Kingdoms: Embers In Ashes[WIP] [OLD VERSION]

[Sophia]

@DUNGEON_MASTER

Report received.

Aye aye, captain.

[DUNGEON_MASTER]

@Sophia

Aye aye, captain.

Spongebob squarepants is starting.
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No it’s Sophia
Clean the coffers. Sophia.

No not like that. Put those coins Down.

JK

[Vergil16]

@Sophia

HAHAHA I FEEL YOUR SUFFERING

( I only putting this for a better view )

[Sophia]

sits on her chair while drinking her tea…

So peaceful…

[Legion13]

Quite before the storm I say m’lady nods sagely

[Sophia]

When was the last time I spoiled something? Oh well…

Spoiler

Katarina could see tightness around Aiden’s mouth. He had been serving the royal palace since he was a child. The first time he served as a servant, he dropped several glasswares and was often scolded by the head maid. He would laugh at it afterward. He was trusted by his liege, and yet he betrayed him. She shared his unease. She was the beloved daughter, and the favorite among her siblings. Loved by all, and adored by her father. And yet, she threw all of it for the sake of this man beside her.

[Sophia]

Update

Version 2.5

• Error(s) mentioned was fixed.

• Sophia’s POV has a prologue already!!! yey…

[Jujhar_Sahi]

There is a bug in the scene where the MC is training with Javier says something about there being an illegal mixing of my lines and spacing

[Vattena]

@Jujhar_Sahi

There is a bug in the scene where the MC is training with Javier says something about there being an illegal mixing of my lines and spacing

At what age mc when you encounter this error? And what Choice that you choose?

[Jujhar_Sahi]

At age 9 and I’m pretty sure all of the choices don’t work

[Sophia]

What line did the error say, my good sir?

[Vattena]

@Jujhar_Sahi

At age 9 and I’m pretty sure all of the choices don’t work

Huh weird, I don’t encounter this error in all choice perhaps try to clear your cache might help?

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@Sophia
I found this error when choosing “Relationship”, “Map”, “Characters”, and “History” in status.

the errors

Relationship error:

Map error:

Characters error:

History errors:

[Jujhar_Sahi]

@Sophia

[Sophia]

Fixed the errors. Thank you for reporting it.

[Jujhar_Sahi]

It is my duty as a good Samaritan

[Vattena]

@Sophia

few (minor) things i notice

• The people worshipped Ureus, The Father of Creation, and Aella,The Mother of Life.

Aella, The Mother of Life, the space is needed.

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• the God of destruction. He brought terror to the mortals after assembling a hord of demons to terrorize the world.

Destruction, should be capitalized considering it’s title.

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#Red.
				*set hcolor "Red"

Might want to make it *set hcolor "red", the capitalization

[Vattena]

(double post…)

@Sophia

Fixed the errors.

The others in status is alright, but the “Map” still like this:

Summary

[Jujhar_Sahi]

@Sophia

[Sophia]

Fixed it. Whew!

[Vattena]

@Sophia
You know, I think you do need bug spray

when choose "Look at the Fan Arts."

when choose "Read Fan-Fiction"