I knew, since you keep liking the posts. 
Sameee! 
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I can also write a example of a more romantic scene if you want (and by that i mean if you can handle the cringe).
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Nah, you’ll probably get flagged. 
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Cinematically? Inquisition, but you should also check out origins and awakening for some good scenes as well. There is also a really great fan made trailer for origins that’s worth checking out.
Story wise? Inquisition has my vote for it’s greater depth, personalization, and character variety. Tho the religious zealotry can be a bit grating after a hundred or more hours, assuming you aren’t sick of it in the first five hours like me. Still worth it.
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this thread already have Mature content tag, so I think it’s not going to be the case 
although just in case, maybe it’s better to hide it with blur or hide details
Besides aren’t there one time you write it here?
sees the latest request.
Oh boy. I see that my statement of “You’re on your own” fell on deaf ears. 
@Sophia, there are two sides to this coin. You could either set the scene up and “fade to black” before things get too hot and heavy. This saves you some cringe and lets the user’s imagination run wild. The other side is provide enough details but not too many as that would make this an “adult” game.
Which do you prefer for your series? I ask because you will need to be consistant.
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The first side. To not experience the cringe. 
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Copy the Stephanie scene and PM it to me then, I need to remember what you already have.
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Your writing be should be somewhat defined by the characters personality. Their doubts, desires, flaws, and habits are all important factors in how a character approaches a romantic interest. They may draw attention to a certain aspect of themselves, either to gain approval or distract from what they perceive to be a flaw or failing of theirs. That said, a character acts slightly different around a love interest. A slight shift in their manner of speech, a difference in the way they hold themselves, a change in an aspect of their personality.
Setting is also important. A character will behave differently in the presence of an audience or a love one. The right setting might put a character at ease while the wrong one could achieve the opposite. Choosing the setting would be an interesting way of controlling the courtship.
I’m happy to answer any questions you have on the subject. My twelve years of reading fanfiction frustratingly saturated in Romance has left me regrettably experienced in this area.
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And disgusted by this old fart being a creepy creeper. 
Well, I have tons of free time since there are no wars and the fields have been harvested.
That depends on how explicit you want it to be.
Im just here to make sure the thread is not shut down by the mods (for when things get a little too off topic, even for this thread).
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Sophia if you still need help writing a love making scene here’s a link to a game that was being made to hosted games maybe you can get some inspiration from the lovemaking scenes they have. gantron.bitbucket.io FYI tho it’s pretty intense not quiet like Boku no Pico but still intense
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I feel very uncomfortable with a 15 year old girl asking people for advice on how to write a… Love scene.
Edit: Just watch a couple of The Witcher 3s romance scenes, and I think you’ll get it.
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I have to learn how to write it and to improve my writing skills. (Determinationnnn)
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Same here I would feel awkward writing a scene like that even if I was an adult like I would cring so bad
Yeah, but it’s still pretty weird having a 15 year old ask about how to write that kind of stuff😅. Anyway, I think if you watch some of Mass Effects um, “romance” scenes, it might help. Or really any bioware romance scene. Alternatively, you could go back and read some romance scenes from other CoGs and HGs if you prefer it in a written style.
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I watched them before. Can’t recall when though.
Yeah, going to do that. Thanks. (Also @Dloading for that website)
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As her forum father, @Sophia and I have had “the talk.” It was just as awkward as the media portrays it to be. Especially when she went off topic with things that I didn’t even know about. (Before anyone gets ideas, I’m totally kidding!)
I think things will be changed around on those scenes and that Sophia will be ok.
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Its not weird that she knows about it. I just get uncomfortable knowing that a 15 year old wrote the… Love scene with Stephanie (becuase that was the first noble lady I danced with after the update😂).
@Sophia, no problem, Im always happy to help people not write weird scenes.
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So, would it make you feel better to know that I wrote a revision?
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