Land of Slaves and Steel (WiP) 4.21.18

low-fantasy
nonbinary-inclusive
gender-choice
adult-fiction

#82

Ok, did you know that even if the MC doesn’t ask or say anything to Erland in when he brings them to the “Dungeon”, the MC is still unsure as to whether he was joking about the flesh eating rats…


#83

I’ll add in a dialogue line about it tomorrow, so he says something about it before he leaves. That way, of you didn’t know about them, you do now, and if you did, well, he’s just making you twitch.

He’s a cheeky bastard under all that cool resolve, what can I say.


#84

emerges from a cocoon of blankets and stress

REEEEEEEEEEEEEE

ahem

That aside, I wanted to say, my ass is alive. It has not departed for the heavens. Recently I was suspended from my job, and that forced me to look for a new one. I just haven’t had the motivation or time to write. It hasn’t been a month yet, but at the end of the month I’ll release what I have of Chapter 2 finished or not.

That’s my update y’all, hf frolicking about the forum.


#85

This game looks awesome!


#86

This is really interesting. I’m definitely going to keep up with this and looking forward to more.


#87

I am intrigued. I love anything that has something to do with history. The Vikings included, naturally.
The fact that this is an adult-oriented game, with such triggering subjects as rape, makes it all the more interesting to me.
And both Sigrun and Freydis have certainly caught my interest as well. Cannot wait to see how they will be in the story.

Just curious, but why are there five male ro’s and four female ro’s? Again, I am just curious, this is no attack c: I mean, with Sigrun and Freydis I have nothing to complain.

Also, I never think it wrong that the writer puts their personality in some (or all) choices, it often makes it all the more fun for both the writer and the reader.

Indeed?
I am hooked.


#88

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