# Love♡Verse (submitted!) **URL:** \ **Category:** Works In Progress\ **Tags:** nonbinary-inclusive, gender-choice, romance, young-adult-fiction\ **Created:** [July 24, 2022, 12:37pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464 "2022-07-24T12:37:57Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 20\ **Page:** 2
**Author:** ![Rustem\_Khafizov](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/rustem_khafizov/32/154775_2.png) [@Rustem\_Khafizov](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Rustem_Khafizov)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 2:31pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/21 "2022-07-24T14:31:18Z")
> [@JBento](#): > > That first option either has one period too many or one period too few (to make it an ellipsis). Maybe, but I tend to use double dots to indicate a longer pause. I do that a lot 😅 > [@JBento](#): > > Is that “togetha” accent or typo? It partially indicates that they stopped mid-word, partially a Rykard reference 😅 > [@JBento](#): > > You held on too tight! (to the shift key, and ended up capitalising the “i” in “kinda”. Good catch! 😮 > [@JBento](#): > > HOT CHOCOLATE! IT EXISTS IN THIS GAME! I’M NOT FORCED TO POISON MYSELF WITH COFFEE!!! 15/10, would drink again. It even happens to be one of the RO’s favorite drink 😉 There are also tea options too 😊 > [@JBento](#): > > “from the other side of the table” Oh wow, I’ve read that sentence multiple times and this typo never registered for me somehow! 😅 > [@JBento](#): > > Oooof, T got dumped because their partner got the Urge towards someone else, didn’t they? Yup 😔 ---
**Author:** ![Kaelyn](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/kaelyn/32/141616_2.png) [@Kaelyn](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Kaelyn)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 2:34pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/22 "2022-07-24T14:34:05Z")
I liked it a Lot, fun concept. Found one: ![Screenshot_20220724-161837](https://global.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/original/3X/9/5/95024392f4d0a45a8c44dab3f88ae38a9ed85181.png) Guess it should be feeling ---
**Author:** ![Rustem\_Khafizov](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/rustem_khafizov/32/154775_2.png) [@Rustem\_Khafizov](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Rustem_Khafizov)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 2:35pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/23 "2022-07-24T14:35:17Z")
> [@Entracte](#): > > Currently fascinated by Noël, Léonie, and Tris in equal measure. Thank you very much; I’m really glad you liked them! 😊 > [@Kaelyn](#): > > Found one: Thanks! Another one I’ve looked at many times and didn’t notice somehow… Might be the green font I use that makes it hard to spot some of them. 😅 > [@Big\_fan1231](#): > > So many fun WIPs coming out recently!!. Thank you! 😊 @Ene It really means a lot to me that you enjoyed it! 🥰 I was worried this story wouldn’t be interesting to people 😅 @Kelsey I’m honored! 😄 ---
**Author:** ![Ene](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/ene/32/174135_2.png) [@Ene](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Ene)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 2:39pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/24 "2022-07-24T14:39:56Z")
I don’t think words are enough to express how much I love this story. ![a4301442fe683fb9e860e0cea26353e5](https://global.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/original/3X/0/c/0cf27c494d1e02df05515f879ca3259ca5dbf1c2.jpeg) ---
**Author:** ![Kelsey](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/kelsey/32/175778_2.png) [@Kelsey](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Kelsey)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 2:55pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/25 "2022-07-24T14:55:51Z")
I didn’t know how much I needed this until right now. ---
**Author:** ![TheDiamondTyrant](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/thediamondtyrant/32/184680_2.png) [@TheDiamondTyrant](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/TheDiamondTyrant)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 3:12pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/26 "2022-07-24T15:12:53Z")
Kind of excited to see where this goes. Keep up the good work! ---
**Author:** ![Rustem\_Khafizov](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/rustem_khafizov/32/154775_2.png) [@Rustem\_Khafizov](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Rustem_Khafizov)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 3:15pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/27 "2022-07-24T15:15:27Z")
> [@TheDiamondTyrant](#): > > Kind of excited to see where this goes. Even I’m not entirely sure yet, to be honest 😅 But thanks for your kind words! 😊 ---
**Author:** ![Vyndral](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/vyndral/32/173708_2.png) [@Vyndral](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Vyndral)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 3:15pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/28 "2022-07-24T15:15:42Z")
Well that was a fun little start. On a related note, ya’all better stay away from Leonie, I’ll fight you right now! 😛 ---
**Author:** ![Rustem\_Khafizov](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/rustem_khafizov/32/154775_2.png) [@Rustem\_Khafizov](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Rustem_Khafizov)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 3:17pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/29 "2022-07-24T15:17:37Z")
> [@Vyndral](#): > > On a related note, ya’all better stay away from Leonie, I’ll fight you right now! 😛 To tell you the truth, that’s my favorite RO as well, but I’ll try not to show too much bias. 😅 ---
**Author:** ![Entracte](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/entracte/32/144516_2.png) [@Entracte](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Entracte)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 3:31pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/30 "2022-07-24T15:31:43Z")
Julian: travels miles to see me without knowing my name MC: I sleep. Léonie: lifts a dude MC: _Real shit?_ ---
**Author:** ![SpanishBrEaD](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/spanishbread/32/118840_2.png) [@SpanishBrEaD](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/SpanishBrEaD)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 3:40pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/31 "2022-07-24T15:40:09Z")
This is greatttt I love how the last RO is where u can customize the person of ur dreams (ಥ\_ಥ)👌 ---
**Author:** ![RenataC](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/renatac/32/208154_2.png) [@RenataC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/RenataC)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 3:41pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/32 "2022-07-24T15:41:12Z")
I had so much fun reading this 🥰 How couldn’t I? We have a cafe… In Paris! Lots of hot people swooning over MC! I love them all but specially want that one - points to Noel. 😍 Hey @JBento here’s a coffee on the house for you ☕ @Radiantbliss Happy Birthday 🥳 ---
**Author:** ![Rustem\_Khafizov](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/rustem_khafizov/32/154775_2.png) [@Rustem\_Khafizov](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Rustem_Khafizov)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 3:44pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/33 "2022-07-24T15:44:29Z")
> [@SpanishBrEaD](#): > > This is greatttt Thank you! 😄 > [@SpanishBrEaD](#): > > I love how the last RO is where u can customize the person of ur dreams (ಥ\_ಥ)👌 Indeed! 😈 > [@RenataC](#): > > I had so much fun reading this 🥰 That’s awesome! 🕶 > [@RenataC](#): > > I love them all but specially want that one - points to Noel. 😍 I’m glad! Noel appreciates it too 😊 > [@Kitty\_Gaige](#): > > So far I am enjoying it and I can’t wait to see more. Keep up the amazing job ❤ Wow, thank you! I’ll do my best not to disappoint! 😊 ---
**Author:** ![Kitty\_Gaige](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/kitty_gaige/32/243676_2.png) [@Kitty\_Gaige](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Kitty_Gaige)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 3:44pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/34 "2022-07-24T15:44:57Z")
Omg I love this! I am a huge sucker for romance, I actively seek it out when reading IFs and if an IF doesn’t have it I am not nearly as interested. So this story is perfect! So far I am enjoying it and I can’t wait to see more. Keep up the amazing job ❤ ---
**Author:** ![JBento](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/jbento/32/152131_2.png) [@JBento](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/JBento)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 3:46pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/35 "2022-07-24T15:46:55Z")
> [@RenataC](#): > > Hey @JBento here’s a coffee on the house for you ☕ _hisses loudly_ ![image](https://global.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/original/3X/8/e/8e22558d8d41df9ee5a62b7624e262b5acdc8639.jpeg) ---
**Author:** ![Frankex\_2272](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/frankex_2272/32/184650_2.png) [@Frankex\_2272](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Frankex_2272)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 4:08pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/36 "2022-07-24T16:08:04Z")
The origin of the perception of soul mates is interesting and I identify a lot with the protagonist since for years I have not felt attracted to someone. Although this reminded me of a video where a woman asks her husband “Am I your soul mate?” and after he told her yes. she asked him, if you were in another marriage and you met me, would you go out with me? And the husband’s answer was no since he made a commitment to the “other” in that hypothetical situation and he would be betraying her or breaking her heart. That is why a debate arose in me if we should follow our loving feelings or respect the commitments we make in an already established relationship? I liked that tea is included in the administration of the Parisian Café > [@Rustem\_Khafizov](#): > > Even I’m not entirely sure yet, to be honest 😅 Love is like that. Like quantum physics it is unknown to us but also something very basic in our existence. It is very interesting the ramifications that this can have based on what has been reflected by many philosophers in our history. Also interesting in philosophers, I thought when I read that they were in Paris. ---
**Author:** ![\_Ashley](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/_ashley/32/168571_2.png) [@\_Ashley](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/_Ashley)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 4:10pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/37 "2022-07-24T16:10:04Z")
This was hilarious! Just when you thought there couldn’t be more, that café door opens and proves you wrong. Might have to board up the café… for safety reasons. ---
**Author:** ![Rustem\_Khafizov](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/rustem_khafizov/32/154775_2.png) [@Rustem\_Khafizov](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Rustem_Khafizov)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 4:11pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/38 "2022-07-24T16:11:17Z")
> [@Frankex\_2272](#): > > That is why a debate arose in me if we should follow our loving feelings or respect the commitments we make in an already established relationship? Yeah, that’s something I should address within the story. > [@Frankex\_2272](#): > > It is very interesting the ramifications that this can have based on what has been reflected by many philosophers in our history. Also interesting in philosophers, I thought when I read that they were in Paris. That’s a good point! I might try to elaborate on that in some way 😃 > [@\_Ashley](#): > > This was hilarious! Thank you! 😊 ---
**Author:** ![Frankex\_2272](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/frankex_2272/32/184650_2.png) [@Frankex\_2272](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Frankex_2272)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 4:26pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/39 "2022-07-24T16:26:41Z")
If a part of the Parisians would see this phenomenon from a spiritual, artistic and emotional point of view while others would see it from a more rational, scientific and pragmatic perspective. I say this because beautiful parks, works of art and cinemas are not the only things in Paris in contrast to the universities, libraries and centers for the dissemination of knowledge. 🤔 As well as not only the notions of love such as Romeo and Juliet or Pride and Prejudice, but in philosophical concepts such as Platonic Love (which has nothing to do with the current concept) according to Plato, or the psychological perspective of Sigmund Freud or the existentialists of Jean Paul Sartre and Simone de Beauvoir both French ---
**Author:** ![Rustem\_Khafizov](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/rustem_khafizov/32/154775_2.png) [@Rustem\_Khafizov](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Rustem_Khafizov)\ **Post date:** [July 24, 2022, 4:29pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464/40 "2022-07-24T16:29:27Z")
> [@Frankex\_2272](#): > > If a part of the Parisians would see this phenomenon from a spiritual, artistic and emotional point of view while others would see it from a more rational, scientific and pragmatic perspective. That’s kind of what I was going for with the different ROs, with Julia/n exemplifying the idealistic belief in true love while Tris/tan embodies the skeptical, pragmatic approach. The other two ROs also have their own unique perspectives. 😊 [Previous page](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464.md?page=1) [Next page](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/love-verse-submitted/122464.md?page=3)