She may want more than that though, can’t risk to give her more power since she seems greedy
wait…in what part say she is greedy?
From her personality
I think power hungry not that different from greedy
I think power hungry is someone who is extremely ambitious and will do everything to have power meanwhile greedy is someone who is very stingy or don’t like to give/spend money
Let see… search Google nope, I got greedy right here are the result:
having or showing an intense and selfish desire for something, especially wealth or power.
hmm if lord google say that then is that…
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“My lady,” Reinhardt replied with a firm voice, “I believe you are quite mistaken. I said that I desired your company this evening. I said nothing about your…companionship through the remainder of the night.”
Reinhardt got up from the bench and bowed his head slightly to a surprised and angered Lady Stephanie, “I bid you good evening.”
Her anger boiling over, Stephanie spoke loudly to Reinhardt’s back. “You aren’t wanting to be with me and you’re not with your wife. Perhaps you are incapable when it comes to women?”
A hush came over the nearby nobles as Reinhardt stopped and turned to face her. His eyes narrowed at the woman as he spoke coldly, “Lady Stephanie, I suggest that you leave court and don’t you dare show your face again.”
Reinhardt nodded to a pair of nearby guards, turned on his boot heel and retired to his chambers.
(How I imagine my MC would handle that situation. Also making a guess on Stephanie’s attitude.)
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Hi,
This might be an overreaction but I’m kind of wary of this game’s basic setup. At 5 months I got - 5 Relationship with my mother and +1 EVIL cause I was a baby reacting unfavourably to a strange new situation. If I’d docked my daughter 5 Relationship every time she was acting up when she was 5 months old I’d have had to abandon her in the woods. And ascribing morality to the actions of a creature literally incapable of seeing beyond its own needs feels heavy handed to say the least. I’ll carry on a little but this experience was jarring. I can see that you’re just trying to set stats but the scene in itself is not conducive to what you’re trying to do. And it plain doesn’t make sense the way it’s set up.
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I’m in agreement. She tries to go off with my pants, I shall say off with her head.
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That was because vicky ( mc’s mother ) is like that.
And please mention @Sophia in the post so she won’t miss it.
UPDATE (Happy Forum Birthday @Vattena)
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Revised the Dinner Scene, yet it is incomplete and I will still add more dialogues.
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Added a couple of one-night stands. (The ‘lovemaking’ was cringy to write)
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The spar scene with Clithus is still not coded.
How do I put the story pic in Dashingdon?
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I already know it’s true anyway, I think
What pic, to be specific?
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This one. (But I have to edit it first)
And how do I change the title?
It’s still Two Kingdoms rather than Embers in Ashes.
- Start with the 3rd Chapter
- Start with Princess Sophia’s POV
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Ugh, I accidentally touched the vote 
Edit:
This is the cons of having big finger
Why you suddenly make poll about it though?
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20 curious characters
If only I can remove my vote… Oh well, I going to change it to Princess Sophia PoV then since I can’t remove it