Thanks! That makes the painstaking hours I spent editing this basically worth it!
I hope I captured the behaviors/personalities of the teams well enough?
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or course you did it!..I meas…you capture the fight and how we humilliate the melissa team,how the team melissa always try to be better than us ( sofia team ), how sofia treat us 
…and more!
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Maybe once the game is completed @Sophia can make a final poll based on which romance everyone liked the most? Then I’d probably make an obligatory meme congratulating the winning team.
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yeah we will had to wait…but for know all know who team was winning 
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(“No.” She firmly said. “Lay a hand on me, and I will kill you.”
Her face is serious.)
…
Kinky, now we are talking .
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Damn @Acrylic that was totally my favourite one yet, sad to see you won’t be making any more long ones but I totally understand, and just in case anyone cares my favourite bit was the cookie bit that was hilarious. 
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A typical day with team Melissa :
-Regards other ROs as ugly undeserving of love? Check.
-Regards team Sophia as a little bit- pitiful people? Check.
-Acts all high and mighty until we got our comeuppence? Check.
Seems pretty accurate to me.
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I’m in the middle of writing the story now. Is there any mistakes (not grammars.), suggestions or improvement in the story you want? Like adding more choices in a particular scene.
Adding more scenes in Childhood period.
- Yes
- No
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Add a scene where you pass out due to being drunk in your wedding night.
- Yes
- No
0 voters
Adding more talk scenes.
- Yes. (State who.)
- No.
0 voters
Talk sences with king Andus
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Interesting… So someone is interested with King Andus. 
He seems like the kind of dude I want my MC to be😅
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Talk scenes with Javier, we hardly knew him…yet he’s the one that has been raising us all these times.
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Talk scenes… hmmmm I wonder who I could possibly wish to talk to
cough Melissa cough
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You’re too predictable.
Why must everyone on this thread be active at 1 AM for me
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Its 2 pm here… So yeah… I’m online.
7:16 here. Not that anyone asked.
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2:20 am here. Just cause Kingslayer did it
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