I end the demo ! I just want to know, sometimes there is some pronouns that are both he and her for the same character, I have to say that confused me. Anyway, I really want to read more, who know if we will win or not ?
Thank you very much. When you want, please send your corrections and suggestions via email to gilbertgallo@gmail.com so we don’t bother other people in this thread with a wall of text
Thank you again ,I really appreciate your help
I really like your story so much, I always cared and loved Final Fantasy X and a tribute story is a wonderful way to read the story <3
I read now the whole thing you put up and I really need to say it’s amazing <3
Today I took a little break from writing and started “drawing” some of the story’s main characters.
This is one of them. Can you guess who it is ? Did you imagine this character differently? Do you like the idea of having “portraits” of some characters or images here and there in the story?