Yeah I’m getting the same error as well
yeah…you can not underestimate the power of a good insult and sarcasm
but if she were alive he will pursue her?
I am with you pal
#rightsoftheredheads
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Didnt you make like 3000 comments about how you dont like writing those scenes?
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So what’s been updated so far is there anything new
Bunch of discussion of the female MC play through. The usual back and forth about errors that follows any update. I’m not exactly sure how long you’ve been gone but that’s what’s been discussed today.
I hope the female MC playthrough is rather fair. We’ve had to deal with Sophia’s grumpiness as the prince for awhile, having the prince act the same would be a suitable way to balance it. Having the option to act as Sophia does in the prince playthrough I would gladly embrace as well.
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Sophia’s had the story arc planned out for a while. “Canon” Reinhardt will have his own personality issues you’ll have to overcome. Just like male MC has to get through to Sophia.
Also, I just find it odd to be able to rename “Sophia” to something else.
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I just hope Reinhardt’s issues are just as suitably frustrating.
Well, we’ve gotten used to canon princess. I’m sure newcomers will eventually find it weird to just simply being able to rename Reinhardt.
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The female path? 
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@Sophia I actually already know this but going to ask for confirmation is princess sophia hair actually not black?
I’m here! What did I miss? I was finishing a book O.o
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One clue: Mortals are cruel.
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This?
And Princess prologue is complete (with mistake here and there)
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Update
- Errors mentioned fixed.
- Grammar fixed.
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found one typo in Princess prologue
- “The river bay,” Aden said. "Their horses can’t pass through it, and will most likely head east to cross the bridge. “Rosebay is west from the capital of Slesonia.”
Aiden
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what I found in Prince path
- “We weren’t as well-off as others. I was the son of a farmer. Everyday was a challenge for us. So eveytime I reach a stage in my life, my father would buy me a full meal that we could rarely eat.”
everytime
- Melissa curtsied to the Queen. "Y-your Majesty." She didn’t expect the Queen to appear out of nowhere. You saw her legs shaking.
“Y-Your Majesty.”
Your Majesty
- As the feast continued, the clock stroke midnight. The King stood and raised his hand, and the people stood up.
struck
- "It is a great feast, as my son, Karlos, has reached his 2nd stage in life. He was born under the moon, and will be a man under it. You will be thy witness in this glorious feast!.
Fullstop/dot is unnecessary after exclamation mark.
- Your heart ached. Melissa was so beautiful. She has grown from a little child that you once met, to a beautiful woman walking in the aisle.
on or down
- You remember seeing him a couple of times with Javier. A member of the King’s knights, perhaps. He has shory, curly, auburn hair and manly, green eyes.
short
Ah I see you already change it to “Prince Reinhardt”, why Princess Sophia father still “Unknown Man” though? Oh and while I’m at this,
You not changing that?
Also, can Prince mc call Princess Sophia “my dear” at least once? (I want to know her reaction)
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You mean in the wedding night or in the future?
In the future, Karlos don’t want to get burned because he said it at the wedding night.
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Yes, I’ll be sure to add that. 
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