Kingdoms: Embers In Ashes[WIP] [OLD VERSION]

And one more thing, sorry for asking too many questions. Are RO can death?

I’ve read your w.i.p and wow that was some twist… Curse you dad. I hate you.

Still, the “dad-disliked-you” and “mother-likes-to-plot-something” reminds me of 7 heirs of orphesia ( correct me if i’m wrong ). Which is good, man… Seems that, i’m gonna enjoying this game. :grin:

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You can kill anyone in this story.

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Well you just became my favorite writer here

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Ah…looks like the tides of war are changing with the revelation of Kristen and 4th RO’s look. There seems to be defectors from both sides, I wonder how this will affect future conficts.

-whispers to self- Desertion means death… -sharpen sword-

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King Andus (young) And Queen Victoria (Young)

Duke Velas

Queen Alicia, the first Queen

Prince Marxus (Hair supposed to be gold.) and Melissa

Princess Sophia

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Damn velas looks like a true badass, and Marxus looks (according to character) like an arsehole. But still very cool… you said his hair is supposed to be blonder? I mean it’s blonde there but is his supposed be pale blonde?

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Ouch, you just have to group them together don’t you…

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All of them are rather gorgeous :hushed: king Andus and queen Victoria really fitting. (And I can see why the two king fall in love with Queen Alicia :neutral_face: )

Meh the fact that he looks like a douche makes it much easier to be in love with his wife, the grouping doesn’t make me feel any sympathy for him

Queen Alicia is gorgeous. :heart_eyes: I edited her hair though.

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They are married. So… yeah…

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Nah man, I don’t think the grouping was intended to make you sympathize with him, most likely it was unintentional and I’m just a paranoiac who sees implication in whatever people do, even when they themselves don’t realize it.

Or was it? Dun dun DUN!

Edit : I take it back, it was intentional.

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You know if you want you could upload a picture of your MC or how you think the MC would look like if we couldn’t choose his appearance

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People were half doing that earlier in the thread by describing their character and their personality

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I found a mistake about Melissa age, it said like this:
It was agreed that she will wed one of the princes at the age of 16.
But this said:
She is of the same age as you.

Aren’t that mean her age is 15 when she married marxus?

And speaking of age, what is age of each character? (I really full of questions today…)

Technically, you are older by a month. It was your 15th birthday when King Andus betrothed Melissa to Marxus, making her 14 years old that time.

The wedding scene between them started when Melissa was 16 and Marxus 21. One year later, you are married to the princess.

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Talk scenes with Kris or Javier.

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Alright I am changing teams…

GO TEAM 4th RO!!

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ALERT… @JesusT16… Another warleader has appeared.

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