sighs How much is the bug spray?
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Fan_art line 7: Invalid indent? Expected a #option here, not *label
I can’t do screenshots during pop-ups on my phone so I’ll just type the error label.
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Vodka martini shaken not stirred 
…
Fan arts choices are fixed… Hopefully.
¯_(ツ)_/¯
Oh and I also found this:
- “Give it one more try, Prince Karlos.” Javier tries to convince you, putting a gently smile.
gentle
Nope
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FIXED IT! whew! 
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fan_arts line 135: invalid indent? Expected an #option here not *goto
Only happened once so far
fan_arts line 211: increasing indent not allowed, expected 4 was 5
Happens consistently. Both of these are from the fanfiction section after the princess prologue.
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UUUGGGGGHHHHH!!!
inhale… exhale… now look at the puppies for distressing…
Summary
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Fixed it.
Allow me to demonstrate my frustration
Summary
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGHHHH 
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Fixed it!
20 frustrated yet thankful characters
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I’m still receiving those errors
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You jinxed it. Want me to double jinx it? 
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I’ll fix it tomorrow. Its almost 12 am. Gotta. sleep.
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what I found
Fullstop/dot shouldn’t be there.
Now that you think of it, today IS, a special one.
Are you making it like this on purpose?
- Yes, your Majesty. It is a pleasure serving your son since he has tackled all lessons with ease and confidence." Ser Javier replied.
Your Majesty(?)
This is suggestion:
- Duke Jerome of Brostiv is your mother’s brother. You have heard about him, but it’s the first seeing him in person.
but it’s the first time you seeing him in person.
- Alonzo, Rafael, Dan, Ernest and Melissa. Their dashing young sons were of the ages 17- 12. She is of the same age as you are.
This maybe just me but I found it weird this 17-12 instead of 12-17, again probably just me.
I don’t think “Your” supposed to be capitalized, but I could be wrong.
This also suggestion:
- However, none of this compared to the grounds to the right of the path. Lush, green grasses spread out over many acres. The grass was as soft as some of the rugs within the palace. Near the castle walls, several targets were set up for hunters and guardsmen to practice their archery. Even young pages and squires were taught how to use their bows there. Closer to the palace on the lawn was a very large, circular fountain. The fountain was made of marble brought in from the quarries within the kingdom. In the center was a basin and a fixture that was sculpted to resemble the first king and queen dancing together. It was supposedly built to commemorate the first ball held at the castle. The ground was covered in grass with many flowers that had various colors, although not as many as the garden. Guards and servants walk by the stone path that had a fair amount of tree each side.
I think it’s better to break this into paragraph.
- That doesn’t matter. She will marry my son no matter what happens." The lady proudly statds.
state
- “How preposterous!” Queen Victoria said. Her voice was high-pitched than her usual tone . You sensed a hint of nervousness from her. “Of course he would!”
tone. space is not needed.
- “Duke Clarent is here with his daughter, Melissa. As the Hand of The King, the Duke will be occupied with his duties. I would like you to entertain his daughter whenever they come here.”
Change they to she if it only Melissa,
Change daughter to children if it also with her brothers.
There might be more though since I still not going through this all.
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Please mention @Sophia ( author ) when providing feedback or posting bug reports as your post may get buried under other posts. ( If too many posts gets accumulated until she’s up )
pops into existence hey guys I’ve been gone awhile what have i missed?
Update, Bugs and a Sophia POV spoiler