Kingdoms: Embers In Ashes[WIP] [OLD VERSION]

So guys… Have you read Paradox Factor by Mike Walter(Lucid)? Did you noticed the;

20 Years Old: Your Wedding
24 Years old: Something

I plan to organize the story for a bit. Do you guys want to go through all the childhood scenes like Lucid did in the Paradox Factor or like in the story now?

  • Organized like Paradox Factor.
  • It’s fine the way it is.
  • Neither.

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I’m going to summon a @moderators here to remove ALL posts relating to forcing a person (aka rape) … please don’t go down this path again. This goes against everything this community stands for.

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Removed all posts regarding rape. It’s against the rules, and I don’t have the time or energy to give another lecture on normalization of violence, and how that leads to real deaths.

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So today I had some free time and I thought “What if I do some fanart?”

Here’s teenange Melissa:

It’s kinda quick and I didn’t had the time for make a decent background or dress, but it’s more or less how I imagine her.

Go team Melissa!

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Woah did you do this? Cause if you did then this is great work!!! Like seriously it’s good.

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Oh ma Gawd… :astonished: YOU’RE GOOD!

Kingslayer would be happy to see Melissa.

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My artless soul cries when a very talented person says something like

and I realize it is better then I could do if I had all the time in the world… lol…

Seriously, your work is awesome.

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I’m loving game so far but I do have a critique my friend and maybe it’s just a reflection of own Carefree nature. The the scene before you deck your father and you introduce yourself some of them were really ridiculous I’m like oh and there goes my immersion. Because this is a father you have an awkward relationship with. When you meet with him you’re probably want to have some air formality since there’s no actual parental closeness.

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Sorry but what scene do you mean? The time when you sparred with Javi?

I was getting ready for deep philosophical debate so I’m random facts about the Second World War. Instead This reminds me of when I was a teenager and Twilight was huge. Except I think this is a bunch of grown man versus teenage girls.

But for some reason the entire situation brings me joy.

[quote=“Sophia, post:1015, topic:27494”]
If anyone will ask, I planned to have at least 5 ROs. The person who you met in the party is one of them. :slightly_smiling_face:
[/quote] now you’re going into Harem ending dating sim territory. I hope you make it just as awkward as School Days with as much tragedy as Macbeth and Hamlet.

When you’re summoned by your father, in the later teenage years have list of ways of how to introduce yourself to your father from the formal to the ridiculous out of left field. One part of me give a good chuckle another like s*** there’s goes my immersion. But cognitively I’m going to treat it like a shounen anime inspired buy War of the Roses and king’s quest.

There are some people whom you can have a one night stand. The 3 ROs introduced are the main romanceable characters whom I planned already. If I will add more ROs, it wouldn’t be a serious relationship.

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I encoded it intentionally. Easter eggs are fun! :smile:

I wonder why others didn’t mention it.

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Awww so this is an Easter egg of sorts. It was an immersion breaker for me. Overall I’m really enjoying the game and I actually care about my older brother. From what little I’ve seen of him he seems like a genuinely nice guy and it looks like he actually cares about you as much as a Brother can of royal family, and what the vibe I get in the game if you guys only see each other sporadically. No he could just be buttering you up because of your stronger claim. At the same time optimistically I feel like he’s doing many things because he wants to show he loves you.

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What software did you use to draw it? Or was it hand drawn? I wish I had art skills, would have loved to make fan art.

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I wish I can draw on the computer. I’m fine on paper but the computer seems more clean.

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You’re not supposed to ask

Oh…sorry, my apologies :c

I thought you just did it for fun and planned to redo it before beta testing

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…I didn’t even know that was Easter egg in the first place

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