Yeah. I’ll add the dinner scene this August 20.
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Oh my god you added archery my life is fulfilled
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I find it funny how many people mention me around here. Even when I am asleep. 
sees early update
Well, my kid got his party early, I won’t complain.
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@Sophia might i suggest that if we choose the bow as the present from javier that we have the option to shoot at kris/kirdus and even if we choose to shoot at them no matter how high your stat you miss
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Y-you would bring a bow in your wedding night? 
oops sorry didn’t read the update yet
might I ask why an early one? if you don’t mind?
it’s not that I don’t like it just that why change the schedule…
2 reasons.
- @IronRaptor’s son had an early bd.
- To have more content in the next update on Aug.20
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Nice work with the update. But now I’m stressing even more about the choices xD And wondering why Queen Victoria hatin’ over playing with Sera xDD @Centralrouge I bet you’re squee’ing in delight over there at the sheer detail in the archery scene xD
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Mistake I found(I advice to bookmark it):
- "My father used to hum this to me when I was a child. He would hug me and carress my head, while humming this song.
caress
- "Keep your bow arm’s elbow rotated straight up.
“Alright, you see that bullseye over there? Shoot it now.”
There should " after up.
- Stand upright and with tension and with a flat back and dipped chest.
I found that weird that there two “and with”
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I don’t know if it just me or not, why it’s suddenly skip to age 14 in middle of choosing to have 5 point?(I unsure about this)
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You have no weapon! The mysterious woman stab you with the pommel of her dagger. You pass out.
But I bring sword
And pretty sure mc already die if stabbed
P.s there might be more
My comment:
His mind comes back, and sees you holding his hand. He quickly gets his hand back, as if, scared for affection.
Poor marxus 
She is just another woman to conquer.
Nice choice 
I feel like the conversation between king andus and queen victoria is based on the musketeers and @Nightgazer
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JEBUS FLIPPING CHRIST I WAKE UP TO 559 NEW REPLIES!!! 
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You know it
Oh i see what is happening here,it is alright to bring a sword. But a bow ? Out of the question P.S I am joking i don’t care
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REALLY? Sh*t, I didn’t do that one. *runs back to check.
PS. @Sophia “as if scared for affection” Maybe it’s just me, but shouldn’t it be of? Maybe you confused with ‘starved for affection.’
Still early and I should fall back to sleep. I saw a few typos on the branch that I played. (Some were mentioned earlier.)
I also saw a few typos on my fan fiction that may be my fault. Also missing some punctuation and the type setting didn’t work for the poem.
Courtyard scene looked familiar…
Archery game may need some cleaning up, but too tired to Grammar Nazi atm.
New content! Huzzah!
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Nobles usually bring their swords for protection. Having a bow while wearing a robe is too weird!
Has 20% magic stat.
Has 15% arrow stat.
“What kind of person would you like to marry?”
“An archer? I don’t know.”
Are you kidding me Melissa? Why won’t you admire my magical prowess?
@Vattena
Oh? Do tell me why do you think that is, and where can I find this scene?
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Lord knows what he would be using for a quiver unless you can magically conjure arrows…
@Sophia i like the update but on a side note… you have still not finished the tournament and sparring vs andus? the update finish the same as before ( when you meet clithus )
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Yeah it was just a idea xD
Ahah, yeah, I get what you mean. You mean the way they’re talking, right? But it makes sense to talk like that in the setting they’re on
@Nightgazer you have to follow the King and Queen after he engages Marxus and Melissa. And she means the way they’re talking
@Centralrouge and if you have a high archery stat Melissa will call you ‘an archer’. Official recognition xD
Um… There isn’t a spar scene with King Andus. 
PS. And yeah, haven’t made a progress with Clithus’ conversation.
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