Also found A stat didnt go down in the flirt option
Also i only got heart options during the test when i was not in a relationship wM and had no heart pts…
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Found some more gender bugs.
Alice is referred as a him after her whimpers stopped.
It’s supposed to be “A heavy silence started to settle, which was cut short by Alice’s whimpers, but it was silenced once the man’s hypnotic eyes fell on her.”
John used the wrong pronouns for the male MC telling off Gregory
It’s supposed to be “If you don’t let him heal and run him ragged.”
The MC called Melissa a boy when we chose to call her out on checking out the MC and the sentence isn’t written properly.
It’s supposed to be “Poor girl looked like she was about to pass out.”
That scene is hilarious. Poor Mel
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I found an error when I selected to take up the offer to train with Micheal along with Melissa
Is this scene incomplete or something
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I suddenly gained respect for V despite what they are like.
My MC was being crap to M as part of a play test which was difficult so it was surprising to see V teaching the MC a lesson especially with the test reaction. Even the Joker would probably lose it seeing that. It was written perfectly to make me awful about it. I guess even V has standards. I guess I have to use the pendant as well as that reaction to get the achievement of the perfect score
. It must have taken a lot of difficulty for V not to end the MC in chapter 5
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I don’t know why it’s doing that, some other user reported it but when I tried it, it works. That line doesn’t even have any option. Will have have to make a seperate forum for it ngl
Hmmm, you’d get a lower heart regardless (I’ll have to study more on how to make it so that if it’s more then a specific amount, you won’t get that option)
I uhhh, don’t get what’s wrong with this @hapamama93 (Is it because Vale chooses to flirt with you? cause he would even if you’re 0, he’s like that lmao)
V might be insane, but they have limits. The fastest way to get close to them is to treat others right. They actually won’t care how you treat them. They don’t kill the abusive husband in the 3rd chapter because of Blaine and MC and they also don’t kill the MC (If the MC has the lowest relationship with them) because of Blaine (And if the MC has high relationship, it’s cause they already have feelings for the MC but they’re pushing the MC away so they find the excuse of MC being gay.
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Basically V is a complex character who doesn’t actually care about themselves but can’t stand seeing others treated like trash. Thank Adrian Blaine is around that all we get is a slap on the wrist otherwise things would be different. Not sure V give a damn once the truth is about us both since they hate beings like us but maybe the time we spend around V might make a difference depending things despite what Virgil says about them going into kill mode. V wants the MC but pushing them away. Make up your mind V. Most of their problems are probably because of their actual father.
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Oh it definately does make a massive difference. You wouldn’t be able to get close to V if that wasn’t the case.
Both their actual father and the environment. When you live in an a place that constantly hates something, you end up hating what everyone else hates.
Update time!
This week really went by really quickly cause of how busy it has been lmao
The chapter is now 12K
Around 7K words were reread and rewritten.
Around 8K words were rewritten.
Only 6K words are left.
I’ll post the Patreon version hopefully next Monday. I fixed the errors and will update it publicly on monday as well just to make sure no other errors are around, massive thanks to Christopher and Happa! (I love you two 
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Goals for this week:
Finish rewriting chapter 3.2
Give it a quick reread
Reminder for me on what to change:
Add option on how MC can change their reaction to Alex/Alice’s grief.
Add more Adrian Interactions in chapter 3.
Make it so that John/Elizabeth isn’t flirting with the MC. (will get there, slowly and steadily </3
Hope you guys have a great week! (Also sorry for long wait in update >.<)
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rejoices for update
mourns john flirt scenes
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lmao, I meant that he’ll only show affection if the MC wants it cause there have been a few issues with the code 
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John/Elizabeth is the easiest to get along with out of everyone but Mels reaction to rejection is mostly stopping me. At least the build up for John/Elizabeth is slow despite how friendly they are as long as you don’t press their buttons. It’s understandable why it’s a slow burn especially how sus they were meeting them until we learnt the truth later.
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Update time!
Patreon version has been released!
Will make it public next week.
The chapter is now 9K. I tried to make it shorter but I realized that the coding wouldn’t work with how different John and Elizabeth’s treated fem MC and Male MC.
With that done, I’m going to take a small break, and by break, I mean add more options (Big thanks to @hapamama93!) in the entirety of chapter 2. Hope you all have a great week!
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Update Time!
The book is now updated!
Added a few options in chapter 2 where the reader can choose how to feel after loosing Alex. This will effect the game later on.
Added another choice in chapter2 where you can choose a friendly option without being stoic.(Big thanks to @hapamama93 ^-^) I may have added another option in the eating lunch scene (either at the beginning or during the lunch scene so you don’t loose friendship points or any other stats. It’ll just increase your friendship points.)
Chapter 3.2 is now updated, and it’s now 8.5K words instead of 9K since I wanted to look at it again to see if there weren’t any mistakes.
Chapter 3.2 was combined with chapter 1 so the total number is 17K. The entire book is now at 260K. I’m thinking it might go down another 10K before I’m finished.
The Checkup scene with Dr John/Elizabeth is now being refined. It’s going smoothly so I’m hoping to be done with it by the end of this week.
I’ll update it on Patreon hopefully next wednesday if everything goes well. Thanks for sticking with me you guys! ^-^
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Does Mc always have to share John to get any flirting points with him? Like can MC not have John to themselves.. I put Blaine as a friend but seems im still meant to pick choices like I dont mind if he thinks Blaine is cute or something… uh yeah i do mind lol
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Yep! That’s currently being worked on, I’m doing a whole rewrite and one of the major reasons is that I wanted to write John/Elizabeth as someone who’s dependable and loved by everyone cause of, both, their abilities and the level of matureness they exhibit but but instead I wrote them like… Well, what you just described them as but yes! That will be changing in the upcoming rewrites, I’m still at the part where John/Elizabeth were introduced, sorry for that!
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th for taking my feedback into consideration! Ur awesome!
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Hello @Silly_Cat_69 Thank you for your update!
chapter_2_part_1 line 768: Non-existent variable ‘pcname’ Error when I was fighting experimental werewolf and chose Melissa’s POV afterwards. I didn’t use the pendant.
I didn’t use the pendant and fought the werewolf and won. Yet here she’s saying that I didn’t fight.
On the same page, Melissa is saying that I used the pendant to fight and now I’m feeling week. One contradiction after another.
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Fixed and fixed! Sorry for taking so long to update it, kinda been busy with work >.<
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Update time!
The Patreon version has now been updated! Will be making it public next week’s monday!
Checkup scene was 9.1K but now is 8.3 so around 6-700 words have been deleted.
A few mistakes were fixed but and a few options were added so the MC can react to John/Elizabeth calling them nicknames (If you dislike it, John/Elizabeth will permanently stop using it)
Lots of Grammar issues were fixed.
That’s pretty much it. I’ll be adding
Since this is the first of September (Or well 2nd for me Sorry for the late update >.<) I rewrote around 35-40K words in August! I feel like it’s going to be smooth sailing from now on with me focusing more on coding errors rather then both code and sentence structure etc.
That’s pretty much it! Hope you guys have a great week!
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Update time!
Game has now been updated!
There was an issue in chapter 3.3 where it kept going back to the beginning of the chapter (basically a loop) which should be fixed now.
A chapter kept getting skipped due to a coding error but it has been now fixed.
I have also been working on chapter 3.2 now and will be releasing it for Patreon next week, public the week after. I’m hoping to be done with the whole rewrite next month (Only 100K words left to go, which means I have rewritten 180K words.)
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