Kingdoms: Embers In Ashes[WIP] [OLD VERSION]

Yeah I figured she wouldn’t, but will she support us of any of our ROs I mean we have a commoner cough cough Kris, Sophia a lucrasian princess that she disapproved of, Mellisa which I would be surprised if she supported , and clithus a lucrasian knight and as for all the heretics that just is wrong to begin with

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She wants you to marry Melissa, not the other ROs whom she thinks “Not good enough.”

Eh? She likes Melissa doesn’t she? It’s like her whole story at the beginning…

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Yeah I understand that but is she really gonna support MC and not think about what king Andus will say??? Or do … EDIT if he finds out …

She wouldn’t do it in the first place if she care about that, she probably assume that when mc take over king andus can’t really do anything and want to make king andus fall for her after that.

So yeah, you can say she quite over confident

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2 lies, 1 truth.

  • An assassin will appear in the next update.

  • I will add a potential one-night stand in the next update.

  • The dinner scene is fixed.

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I’ll spot a lie! :laughing: And that’s it :point_up_2:

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Obviously option 3 is a lie.

My character needs a one-night stand after losing the love of his life and getting married to a lady that threatened (and is probably powerful enough) to kill him against his will. Which means, for my dear unlucky MC, that it probably won’t happen next update.:stuck_out_tongue:

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So I’m in this scene…

The first you see is a beautiful young maiden about your age or a year younger than you who has developed her womanly charms perfectly. Her long blonde hair and lovely blue eyes, darker than the usual tone, give her a light atmosphere. She giggles at the women she’s with.

The other lady is a brunette, whose body is quite developed for her age. Her hazel eyes gives off a mysterious air around her, and sparkles every smile she makes. The beauty is surrounded by noblemen who she charms and seduces by her looks.

In the opposite side, you see a dashing young man who is about your age. You remember seeing him a couple of times with Javier. He has curly, auburn hair and manly, green eyes.

Is the description all right? Should I add more? Any suggestions?

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Team heretic approves :yum::+1::+1::+1:

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You used the word developed twice to describe the two women. Maybe use another word?

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Well… It’s for the people who left Sophia’s room… They may have a something something with them… except the first lady.

All truths or all lies. :laughing:

Now im conflicted. Stay true to Melissa, or sleep with another woman on my wedding night with Sophia

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You know that will be hard, right? Considering the amount of one-night stands in my story…

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Join the dark side and become an a**hole for one night :smiling_imp::smiling_imp:

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Phhffffff its easy. Since you already told us who are the actual RO I know to avoid everyone else, since I know they are one-night stands

:eyes: Ohhh really?? Then what is this post about?

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