Could u put update dates on the title or do you not have the permission yet?
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The pacing, the prose, the plot, the mc, the characters. All just.
I’m growing attached to my mc. I named him August. A soft name for a soft looking person who’s anything but.
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The questions with Song part, does all questions need to be asked to move on? What if you don’t want to ask some of them? Also there’s a code error somewhere, questions I’ve already asked popped up as available again after asking about family.
Oh wait, you can skip some questions, there just was a weird loop somewhere.
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Hail Sithis 
and yes I might add more cover stories down the line! For now, I wanted to include the more unique options so there’s some difference. And the guestlist hasn’t been included yet 
but the other guests are from all walks of life.
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Thank you for letting me know 
I’m glad the pacing and immersion was okay!
And I mean I’m no historian lol but I put the era around the very late 1890s - early 1900s. Probably the Edwardian era? But I take influence from the Gilded Age and the Jazz Age too!
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I didn’t want to gush too much last time because I thought it’d be embarrassing but 
to hear that from you means so much!! I really admire your style of writing and especially your ability to build suspense and atmosphere so I’m on cloud nine rn haha. I hope this doesn’t come off as too strange but I probably wouldn’t have started my project if it wasn’t for yours! So thank you so much
And only some questions should be required but I’ll definitely have to go back to that section and clean up since the coding there confused me a bit
(also completely forgot i could edit the title)
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Well damn, I’m glad I started mine then!
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Thanks for the info. I’m not into that as well but I was simply just curious. Keep up the good work 
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Good to know ^^ I read this and saw that 1 guest is a famous actor and your co Assassin says ‘’ I pose as a Noble’’ by the way I don’t trust him/her. I mean I litterly expect the whole time To be Poisened Or get stabbed in the back… You made me Paranoid GOOD JOB I mean I know how my Mc must feel
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Absolutely obsessed with this so far! And dangerously enamored with Song lol. 100% expecting that to backfire on me but willing to crash and burn if that’s where that ends up cx. Really loving the build up of tension and excited to see where this goes and get into some assassin based shenanigans~ Please keep but the good work and thank you for sharing your story and hard work with all of us!
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Thank you so much 
Song is very fun to write so… if it all crashes and burns well, that’ll be fun too lol Thanks again!
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Absolutely love this game. The mystery is thickening. I wonder if DIon is involved in this? Also I’m so much in love with Song, thoigh I have a feeling that I’m going to regret this. But it’ll be worth it I’m sure. Looking forward to the next updates. Do you plan to make any Tumblr?
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The author’s tumblr is here:https://lostlambs-ifgame.tumblr.com/
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Thanks for an update, that was interesting.
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Definitely looking for more!!!Can’t wait to see where my soft and a bit paranoid boy will go()
Yeah I know I’m a poor speaker so when I found the update I was like:
and
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I just played the new demo and WHEW- fans face- it’s heating up. One thing I love in this demo is the way you write suspenseful scenes. I was literally sitting on the edge of my seat the whole chapter!
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Sorry for the late reply! But thank you so much! I had a lot of fun writing the update lol
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Ahh thank you!! It’s so nice to hear that the suspenseful scenes work! I rewrote quite a bit because I wasn’t sure if it was tense enough or if it was just a case of me rereading it too much
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Bookmarked this a while back I like the first chapter, Song’s interesting.
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Love this so far!
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