Kingdoms: Embers In Ashes[WIP] [OLD VERSION]

Calm down king ( 20 chars )

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btw what’s 20 chars???

True but im not talking about that. Kris as a commoner might be a lot more relatable to the audience itself since she can curse, act funny and do weird things that nobles can’t do because of their reputation

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She couldn’t, again, historically she would have no choice it would be completely down to the ruling member of her family (the duke), or ultimately the king.

You calm down. (ROASTED!)

Dude wow that’s too extreme calm down

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Okay I thought it had something to do with the game :sweat_smile:

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But… :disappointed: I am done with you buddy.

Maybe what @AmericanShakespeare mean about uptight is when Melissa told mc about protecting her family honor and just run away. but of course like you said, she have no choice in the matter

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@Sophia Back to the more choices thing you asked, I always took the comment, “I’m the luckest man in the world” as sarcastic. I was wondering if you could maybe add some sarcastic phrases? To help differentiate the MC’s personality.

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“Why are you seating there?”

Isn’t sitting better here?


Will Melissa still get jealous if we reject her but our relationship is high enough?


I’m attracted to her, but I’m also attracted to men.

This doesn’t seem like a rejection by itself, I think it needs something like the first two options as an afterthought.


Sophia’s… annoying me.


Melissa, How have you been?

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You danced with a random lady. hurray.

Cap hurray

(Yeah I’m being nitpicky, it’s my job)


Can we have a stat check for the dagger not getting discovered? I suggest intellect.


You see Sophia’s surprised face. She clearly didn’t expect that you would be considerate. While you close the door, you see her mouth forming the words thank you.[i/]

Italics symbol…


The thief is John Cena?

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The suggestions will be implemented once the next update comes.

Yes, she will still get jealous. That is one of the problems on the story.

Unfortunately, Sophia has a great perceptive ability.

JOHN CEEEEEENAAAAAAAAA “music”

No haha. Just one of the easter eggs.

Can I roll a D20?


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More importantly, can we hide it with magic? I have this nagging feeling that Sophia’s instant cast gift made her dismiss ever expanding her magical ability beyond simple spells, surely disspelling an illusion spell goes beyond her capability as a mage…

W-why do you guys want to bring a dagger in the room? :fearful: Now I’m scared for my life.

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It’s a free dagger, why wouldn’t I take it?

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Well…the way I see it, it is something purely pragmatic, considering that, one, our country are currently at war and as the prince, we are something of a high profile target. Two, her family has recently killed a prince that was married to them in recent history, and the killer seems to have no remorse over it. And last but not least, she is against the marriage, considering how the aforementioned murder events align itself with the current situation…lets just say that I consider it as a necessary thing to do.

no need to scare, its just for safety… ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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Well… Yeah… You’re right about that. When you explore the castle, you will encounter a mysterious person who may attack you.

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