Lost in your eyes (WIP) [July 22 2025 Update] [5 Ch, 280K words] [Vampires/Romance/Modern Dark Fantasy]

Lmao yeah, he’s a glass cannon lmao, spoilers (and I might make a short story about this) but
Vale is already over thinking about how he’d spend time with the MC after that and then slapping himself caues he’s been taught it’s wrong lmao

This image basically describes Vale pretty well

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Update time!

I’ll update chapter 4.2 in Patreon tomorrow hopefully and then update 4.1 on Wednesday!

Only 3K words of chapter 4.2 are left to read, so I’ll post chapter 4.2 on Patreon and 4.1 publicly.

More stoic dialogues added.

Lots of bugs and issues fixed.
Timeline inconsistency fixed.

Scene added in chapter 4.2 where M hugs J, that only happens if MC chooses to go on a poly route with John/Elizabeth

That’s pretty much it! Hope you guys have a wonderful week! <3

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I would like to express that I am absolutely in love with all three ROs (Melissa, Valentina, Elizabeth) and I would like to congratulate you on achieving this.
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Haha, thanks!! I’m glad that you loved em :heart:

Also, Update time!

Both Patreon version (4.2) and public version (4.1) were updated!

There are a few more choices, lots of dialogues changes, and scenes connecting to previous chapter.

There were gender and coding issues that were fixed. Some changes to the lore as well as the time line!

That’s mostly it, hope you guys have a great rest of your week!

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So hype! I was wondering if its be possible to have a reaction if the nickname Alex calls us and the nickname we choose later r the same? Jw cuz it’d b fun :winking_face_with_tongue:

Also is there a reason y turquoise is the only unnatural hair color available for the mc? Can wavy hair b an option?

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Hmm, the nickname that Alex calls you is kinda your nickname XD

Huh, thought I added you could put your own color. If I haven’t added it, you’ll see it in the next update! ^-^


Update time!

I’m verry sorry for being late for the update again, life be busy af :sob:

I updated the Patreon version (4.2) on Thursday, then gave it a quick read, and updated it again today (Went from 18K to 16K)

Public version has also been updated

I’m so sleep deprived, I looked at the previous update and went “Wait, what? I updated this last week’s monday?” but no, it’s just me notifying things were updated XD Since I posted an update there;

There won’t be an update this week’s Wed-thursday, I’ll try my absolute best to post it on next Wed-thursday!

Sorry again for such delays! I promise to work harder for you guys! <3

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Yay! I enjoyed the rewrite🤓

I noticed that after I picked the preset female character, my MC kept being called “unknown”

Also I didn’t kill n e 1 and passed, but the guy grading me said I have the eyes of a killer :sob: my caring stat is at 74%

I’m also having a little trouble pumping up my charisma stat past 60?

Got an error when selecting RO page in Ch2 pt1

Chapter name 4.2 placed too early?

Typo

Diction/Grammar

Missing the words ‘so you'?

Pronoun error

My MC is female,.but I got this scene w vale?

Repeated sentences

Error

I wrote back to Marcus and it said that I didn’t

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