they aren’t disgusted by really any sort of violence in general, but rather they just find the idea of them abusing their mother (and the surrogates) in that way to be gross because it’s incest. But they also just aren’t attracted to rape or necrophilia like many serial killers are.

But obviously the most important thing is that I myself don’t want to write about sexual abuse, and having that present in the story would also turn away half of my potential fanbase, and rightly so in my opinion.


#1219

I don’t think pyschopath are inherently repulsed by incest though and the MC’s education was such a mess that it’s unlikely he would learn that principle, an association of the act with his own weakness relating to his mother would work better as a justification IMO than just ‘well, it’s incest’, that justification only work while talking about normals people raised with western value

eh, when it come to fanbases, you’d honestly be surprised and guessing what people will like or not will only lead to self censure and a lose of originality, i mean it obviously doesn’t apply in that case since you don’t want to write that anyway but i’m talking more generaly here, don’t limit your writing because of what you think the fanbase would like or not, fanbases have knack to surprise you when it come to that, just write what you want and your fanbase will find you anyway if it’s well done


#1220

That’s actually totally true My wip for instance has been better receive anything I had written before and theme and fact have erotica content has surprised me like a lot. Still is hard to tell until i make demo public you never know


#1221

That’s a thing i noticed with a lot of authors i’v talked to (i’v worked as an assistant for a few too), a lot of them would hesitate to include something or even refused to include it only to be surprised when it end up being very well received or the fans start giving feedback on how they had hoped for something similar to what they hadn’t dared to include


#1222

I think because we put passions in something that we want of struggle with. “My moment was Fuck it i will write about that and i give a damn about universe opinion” Curiously universe think is okay lol but know return topic. @Samuel_H_Young is someone that inspired me


#1223

Oh, trust me, I didn’t hold back with MMM. :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: hence the torture, murder, and delving into topics like sociopathy, psychopathy, kleptomania, and pyromania. And the sex scenes in this next chapter will be anything but normal.

I think I stopped holding back as an author when I wrote The Magician’s Burden, as I started including erotica and lots of profanity.


#1224

I think in erotica part i will win you in weirdness lol but you beat me in the rest lol. But i go more for the kinki part


#1225

So for the MC, its less of a moral objection and more of just them finding it to be gross.


#1226

Precisely. It just comes down to their personal preference.


#1227

Honestly i hope your game start a trend of darker game because i just dream of a ‘choose your own adventure’ where we’re playing as a member of a family like the sawyers in texas chainsaw and one where we’re playing a Jason like slasher villain


#1228

At the very least, MMM will have two sequels, and I have also have two more dark thrillers that I’m working on, The Enchanter’s Misery and The Twisted Village. :innocent:


#1229

I swear if you kill my pet again i will start a chainsaw massacre even if i am more of follow a charismatic sneaky path lol


#1230

@Samuel_H_Young You don’t know how glad I am that you’re back. This is Alucard_of_Mordhaven.

I had that account deleted. After your battle with demons on here, I fell into a downward spiral myself and also began to struggle with depressive thoughts once again. Man, it appears I missed a lot. 9/13 Chapters now? Damn…

I hope you didn’t miss my mini fanfics and feedback too much, haha. Of course I’m happy that my favorite WiP is still kicking like one of my favorite authors, but I’m also saddened to see I wasn’t here for a considerable advancement. I do apologize for that.

Alas, I shall quit complaining and see what has occurred in my absence.

Thank you for staying with us. You are worth it, and your works are, too.


#1231

Well fuck, man, I missed ya! Glad you’re back. I’m doing better now and I hope you are too.

You’re in for a bumpy ride. :smiling_imp: