Sorry I got more bad news.
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Allow me to express my frustration… UGGGGGHHH.
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I think everybody know that…pss…if you don’t know I call her kamisama…
crap!..I loose this indirects nicknames!
evil laugh
only for now my lady…disappear in the shadow
so he attack the village to captured/take back Katarina and kill aiden?
Meh. Wars ain’t coming.
And as for your guess, it’s a little bit correct.
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It’s lunch break here… Any questions?
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For the sleep deprived, can you spell out the answer for everyone instead of having people play 20 questions? 
Is the Aiden arc Chapter 1 or are we still in the prologue?
How do you plan on spacing Sophia’s story out, is her Chapter 2 going to be like Rein’s chapter 2, etc.?
Are you going to be reusing some elements of the story, i.e. descriptions?
How do you intend on tackling the God of Creation? Where is his feminine counterpart at? I see the two of them talking to the two souls they’re fixing to spin out into the world, since both seem to play a major role in the upcoming events.
How much time do you have for questions?
Prologue.
Yeah, it’s the same as Rein. Chapter 1 is about childhood scenes. Chapter 2 is about the marriage.
Description, yes. 
The choosing the gender part? The god of creation will speak to you first, and will ask your gender. Before you could play the story you want, the goddess of life will send you off to the mortal world.
Buuut… I still need to read more books before I can put a full description in the choosing part.
30 mins.
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What kind of books are you reading?
How involved will the Divine be in both paths?
Will either character have an opportunity to try to find out about what happened the day soldiers came for Sophia’s mom?
Do you get the chance to judge the guilty parties?
Beyond our two kingdoms and the lands to the north, are we going to interact with any other cultures of men? (Not counting demons.)
What is the end game for both arcs? Are you trying to take your own throne, unite the lands or just survive the demons and not care about either nation?
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Fantasy stuff, and I’m currently reading GoT.
They will not really change the mcs path. They’re role is all about blessing the mc strength and stuff if they find you worthy.
Yes.
Reinhardt = will learn through Sophia.
Sophia = she experienced it.
Yes. Sophia is naturally in the state of revenge mode, so she will try to have her revenge. Either punish them justly, or just murder them.
Yes, yes. That’s one of the features.
Survive the demons? Cross that idea out. They’re not really a big part in this book.
The end game will be in their early twenties. Unite the kingdom, take your throne and etc will be available in both POVs.
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What other cultures will we meet? (Something like the Dothraki?)
Are there going to be multiple religions like in the Song of Fire and Ice series?
Is reincarnation going to play into this in any way? (Like the Wheel of Time series, if you ever read it.)
Have you come up with new ideas for the people at the tournament? (I.e. a fortune teller?)
What are you looking forward to writing in Sophia’s path?
How are you today?
How much of a plot adjustment will you have to make if Sophia is the one who is more “martial” than Reinhardt? Would she fight in his place in the tournament if he tried to fight but is the magical bookworm of the two?
What unique options will Sophia have over Reinhardt?
No, nothing like dothraki. Youll get to see the Lucrasian culture, Darvasian culture, Northmen culture and several cultures of villages.
There are only two religions here in this book. The religion in darvis, lucraex and slesonia and the beliefs of the north.
Nope.
Yep.
The scene where she experienced her traumatic past.
Yeah. Sophia can join the tournament and beat Reinhardt. 
Consummate the marriage.
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Hmm, should I launch another question volley or are you out of time?
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You can, but I will answer it later.
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Alright, for later then…
While I am sure this would increase the relationship with Rein, will it affect anyone else? Are you going to use a false choice to let the user figure out their feelings or just lwave it alone?
If they start early, or even where you intend a “physical” relationship to develop later, is Sophia going to be pregnant with the child in the sequel or is it just something you don’t want to write in early and will likely be epilogue fodder?
We know of the one child in the sequel, will there be FULL siblings? Not counting possible bastards with a promiscuous Rein.
You mentioned how Sophia is not traveling with maids and Clithus didn’t show up until the day after the wedding, is that going to be filled in during the Sophia POV?
Is Mel going to douse Sophia with water in the Sophia path or not? For some reason, that amuses me. (It may be the lack of sleep.)
Can Sophia engage in one night stands with knights or lordlings? (Ugh, don’t want to think about that.)
Who would win: Sophia or Andus?
what I found
“It would be my pleasure, Your Majesty.”
“You’re too kind, Your Majesty. But I am a lowly servant.”
I don’t think “Away” should be capitalized, but I could be wrong.
*fake_choice
*hide_reuse *if (love_mel = true)
#"First you took Melissa away from me, and now you want me to marry a Lucrasian princess?"
I don’t know why but the *hide_reuse not working, when I choose this choice I still can choose it again.
- “You know that I will always follow your orders, father. I will do my best to maintain the this contract.”
I found that the is unnecessary there, but it may just me.
- “No, Your Highness,” she said. “I am not married nor betrothed to anyone at the moment. My father has is still looking for a suitable suitor for me.”
This may just me, I found that has is unnecessary here.
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Melissa and Queen Vicky. 
Something like in Guin, where you are asked whatever you are feeling.
Yeah, I will probably write it somewhere in the end to avoid myself stressing out.
Full siblings? Haven’t really thought of that, but I think I won’t code that. It basically is one child per RO, and it would be messy if Rein took the ROs as concubines.
Yes. After all, you’ll get the chance to see her perspective.
She may, if you provoke her when she talks to you.
Of course.
Andus, if his feet wasn’t cut down.
No one got it? Fine. Another clue…
The Baron.
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Update
Version 2.6
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Error(s) mentioned was fixed.
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Sophia’s POV is complete.
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Grammar errors fixed.
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“N-no, your Majesty,” the knight cleared his throat. “I believe the King is waiting for me. I must leave your presence.”
Your (since it’s capital Y everywhere else)
“Thank you.” The boy said, and then turned to you. He looks at you with"What name did my father gave to him?"
Why is there a with? sentence would be better if he just said it…
Edit:- no “to” required What name did my father give him? 
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