Hello, this is my first choicescript game. Am a newbie in choicescriting but a huge choice of games and hosted fan. I will gladly listen to suggestions and would love if you guys would criticize it appropriately.
I’ve begun work on my new game Mafia City. In it, you play a character who joined the Mafia with goals to investigate and avenge his father
Currently it has approximately 27000 words. It only still has a prologue which is pretty much just a character buildup, and its starting to look like its own game. If anyone has any ideas on what to add and what to remove from the game it will be addressed and appreciated. Thanks in advance
To play the demo, go here: https://dashingdon.com/go/3576