Kingdoms: Embers In Ashes[WIP] [OLD VERSION]

Naaah I don’t think so buddy I don’t think making a story that much twisting would be good.

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NOOOOO
I’m still holding on!
to the death

hohohohoohohohohoho… Since he started a theory, then I guess you people should guess who the real father is, if the theory is correct.

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congratulation on your first game :smiley: im happy for you.

so first thoughts about the game it needs more character development with the other npc didn’t really click with Melissa dont know why although princess Sophia does intrigues me…

#PrincessSophiaFTW
edit1:
#JavierForBestDad

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Maybe ser Javier - he always looked after us like father so - my bet is on him

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That means that the duke could be your father, ser Javier could be your father or… I’m running out of ideas :sob:

Javier i guess or maybe someone from the enemy country meaning we are related to Sophia so the whole story becomes Got and i cry myself t osleep thinking that Sophia could be related to us… Please say no…

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I agree with that but I’m firmly on team cute commoner (neither princess has the right attributes to make my mc happy or indeed physically attracted to them at all), unless there will be cute courtiers and other princes later on. Hey, my mc here is a royal and a prince at that, so what can I say, he was raised to be charming, (and seductive) not honest and faithful.

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Duke is not our father that’s for sure, he won’t make his son marry his daughter - no one would. ( except ancient Egyptians )

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Yes, thank you for your advice. :slightly_smiling_face: I do plan on adding few more scenes for Melissa, once I know what kind of scene.

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Had a feeling King Andus is not the father… that would explain him wanting to screw up your life by taking revenge on the Queen…

what? um… whsiper wrong guy

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I looked at your profile, and I saw broken lenses. It was top reply… not top link… :sweat_smile: Sorry for the real author…

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Still seems pretty simple to me. He must die

In the end of the story, I would add POVs of the characters.

I could have sworn that was @Interestedparty … I’m not as smart as I think I am then… :pensive:

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you are correct. As far as i know i haven’t written anything hehe

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oh shit, I didn’t see ur response… my bad :smile:

It was interestedparty. I mistook Crow as the author. I saw his top replies, instead of his top links… sorry

Well as I said I don’t think she will do it, because adding too much twists won’t be a good idea. His eyes looked like his father queen doen’t know magic and as we have seen king have put a tight control on his people. It is not easy get away with such tricks and king’s magic council will certainly know of such tricks people aren’t fooling around.

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