he meant another kingdom.
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I meant in Rien PoV…there can be other kingdoms who are Davis’s enemy than just lucarex right?
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looks at the map Nope. Only Lucraex.
There will be some foreigners coming to Darvis, but you wouldn’t count them as one of the enemies.
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… … …hmm… … … … … … … …then will these other kingdoms help in countering the Demon threat?
Whoa there! The demons were locked, and did I mention there was a demon threat in this book?
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…didn’t you say something about a demon who killed Darius and stuff? I thought it’ll be how MC is killed too 
That’ll be another problem in the other book, not in this one.
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So in this one we’ll just be in diplomacy and charm the hell outta people?for most part atleast
yep.
did he? he has come and gone with many different names and faces that I tend to easily forget the “relic” of the past.- Logan ‘Forgetful’ 3000x
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I designed Book 1 as the preparation for the whole series. The other book, which you’ll play as the heir, is the one filled with a lot of plot twists and is the most climax story.
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"found some things
History is vague here, it’s lack of explanation. How about if like this?
The Demon Outbreak terrorized the world centuries ago. When all hope was lost, two brave young men, holding the divine swords which was forged with the blood of the Goddess Aella, arrived and sealed the demons in stones. But Darius was the one who sealed Voohr.
After the demons were gone, the dukes who ruled the land and villagers kneeled to Darius and proclaimed him as their king. Unexpectedly, Lucas argued that he should be also proclaimed as a king because he was the one who sealed all the demons except Voohr. The dukes and peasants split up and the two countries were formed.
“it”? I suggest to use “him” or “the baby” or “our child” or whatever it is you like, probably just me but I found the use of “it” is weird here because the baby is living being, not a thing, again probably just me.
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Thanks. 
PS. You should charge your phone… 
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Hi Sophia. Good (insert time of day). I was wondering, who will be raising Sophia once her after the attack.
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After the attack, she and her companion(im not saying who) went to Lucraex to seek safety.
And here I was hoping It was wolves who raised her
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I see someone is a fan of Villians. Hi five?
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Beasts raised her. She was locked up in the castle, after all.
Hmm I wonder how she’ll react to Javier’s and I amiability if she learns he raised me.
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