Fixed the mentioned errors. Thank you for reporting it. 
I forgot to put the save code, my bad.
Edit: Should be fixed by now.
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@Sophia
“Choose,” the God of Creation said. “In which path you will choose, lies a different journey ahead.”
Doesn’t sound quite right like this. Maybe try ‘For each path you choose lies a different journey ahead.’
She smiled despite this tiresome
Despite their
The first time he served as a servant
Sounds redundant here, try ‘worked as a servant’
and was often scolded by the head maid
Often is unnecessary there.
wearing plate armors, and held a lit torch
Plate armor also ‘held lit torches’ or ‘carried a lit torch’
yet that does not apply in their situation now.
‘yet not now’ might sound better.
as he look at her eyes
Looked
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Sits on my chair and drinks tea
so chaotic
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Seriously?.. 
You don’t see her like this everyday. It’s usually the other way around 
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In errors, right? 
You just crushed me with that emoticon. Argh Yes
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Picture the puppy eyes, Dungy, picture them xD
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No I shall not do it. No…noo…
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Just picture the big, sad, watery puppy eyes. 
xD
Sophia just broke Dungy with a single emoji, omg xD
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Dungy…
I get the feeling that Sophia’s not gonna get over the nickname xD
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Mee too I think I am gonna sit over there for now.
Oh, you want yours too? Hi Dancy.
I feel like there is a trend going on with these names 
It’s rain. Her nickname is rain.
Hey there, Wavey. 
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