5955

You can always search around the forum and internet for that, you may even can ask us. Want me to search around for the link?

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5956

Thank you, if you’re not busy… then please. Thanks. :slight_smile:

5957

Or just tell me who fights who, what kind of weapons are available (and allowed to use), the general skill of the sparring party, and what kind of special events/scenes you want to include

:eyeglasses:

But first thing first, let me read your story, first. :eyes:
(Yes, I haven’t click the link since from the beginning)

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5958

I’m facing my greatest challenge of all time - writing fighting scenes… Clithus would be fighting with the mc. Clithus would use her longsword, while the mc would choose whatever weapon he wishes.

I kinda knew since I can’t remember a time when you asked about something whenever I update.

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5959

:sweat_smile:

*runs away
:running_man: :fog:

5960

Don’t worry. I didn’t read your WiP, I just chose the choices that seemed right. :+1: We’re even.

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5961

I already share this one but it’s probably buried

This and this maybe also can help you, will post more if I found a good ones.

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5962

Hrrr… Okay :triumph:
I’ll read your WIP to the end and I will win :fist:t4:

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5963

Oi! @MAppolo how are you my brother in arms long time no see… we are in a (temp?) Alliance with Sophia Church hope it’s not a problem squire …

5964

for example:

you put your sword up meeting the sword of andus before the sparring starts,
andus is the first one to swing his sword first but you move fast and block it mid air before letting go and move to his right, you play with the hilt girating the sword with a move of your hand and smirk at andus… he furiously swing his sword in a horizontal cut with both hands , you dodge his sword by positioning your right leg as if you were going to kneel, the sword of andus pass you very close and fast, you use that moment to take advantage moving your sword for a vertical cut, andus is fast blocking your sword but you are faster and counter with a upper cut hitting him in his chest. if this were a real fight he whould be death by now but it seems his pride is not letting him end this sparring and he atacks you again moving his sword from the side to low, you block, he swing to your left arm, you block again and move close to him… he kicks you with his right leg in your stomach and you fall to the ground…

kinda like this (if it were the scene of aria vs bryenne, you can guess where i stoped writing right? xD )

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5965

You got this from Arya vs. Brienne. :joy:

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5966

of couse, you can use fights in series and write them with your words… :smiley:
pretty sure you can make some awesome scene seeing some sword fightings scene and writing it.

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5967

A lot. See David and Goliath…

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5968

i myself prefer a certain young woman vs an undead beast :scream:

atleast goliath can die…

5969

Would you at least have two or more lovers in the story if given the chance?

(The people who voted are hidden to avoid being hunted down by the RO warleaders.)

  • Yes
  • No

0 voters

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5970

imagines the scenario now

Clithus and Sophia both invite you to bed…

Ends up chained to the bedposts and abandoned like Geralt in Witcher 3.

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5971

Meh! I don’t think it’ll be much of a problem since they were just fooling around and also promised to not repeat it but it’s good as even the one’s portraying to be faithful to one can vote truthfully

(I’m a heretic at heart too)

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5972

Yeah haha :laughing: Saw that scene in YouTube.

5973

Testing… @MockTurtle you here? If you can see this message, @Sophia is asking when your birthday is.

Btw, just found out the mockturtle was the first one to like the thread. Gotta give love to him. :slight_smile:

Also gonna ask @Vattena’s birthday for having the most liked given to @Sophia.

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5974

@Sophia
I found a realistic sword fighting that may also can help when writing sword fighting scene

I can’t even imagine how this going to work if mc two lover is princess Sophia and Melissa…

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