Kingdoms: Embers In Ashes[WIP] [OLD VERSION]

I’m in the middle of writing the scene where you will meet the third RO. Then I noticed, the name Chris is unsuited for a medieval story. So here I am.

What name do you guys want for peasant RO?

  • Dalton/Delshi
  • Clayton/Clarish
  • Olvert/Olisha
  • Seden/Sedesha
  • Edin/Edith
  • Kridus/Kristen

0 voters

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What I did for today:
-Fixed my grammars. Hopefully I got all of the errors.
-added a new scene if you leave Sophia’s room. (INCOMPLETE)

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Has the link been updated? I was reading it when you posted and was thinking about the grammar errors.

The content underneath is good and I am sure polish will make it an easier read.

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So uh… For the people who voted Kridus/Kristen…

Kristen + Andus = Kridus

@DUNGEON_MASTER and @Kingslayer plotted this to happen.


If you don’t like the names listed, please comment your desired name. :smile:

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Did you encounter an easter egg when you explored the castle? If not, then you did not read the updated one.

Heey thanks. :blush:

Why did you betrayed us @Sophia - Kristen will rise and be the third ro

Mwahahahaha

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Hohohohoh… But another RO will appear! How will you prevail in your battle? :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

With King Andus III? Hmm…to ship or not to ship, that is the question…

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:thinking: thinks for 10 minutes:thinking: I’ve come to conclude that @DUNGEON_MASTER is not on a particular side in war but, I believe he’s having an ulterior motive :imp:

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I’m pretty sure he’s waiting to see all the ROs before he inevitably joins Team Melissa.

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B-but… I’m with Team 4th RO…

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Wait you’re not on team sophia?

Why would I be? She has my name, and my personality. But I don’t want to romance myself. :no_mouth:

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I’d totally wanna romance me :stuck_out_tongue: but I guess I see your point

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About Melissa…since she’s so innocent and kind in the beginning I believe there’s a possibility that she might turn evil once her husband ascends to throne and thrash the hopes of Team Melissa and might even be ruthless enough to tarnish MC’s rep or worse…:smiling_imp:

If she were to turn evil, it will be most likely because of jealousy.

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And it would make for a very interesting storyline! And at least as @Sophia said if it was lead by jealousy then we could be content knowing that she isn’t evil because of pure cruelty, it would make her easier to love.

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Grr.!:roll_eyes: Can you be any more gullible…

I’ll say this in advance. I will update once the market scene is done. You will be able to use your gold and buy some things.

:smile: that’s the very meaning of being on team melissa!

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