Kingdoms: Embers In Ashes[WIP] [OLD VERSION]

Yes but I do not think people will go to believe the story of “now the king is a better person” and you can give them everything they want but they will continue to see you as a calm before the storm

Pd: well I have to go for a while I go to a birthday, we will continue this, see ya!

Well i mean, at least the king said he is a better person, the hypothetical abusive lord hasn’t even done that.

UPDATE:

Hurray! There’s an update! But first, look at this;

Summary

Sorry. :joy::joy::joy:

There is no update. Just a troll and a spoiler.

“Just like we practiced.” He says, and then spreads his arms like he is welcoming you. “Now, show me your steps to becoming a man!” He chuckles.

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When you think there is an update on National Chocolate Chip Cookie day. :sob: ALLLLLLL BYYYYYYY MYYYYSEEEEEELLLFFFF.

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HA HA HA HA

I am enjoying this… :smirk:

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That’s heartless af…

I’m just glad this forum was made AFTER April Fools (If you celebrate it in Philippines, but I’m guessing you don’t)

We celebrate April Fools, but I never had a chance fooling someone last April. :smirk: So, yeah. That’s the reason why I trolled you guys now.

Good thing it is still August.

That was MEAN!!!… and hilarious. :laughing:

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How do you feel about James Moriarty? (Keep in mind that fiction usually has some basisin truth)

Are you writing a part where mc still little?

Yeah. I’m basically revising/polishing the story this week.

Considering there still characters that mc actually can be close to in his childhood, it is necessary. Feel free to tell us anytime if you struggle with some scene

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Yeah, I plan to add more Marxus (To stop the Marxus Hate), Melissa, Javier and Queen Vicky scenes.

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I used to like Marxus. Then I saw his pony tail. Is there anyway to cut it off?

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Yep necessary,

Especially this

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Men grow their hair when they turn 20, then cut it when they turn 25.

I’m… not sure why there is any Marxus hate, to be fair. I mean, what little presence he had, he was… okay? I certainly don’t remember him kicking a puppy, or anything. So sure, he “stole” the Mc prospective wife, but it seems he had as little control as the MC on that event - and didn’t seem particularly pleased by the prospect, from what I could tell.

I mean, maybe I’ll grow to hate him later in the story, who knows, but right now? He’s fine.

Why they hate Marxus;

  • He has Melissa.
  • They think he will betray the mc.
  • They want to be king.
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